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 Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:00 am
OK, thank you for your patience and help
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:16 am
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:52 am
Character: Katon Namida
Technique Name: Maruton: Propulsion technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: The user concentrates their chakra flow in their legs, then manipulating it into a spiral. As the amount of chakra in the legs builds up, it spreads past the body, continuing the spiral formation, causing the person to be propelled forwards. Primary uses for this jutsu are running faster, relative gliding, and swimming very fast. Requires C rank amount of chakra each post it is used. Gliding, the slowest of these movements, allows the user to carry himself in the air, with a slow rate of decent.
Character: Katon
Technique Name: Immortality mirror
Rank: S (i know I can't learn this yet)
Type: Genjutsu
Duration 6 posts (Genjutsu standard)
Description: Katon waves his right hand in the line of sight of his opponent to entrap them in this genjutsu. This genjutsu disables the opponents ability to feel pain, and makes them feel incredibly stronger. This causes them to push themselves beyond what they normally could, exhausting and stunning them when the genjutsu ends. If the victim of the genjutsu is injured, then the injury will become much more severe as they fight under the genjutsu.
Light cuts will simply result in additional bleeding. Cuts over 3/4ths of an inch deep will tear into moderate wounds. Larger scale injuries(Deep wounds) will worsen into severe injuries. This only works on existing wounds on the persons body, because it dampens their awareness of these wounds. The victims of this genjutsu will be aware of any injuries they encur while under it. Wounds will worsen only once. so Light cuts cannot become moderate wounds, cuts 3/4 an inch cannot become severe injuries.
(I hope this revision is satisfactory)
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:23 pm
Winterwolf78
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
Absolute no to the attribute-stealing. And how does he assimilate a jutsu instead of chakra/blood?
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:26 pm
ImKotsu
Character: Katon Namida
Technique Name: Maruton: Propulsion technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: The user concentrates their chakra flow in their legs, then manipulating it into a spiral. As the amount of chakra in the legs builds up, it spreads past the body, continuing the spiral formation, causing the person to be propelled forwards. Primary uses for this jutsu are running faster, relative gliding, and swimming very fast. Requires C rank amount of chakra each post it is used. Gliding, the slowest of these movements, allows the user to carry himself in the air, with a slow rate of decent.
Character: Katon
Technique Name: Immortality mirror
Rank: S (i know I can't learn this yet)
Type: Genjutsu
Duration 6 posts (Genjutsu standard)
Description: Katon waves his right hand in the line of sight of his opponent to entrap them in this genjutsu. This genjutsu disables the opponents ability to feel pain, and makes them feel incredibly stronger. This causes them to push themselves beyond what they normally could, exhausting and stunning them when the genjutsu ends. If the victim of the genjutsu is injured, then the injury will become much more severe as they fight under the genjutsu.
Light cuts will simply result in additional bleeding. Cuts over 3/4ths of an inch deep will tear into moderate wounds. Larger scale injuries(Deep wounds) will worsen into severe injuries. This only works on existing wounds on the persons body, because it dampens their awareness of these wounds. The victims of this genjutsu will be aware of any injuries they encur while under it. Wounds will worsen only once. so Light cuts cannot become moderate wounds, cuts 3/4 an inch cannot become severe injuries.
(I hope this revision is satisfactory) The second one has a contridiction. How do they feel pain if injured under the genjutsu if said genjutsu cancels pain? Also, how do the wounds auto-worsen, or does it mess with your perception of said injury? Propulsion Technique is approved.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:36 pm
Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
Absolute no to the attribute-stealing. And how does he assimilate a jutsu instead of chakra/blood? ok. I thought Jutsu stealing would be more serious than the attribute stealing. Max already has an attribute that lets him gain chakra from consuming blood. by adding chakra he sorts the dna and chakra signature. He then sorts it to get the jutsu memories. what was it you said? Magic its easier to rationalize it as magic. but seriously through chakra manipulation. I have no idea how to explain chakra manipulation. Its a chakra vampire power, cause Max is a chakra vampire.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:42 pm
Winterwolf78 Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
Absolute no to the attribute-stealing. And how does he assimilate a jutsu instead of chakra/blood? ok. I thought Jutsu stealing would be more serious than the attribute stealing. Max already has an attribute that lets him gain chakra from consuming blood. by adding chakra he sorts the dna and chakra signature. He then sorts it to get the jutsu memories. what was it you said? Magic its easier to rationalize it as magic. but seriously through chakra manipulation. I have no idea how to explain chakra manipulation. Its a chakra vampire power, cause Max is a chakra vampire. The attribute thing can become a serious problem, considering who you target. You could as easily steal an Uchiha members affinity for Katon, or whatever. Jutsu stealing is fine, as it's just one jutsu and unless you have room for it, you don't get it/it's above your level/whatever. And it's only once per victim, so you won't be gaining an insane amount of jutsu per person. Baw, goddamn magic. A DOUBLE-EDGED SWORD. Go ahead, approved as long as you add that you can only assimilate jutsu of your level, and only once per person.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:51 pm
Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78 Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
Absolute no to the attribute-stealing. And how does he assimilate a jutsu instead of chakra/blood? ok. I thought Jutsu stealing would be more serious than the attribute stealing. Max already has an attribute that lets him gain chakra from consuming blood. by adding chakra he sorts the dna and chakra signature. He then sorts it to get the jutsu memories. what was it you said? Magic its easier to rationalize it as magic. but seriously through chakra manipulation. I have no idea how to explain chakra manipulation. Its a chakra vampire power, cause Max is a chakra vampire. The attribute thing can become a serious problem, considering who you target. You could as easily steal an Uchiha members affinity for Katon, or whatever. Jutsu stealing is fine, as it's just one jutsu and unless you have room for it, you don't get it/it's above your level/whatever. And it's only once per victim, so you won't be gaining an insane amount of jutsu per person. Baw, goddamn magic. A DOUBLE-EDGED SWORD. Go ahead, approved as long as you add that you can only assimilate jutsu of your level, and only once per person. Oh I meant one of the custom attributes like "strength slightly increased" not stuff like that. And the Uchiha would not benefit me much lol. would the option of a single attribute boost be acceptable. It would be a waste to start chewing on somebody and have all there crap suck. Something like this? Character: Maxwell Uchiha Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu, Element: Maruton Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates a jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.This can only be jutsu that Max can perform. Max can also put the bloods energy into boosting a single attribute slightly for 8 post
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:02 pm
Winterwolf78 Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78 Anonymous_Alcoholic Winterwolf78
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates an attribute or jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.
Absolute no to the attribute-stealing. And how does he assimilate a jutsu instead of chakra/blood? ok. I thought Jutsu stealing would be more serious than the attribute stealing. Max already has an attribute that lets him gain chakra from consuming blood. by adding chakra he sorts the dna and chakra signature. He then sorts it to get the jutsu memories. what was it you said? Magic its easier to rationalize it as magic. but seriously through chakra manipulation. I have no idea how to explain chakra manipulation. Its a chakra vampire power, cause Max is a chakra vampire. The attribute thing can become a serious problem, considering who you target. You could as easily steal an Uchiha members affinity for Katon, or whatever. Jutsu stealing is fine, as it's just one jutsu and unless you have room for it, you don't get it/it's above your level/whatever. And it's only once per victim, so you won't be gaining an insane amount of jutsu per person. Baw, goddamn magic. A DOUBLE-EDGED SWORD. Go ahead, approved as long as you add that you can only assimilate jutsu of your level, and only once per person. Oh I meant one of the custom attributes like "strength slightly increased" not stuff like that. And the Uchiha would not benefit me much lol. would the option of a single attribute boost be acceptable. It would be a waste to start chewing on somebody and have all there crap suck. Something like this? Character: Maxwell Uchiha Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu, Element: Maruton Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates a jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.This can only be jutsu that Max can perform. Max can also put the bloods energy into boosting a single attribute slightly for 8 postEh, still iffy on boosting attributes. Slash it down to five and we're good.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:27 pm
Technique Name: Vampiric Chakra Assimilation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Maruton
Description: adding Chakra into the mix instead of gaining it Max consumes a fair amount of a opponents blood (two post worth of draining) and assimilates a jutsu from the drained shinobi.This can only be done once to the same victim.This can only be jutsu that Max can perform. Max can also put the bloods energy into boosting a single attribute slightly for 5 post
done
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:18 am
Anonymous_Alcoholic ImKotsu
Character: Katon Namida
Technique Name: Maruton: Propulsion technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: The user concentrates their chakra flow in their legs, then manipulating it into a spiral. As the amount of chakra in the legs builds up, it spreads past the body, continuing the spiral formation, causing the person to be propelled forwards. Primary uses for this jutsu are running faster, relative gliding, and swimming very fast. Requires C rank amount of chakra each post it is used. Gliding, the slowest of these movements, allows the user to carry himself in the air, with a slow rate of decent.
Character: Katon
Technique Name: Immortality mirror
Rank: S (i know I can't learn this yet)
Type: Genjutsu
Duration 6 posts (Genjutsu standard)
Description: Katon waves his right hand in the line of sight of his opponent to entrap them in this genjutsu. This genjutsu disables the opponents ability to feel pain, and makes them feel incredibly stronger.
This causes them to push themselves beyond what they normally could, exhausting and stunning them when the genjutsu ends. If the victim of the genjutsu is injured, then the injury will become much more severe as they fight under the genjutsu.
