|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:41 pm
Yeah I will scrap
my last two and make more >.<
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:46 pm
I'm very bad at judging how the techniques should be ranked so...
Tech. 1
Character: Braith Didrika
Technique Name: Kana Ayuka: Swordfish
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description: The user holds their arm out, holding it completely still. Then with a quick flick of their elbow that whips the arm outward sharply, the user strikes his opponent in the face or neck. The blow should stun or cause breathing distress to his opponent.
Tech. 2
Character: Braith Didrika
Technique Name: Kana Ayuka: Eel
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: When being attacked either by sword or a taijutsu movement that involves a forward thrust of the leg or arm, users will step forward to confront the attacker. Wrapping the opposite arm around the enemies leg/arm will bind them allowing the second move which requires the legs of the user. Pulling at the arm, the user will wrap one leg around the enemies neck and pull themselves upward, forcing the enemies arm up towards the head. This will allow the user to headlock the enemy.
Tech. 3
Character: Braith Didrika
Technique Name: Kana Ayuka: Cuttlefish
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description: User will rush the enemy and twist at the last moment, flipping in the air. Legs will wrap around the enemies chest and the user will attempt to crush their opponent’s lungs. Hands are left free so that they can fend off attacks.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:00 pm
They look fine to me ... but how are you doing to reconnect your bones after dislocating them? > .>
I mean ... the elbow doesn't have a socket.
It won't pop back into place.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:07 pm
Misujage They look fine to me ... but how are you doing to reconnect your bones after dislocating them? > .>
I mean ... the elbow doesn't have a socket.
It won't pop back into place.
As for reconnecting them...its easy if you have a high tolerance for pain o.o the limb would be slightly numb for some time, weakening its use.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:14 pm
No you cannot pop your elbow back into place.
Now you can pop your shoulder back into place, but not your elbow~
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:19 pm
Misujage No you cannot pop your elbow back into place.
Now you can pop your shoulder back into place, but not your elbow~
Would that get me approved on that particular?
smile
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:20 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:21 pm
Changed smile Thanks, Misu.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:00 pm
Character: Makoto Nagano
Technique Name: Reitō Buresu (Frozen Breath)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hyouton
Description: After performing the necessary seals, Makoto opens his mouth and releases a stream of icy chakra cold enough to freeze his opponent solid.
Character: Makoto Nagano
Technique Name: Muhyojona Kori-Dama (Impervious Ice Sphere)
Rank: B
Type: Bloodline/Ninjutsu
Element: Hyouton
Description: A performing a chain of hand seals Makoto will create a fortified dome of ice around his opponent, or as used in most cases around himself. The ice is as strong on the inside as it is the outside, requiring the use of techniques 1 rank higher to penetrate the dome on both sides. [Requires a large amount of existing ice]
Character: Makoto Nagano
Technique Name: Moso no Jotai (State of Paranoia)
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A strange form of illusion created by Makoto that renders victim in a state of complete paranoia. The victim will feel a constant pressure exuded on them like the enemy is at their every turn, forcing them to lose the ability to rationalize out of fear. The victim feels as if their senses have been sharpened, sight, sound, touch, etc. all seemingly elevated to a staggering peak. Because of this they are more susceptible to deception than ever, as even mundane happenings like a breeze may become exaggerated and easily interpreted as an enemy attack. Activated through eye contact.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:47 am
[ Frozen Breath ]
Either make its effect a little weaker than "freezing them solid", or boost it up a rank.
[ Ice Sphere ]
Approved.
[ Paranoia ]
So, what's the trigger? =/
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:51 pm
Character:Satoshi Hatake
Technique Name: Zatoichi's Senses
Rank: D
Type: Maruton
Element: N/A
Description: After years of ninja training, the five senses have become acute. By removing one of the senses, one can further increase the others. This is a passive technique that activates once one of the senses are obstructed. This technique allows for the user to continue on without the use of the obstructed sense, relying on the other senses. The user would be able to perform any action as if unaffected.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:58 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:28 pm
Shinsua [ Frozen Breath ]
Either make its effect a little weaker than "freezing them solid", or boost it up a rank.
[ Ice Sphere ]
Approved.
[ Paranoia ]
So, what's the trigger? =/
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:44 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:08 am
Character: Jack Harren Snipe
Technique Name: Scattering of the Ash
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Non Element
Description: This jutsu is extremely odd, for when others see it in action they immediately think it is a Genjutsu. By forming two handseals, the Rat and then the Tiger, at the user's discretion their body will scatter into flaming ash that will slowly burn away to nothing. Now, this is why others think it is a Genjutsu and a misdirection jutsu, though the truth is far different. It is a teleportation jutsu. The location of arrival must be chosen before the jutsu is activated, and in that location ash will fall in a small cloud, which will then reform into the user. This jutsu cannot be used inside of combat except to escape. The distance of teleportation is 5 miles per rank of the user, so a genin = 5 miles, chunin = 10 miles, etc.
There are more on the way, but this is the first. I'm aware that the distance might be extreme, so I defer to your judgment.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
