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 Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:13 am
Misujage [ Azeiel ] Why would a Katon user be weak against a Doton user?
Wouldn't Suiton be the element that trumps him? It seems so in my eyes, you may keep the Doton weakness just thought I would add that.
Atop that your weight attribute will have to be removed. You are bloodline class, there is no reason you should exceed a Tai or Bukijutsu user because you feel the need to wear weights.
I'll discuss the Katon attribute with Shane, but as for now your profile is Denied
I went ahead and made several changes to the profile. Also with the weakness to earth jutsu, I was trying to tie that into his fear of being buried alive but I will change it for you. I changed the second attribute so that he can keep up with a tai/buki user with the weights off.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:02 am
Fears can be taken as weaknesses, but it's not really one.
I believe I did say the weight attribute is to be removed. You are not to be on par with a Tai or Bukijutsu user. One because you are Bloodline Class and two your Bloodline is a Dojutsu.
A dojutsu that can very well copy the speed of a user they see. Beyond that your strength will not be the same, it's not feasible.
So I will ask once more that it be removed in its entirety.
Thank you for lowering the post reduction on your Katon ability, though still no weights.
Denied
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:18 pm
Alrighty give me a sec and I will change it. I have to admit I was unaware that the Sharingan gave increased your speed. I was under the impression that It gave you the ability to see your opponents motions thus allowing you to counter them.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:39 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kein Uchiha
Nickname: The Dragon Of The North
Age: 19
Birthdate: 02/25
Gender: Male
Height:6' 0"
Weight: 189
Nindo: "Until I Draw My Final Breath "
Personality: Kien is nothing if not loyal. He is loyal to his friends, to his village, and to himself. He will gladly lay down his life if the order is given. He is a very honorable man and will refuse to attack an unprepared opponent.
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Uchiha/ Sharingan (Inactive)
Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Color: Emerald
Chakra Element: Fire, Wind
Strengths:
• Close Range Combat ( hand to hand and blade to blade)
• Fire Jutsu's
Weaknesses:
• Water Jutsu
• Long Range Combat
Fears:
• Being Buried Alive
• Pretty Women ( He is a sucker for a pretty face mrgreen )
Attributes:
• Katon Master: Learns Katon Jutsu 1[one] post faster
• Strong Upper Body: Kien has a very muscular upper body. This allows his to wield larger weapons without the normal problems of fighting the momentum and size of the weapons.
Class Attribute:
• Learn Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster
• C. Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両
AC:
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Broadsword
Weapon Range: Seven feet (Five for blade length, two for arm reach)
Weapon Weight: Twenty pounds.
Weapon Location: In a holster on his lower back
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Fuuma Shurikan x1
• Exploding Tags x4
• Shuriken x10
• Kunai x15
•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Katon
•
Fuuton
•
Bloodline:
•
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Kien Uchiha , A Boy that Became Shinobi:
Kien grew up in the mist village with his mother and father, both of them being shinobi. His mother was a medical ninja that spent much of her time in the hospital treating the wounded and his father was a low ranked Chuunin of the village. Kien had just recently joined the cloud village academy, though his father has done his best to help train him a bit in preparation for his academy training. To his father's pleasure Kien had shown an aptitude for performing Katon elemental jutsus.
(As always more is on the way mrgreen )
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:58 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name:Kazuki Yamato
Nickname: Kazi
Age:17
Birthdate:November 4
Gender:Male
Height:6'1
Weight:175
Nindo:What doesnt kill you makes you stronger
Personality razz layful,entergetic, sarcastic, he becomes serious in bad situations. He can be stubborn somtimes and always listens to his gut, Which can get him way over his head at times.
Village:Cloud Village
Rank:Genin
Class:Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Chakra Pool:200
Chakra Color:Yellow
Chakra Element:Lightning and wind
Strengths:Charms,and mixing ninjustu tequniques with his blade
Weaknesses:Acrobatics(doing flips) and has a worse reaction to poision than most people would
Fears:Being sick
Attributes:Speed and stamina Moderatly increased
Class Attribute:• Learn Bukijutsu [1] Post Faster
• C. Attribute - Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo:0
AC:0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type:Blade
Weapon Range:5'1
Weapon Weight: 35 pounds
Weapon Location:The sealth on his back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu
• Kawarimi no Jutsu
• Bushin no Jutsu
• Suimen Hokou no Waza
• Kinobori no Waza
• Kai
Primary Element
• Ration
Secondary Element
•Fuuton
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Kazuki was always a cheerful kid, even after his parents death at he age of 14. His mother had a disease and his father died doing a mission within the same year. But even after those two events he was still the same kid.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 1:15 pm
I see no issues your good to go brother.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 1:41 pm
Do you have to start at your village?
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:17 pm
Yes indeed you do mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:10 pm
[ Azeiel ] The Sharingan does not give you increased speed, but much like the jutsu you can break down and copy. You can also copy your opponent's speed.
Nevertheless Approved
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:20 pm
So your saying like if I am fighting a high speed person while I have my sharingan active I will be as fast as them right.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:23 pm
You would copy the speed during that fight but won't be able to use it until later.
That being said you must also realize moving beyond your character's means would cause them a quicker exhaustion.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:39 pm
Yes I understand that by my estimates it would be an increase in fatigue equal to the increase in speed. Brighter the burning candle faster it burns out kinda thing.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:57 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:01 pm
I told ya brother re-post your profile mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:04 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Raiden Walker Aburame
Nickname: Walker
Age: 16
Birthdate: May 22
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 170
Nindo: "Underestimation leads to death"
Personality: Calm and collective, he doesnt talk much but is generally easy to get along with. He's more intelligent for the observant way of life.
Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Swarming Nature - Aburame Clan
Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Element: Fire, Earth
Strengths:
• Tracking
• Genjutsu resistance
Weaknesses:
• medical/ Taijutsu
• His overbearing mind - he tends to over think every detail of an assault, and then something can happen that totally messes it up.
Fears:
• His tactics being beaten
• Blood
Attributes:
• Unsurprised l speed moderately increased l
• Capable l 2 additional ninjutsu slots l
Class Attribute:
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 1 foot 5 inches
Weapon Weight: three pounds
Weapon Location: along his waist in the back.
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 1 fuuma shurikan
• Flak Jacket
• 14 Shuriken
• 15 Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Katon
•
Doton
•
Bloodline
•
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|M y - L i f e|├▬
Academy - Raiden attended the academy for a while, but passed quickly two years after. He'd stayed genin in order to improve himself. He'd been given his tanto by his father for his 14th birthday. His dad generally taught him how to fight with insects, but Raiden always seemed to be connected to them anyway.
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