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 Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:25 pm
I believe it was actually in italics when I posted, I just quickly C&P'd my actual post though. Thanks for the tips biggrin
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:18 pm
I want to improve my ability to add in those little unnecessary yet delicious details that draw the reader in. That and I want to be more quit witted... I've never done this before so I'm afraid I may not know what to say at times sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:20 pm
XziqueX Hmm... Maybe something like this.
Zique drew out his sword and slashed at his opponent. He then spun swiftly behind him and slashed behind him.
Okay, that's crappy. But something like that. When I attack I always use the word "slash". I know there are other words like cut, wound, injure or something but somehow I always end up using SLASH. Maybe I just got used to it or something. I find that when this happens to me and I repeat the same word over, I use an online thesaurus to help me out and give me a new perspective.
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:34 pm
So you want t learn how to put more detail into your writing. Do you mean like, writing out how your character does something, or adding more fluff?
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:26 am
I guess a little bit of both. Unfortunately, I won't know exactly how I perform until I do it. I'm not even sure where to start neutral
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:53 am
Would you like to join me in a 1x1 RP? Through that I can do my best to help you figure out what you want to improve at and how you want to do it.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:51 pm
Sure, that would be good! I hope I don't embarrass myself too much sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:17 pm
Lol, would you like to do it through PMs or shall I make a RP in the Learner's Role-plays sub-forum?
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:00 am
Hmmm which do you think would be better? I suppose I don't really mind either way ^_^ *Thanks for your patience. The Demonbusters got ahold of me* blaugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:37 pm
It just depends if you want the critique to be publicly viewable or not.
Lol, it's all good. zOMG! Just got me so I've been doing that for the past week. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:59 am
You know, I guess we can do it in the forums. That way, maybe other members will see it and learn something or get the courage to try.
Yeah, I was playing ZOMG! yesterday for quite a while...
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:14 pm
Alrighty. Shall we brain storm in PMs?
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:52 pm
All I want too learn,well basically is too make my post more...interesting,I can write up too one good paragraph,then Pfftb,nothing else...
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:26 pm
Blah, I need help lengthening and making my writing more interesting. I can write well, but when it comes to RP's I get so nervous about the other person I can muster so little. > w <
Also detail.
I need detail help.
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 4:15 am
I'd like to learn how to add in more detail into my posts, so then I'll be able to write more. The most I can do right now is about three paragraphs, but I'd like to know how to write more, but with more detail, whether it be unneccassary or neccessary detail :3
So basically, I'd like help to make more detail, and help to be able to write more :'D
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