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 Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 5:57 pm
am I approved for posting?
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:06 pm
Ash Acheron am I approved for posting? I think for the most part yes. But if wraith say to change something then do so please.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:28 pm
Wells_Falls Ash Acheron am I approved for posting? I think for the most part yes. But if wraith say to change something then do so please. ok. I wont do anything too crazy till I hear from Wraith then
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:38 pm
Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:42 pm
Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok, I'll take it out. I didn't want to seem over powered and until I get a feel for other players I don't want to add new powers. I'm still learning how online Rp worlds and balancing a character.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:43 pm
Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok, I'll take it out. I didn't want to seem over powered and until I get a feel for other players I don't want to add new powers. I'm still learning how online Rp worlds and balancing a character. Take it out? There's no reason to take anything out. If anything I'm saying to make yourself stronger.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:44 pm
Wraith1993 Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok, I'll take it out. I didn't want to seem over powered and until I get a feel for other players I don't want to add new powers. I'm still learning how online Rp worlds and balancing a character. Take it out? There's no reason to take anything out. If anything I'm saying to make yourself stronger. Are you sure? Ok then. but it will take time to think about.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:49 pm
Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok, I'll take it out. I didn't want to seem over powered and until I get a feel for other players I don't want to add new powers. I'm still learning how online Rp worlds and balancing a character. Take it out? There's no reason to take anything out. If anything I'm saying to make yourself stronger. Are you sure? Ok then. but it will take time to think about. Your an Elder, Elders are supposed to be powerful. Here's an easy one, you can give multi-word commands to people. Except suicide and other self destructive commands. And almost anything you can think of. I'll check it to make sure it's balanced.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 6:52 pm
Wraith1993 Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok, I'll take it out. I didn't want to seem over powered and until I get a feel for other players I don't want to add new powers. I'm still learning how online Rp worlds and balancing a character. Take it out? There's no reason to take anything out. If anything I'm saying to make yourself stronger. Are you sure? Ok then. but it will take time to think about. Your an Elder, Elders are supposed to be powerful. Here's an easy one, you can give multi-word commands to people. Except suicide and other self destructive commands. And almost anything you can think of. I'll check it to make sure it's balanced. kk
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:06 pm
Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok finished rewriting.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:23 pm
Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok finished rewriting. Looks good, but I still don't get why they would lock him in Alaska. It's the Invictus. They wouldn't bother expending resources to send you to Alaska. They would lock you up local with no blood and leave you in torpor or they would just kill you. And I see nothing to fear if it's one day unleashed. Unless your such a loose cannon you might break the Masquerade beyond repair, then I would be afraid.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:27 pm
Wraith1993 Ash Acheron Wraith1993 Still not quite getting the isolation bit. Who isolated you in Alaska? Why? Why didn't they just kill you or exile you elsewhere? And while how you use your power is important, if all you can do is one word commands then your kinda limited. They aren't very pressing matters, but they do have some importance. Other than that I don't see much of a problem. ok finished rewriting. Looks good, but I still don't get why they would lock him in Alaska. It's the Invictus. They wouldn't bother expending resources to send you to Alaska. They would lock you up local with no blood and leave you in torpor or they would just kill you. And I see nothing to fear if it's one day unleashed. Unless your such a loose cannon you might break the Masquerade beyond repair, then I would be afraid. haha, ok.. if the back story is all your worried about can I start posting while I try and work on it? I'll make sure it doesn't affect anything.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:39 pm
ok, I changed it again. I'm still working on the details.
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:51 pm
^_^ Welcome, Hope you enjoy!
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