Light cuts will simply result in additional bleeding. Cuts over 3/4ths of an inch deep will tear into moderate wounds. Larger scale injuries(Deep wounds) will worsen into severe injuries. This only works on existing wounds on the persons body, because it dampens their awareness of these wounds. The victims of this genjutsu will be aware of any injuries they encur while under it. Wounds will worsen only once. so Light cuts cannot become moderate wounds, cuts 3/4 an inch cannot become severe injuries.
(I hope this revision is satisfactory) The second one has a contridiction. How do they feel pain if injured under the genjutsu if said genjutsu cancels pain? Also, how do the wounds auto-worsen, or does it mess with your perception of said injury? Propulsion Technique is approved. The wounds worsen as the person fights under the genjutsu, because as genjutsu disables their ability to feel pain, they will push their bodies beyond what they could under normal circumstances. And I didn't say they felt pain under the genjutsu, I said they were aware of new injuries they recieved. If someone were to get stabbed while under the genjutsu, they would still know they were stabbed even if they didn't feel it. Also this doesn't automatically happen, I was simply told to add an example of what the genjutsu could do. Character: Katon
Technique Name: Immortality mirror
Rank: S (i know I can't learn this yet)
Type: Genjutsu
Duration 6 posts (Genjutsu standard)
Description: Katon waves his right hand in the line of sight of his opponent to entrap them in this genjutsu. This genjutsu disables the opponents ability to feel pain, and makes them feel incredibly stronger.
This causes them to push themselves beyond what they normally could, worsening their injuries while exhausting and stunning them when the genjutsu ends, and causing any . If the victim of the genjutsu is injured, then the injury will become much more severe as they fight under the genjutsu.
As they fight under the genjutsu their wounds will worsen. Light cuts will simply result in additional bleeding. Cuts over 3/4ths of an inch deep will tear into moderate wounds. Larger scale injuries(Deep wounds) will worsen into severe injuries. This only works on existing wounds on the persons body, because it dampens their awareness of these wounds. The victims of this genjutsu will be aware of any injuries they encur while under it. Wounds will worsen only once. so Light cuts cannot become moderate wounds, cuts 3/4 an inch cannot become severe injuries
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:18 pm
Lord Edegaru Reaper ElyseDisplaced Sense- First, explain how a smell would feel or a sight be heard.
sight being herd is pretty much extending your sight into the full range of sound but you're sight loses it's attention for detail direct light related sight would give anyone, think more of a echolocated look on the world where colors aren't there but shapes and movement are perceived. In this inverse it would be come like narrowing your hearing but elongating the range and attention to detail of what's with in you're visual as you use it. So as to say you may see someone moving their lips but normally you can't read them, your mind would work out the kinks and communicate into you with out you really need to learn that skill in the normal way. This particular use can come in handy when trying to hear something from a distance with out any bugging devices really though that's a for instance, you loose something of you proper understanding of your surroundings and moving trough the world with this upside down mixture is what needs to be trained into the ninja who might use it for it's personal use.
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Just bumping this so I can get this answered and understood how the Jutsu works. Which I'll repost...
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Haikiryou kankaku [Displaced Sense]
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Description: (with use of proper hand signs and any contact with the individual on the plain of the five senses can this be performed) This ability can use knowledge of the chakra channels of the mind to confuse ones senses with one another. Making the relived oran responsible for this sense transmit one of the five sense to the wrong neural receptor making one see sound, or feel a smell. This technique can work to confuse and or aid a fighter who has a failing sensory organ and have another that better works at it's job fill in and insist to improve this senses use in the user. Playing both a benefit and deteriorating role the strength of this Jutsu is according to how fast one can adapt to having your eyes perception of light make you smell that light (imagination can fit in here as to what light may smell like to ones minds perception) instead of properly seeing it and seeing what abstraction of sight visually seeing smells would hold. In terms of switching any sense with sight, the visual seen will become some surreal abstraction of what lengths that organ perceives the world unlike sight. This can further divert pain into a bad smell or sharp defining sound. Last for two turns
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:03 am
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Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: B
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Any word/ruling on the approval of this technique?
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:03 am
Character: Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Hardcore thread style
Rank: null. Each rank must be trained seperatly.
Type: Bloodline
Description: The user focuses chakra into their tendrils and make them harden, causing the tendrils to harden like steel. This gives the user added striking damage/defense for [x]turns. The Iron like Tendrils are as strong meaning that they cannot be cut by a simple blade, yet are flexible as wire. It requires a buki/ninjutsu rank equal to the rank of this technique to cut the threads.
e=1 post duration, d=2, c=4, b=8, a=16, S=20 S+=25
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:53 pm
Reaper Elyse- Sorry but that jutsu is completely impractical, and too vague to understand.
Yo-Ko- Having anyone poisoned by simply touching you is not bad but having it active all the time is a no go. Also, having it travel through speech and weapons is too much. Venom usually has to enter the bloodstream or if it is acidic, it slowly tears away at flesh.
As for the Hardcore thread style, you have to elaborate on how much added damage and defense it gains, specifically.
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