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Character: Ooshiro Imatokai/any in ukyo who wants to use/learn it
Technique Name: Sumitou (Ink sword)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ink
Description: Sometimes the length of the ukyo mizu can be troubling despite being strong, this technique is one used to change that. By using the Ink stored inside the Ukyo Mizo and controlling it over the blade of it, the ink will extend the reach of the Ukyo Mizo to a length of a sword. How strong the chakra in the blade is determines how effective the sword will be. Meaning the sword can break from a high rank jutsu if the used doesn’t enough chakra. Ink is in a constant movement in the front of the sword to the back into the blade again, however this has no real battle use to but collect blood and ink for the ukyo user despite the ukyo mizo being covered in ink.


(i really need to stop being in such a hurry... since i dashed I accidently put this in the wrong forum... but i fixed it)

Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Armor of Snow
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline Jutsu
Element: Snow
Description: The Shinsetsu clan user releases his chakra into the air, and condenses into onto his body and hardens it, creating a sort of ice armor that protects him from Kunai and Shuriken, And Jutsu Rank C and Below.((Protection against Jutsu increases as you rank up Chunnin Can take rank B, Jounin rank A, and Konin Rank S.))



Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Technique Name:Snow Dragon Blizzard
Rank: B
Type: Bloodline Jutsu
Element: Snow
Description: This technique shapes a large amount of snow chakra into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage.

Character: Reiko Uchiha
Technique Name: Visions of Limbo
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A Visual Genjutsu,the target only has to look into the user's eye to fall trap to this Genjutsu. They will feel as if they are falling into the whites of the user's eyes until they find themselves in a blank white world. In this Limbo the flow of time is different then the flow on the outside work. One second in the real world equates to five minutes in this Oblivion. Eventually,if let sit long enough,the victim could go mad from sheer lonliness

Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Soshi Genkotsu: Tatakai Kata [Elemental Fist: Brawler Style]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Raiton/Katon [Uses both not like an elemental combination type of thing]
Description: Over his years of training Howaido has learned to combine several Ninjutsu with his Taijutsu styles to create a blitzkrieg style of Elemental Brawling as the Technique proclaims. Essentially it is a combination of Chidori and Katon: Go. Utilizing the two he brings his stamina and abilities to their maximum in order to assault the opponent mercilessly for a short amount of time. While using this technique he cannot perform Ninjutsu that require seals. [5 Post Limit, Pays 25 Chakra each post.]



Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Soshi Genkotsu: Shougai Kata [Elemental Fist: Assault Style]
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Over his years of training Howaido has learned to combine several Ninjutsu with his Taijutsu styles to create a blitzkrieg style of Elemental Brawling as the Technique proclaims. Using his chakra as an extension of his body he can attack his opponents from any range. Howaido coats his body in chakra and releases a Taijutsu attack, like a punch for example, the chakra flings itself off of his body and assaults the opponent. The attack is chakra based and acts as a giant magnified version of the taijutsu attack. In this case the example punch would fly forwards in a long range attack in the shape of the users fist. The fist would be about the size of three to four people and hold twice the strength of the actual user. The chakra attack is visible to both the user and the opponent so it can be dodged, though it holds also the speed of the user. [In short it works like Komamuras Bankai if you have seen Bleach.]

Character: Aki
Technique Name: critical mass
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsubloodline
Element: maruton or bloodline
Description: a tendril threader can only extend there reach 3 times there height so this jutsu is limited a bit. by surging chakra thorough out his tendrils Aki selects many and then leaps into the air a bit. the chakra will surround each tendril selected and that tendril will become something close to steal. the tendrils will lash out like a bull whip in all directions making something close to a ball. the tendrils will either depending on ow they were set up pierce all around them and then vibrate at a high frequency to the cut through most things or if the user wills it so the tendrils will stay soft and wrap the object he desire for other purposes. the tendrils are space out so there isnt any dodging room between them. the only hope is to jump back at of range thought there really fast. if to close not even a substitution jutsu would save the person targeted. even the sharingan user would be pressured to deflect this attack and not take any damage.

ImKotsu
Bladed Ravens- Approved

Immortality Mirror- Add the amount of duration in posts and an example for the kind of damage the Genjutsu will have on the victim.

Zero Ryukai
Sumitou- Approved

Grand Chevalier
Armor of Snow- The armor can only be as strong as the amount of chakra you put in it. For example, 40 chakra = Rank B strength able to withstand Rank B jutsu and below. Also, remember that only the Hyuton have the ability to create ice.

Snow Dragon Blizzard- Include a maximum range.

Winterwolf
Biosense- Give several uses of the jutsu so that it does not leave it so vague and at the user's whim. Examples, like detecting poison in the blood.

Fall of the Damned
Visions of Limbo- Give a duration of the technique in posts. Also, remember that the victim must look into the user's eyes in the role-play.

ImKotsu
Maruton: Propulsion Technique- Elaborate on the gliding effects.

Qastor Sugino
Soshi Genkotsu: Tatakai Kata [Elemental Fist: Brawler Style]- What effects does it have on the Taijutsu techniques and the user?

Soshi Genkotsu: Shougai Kata [Elemental Fist: Assault Style]- The power of the Jutsu would only be that of an equivalent to a Ranked B jutsu since it uses that amount of chakra. The actual strength and speed of the user is vague and therefore the speed of the technique will only be as fast as the Rank of the user and if their speed is magnified by the Taijutsu class. Consider Rank vs class. Taijutsu class users are faster in their Taijutsu than non-Taijutsu class characters.

Shinigami
Lightning Rake- Add a range of the jutsu. Also, it is your Raiton chakra being released so it is considered a ninjutsu.

Lightning Pulse- Two posts of duration is too long for a C ranked jutsu. One post of paralysis is actually a lot. Add a range.

Lightning Wave- Add a range and specificity to the type of things it can cut through. Also, consider that a jutsu of the same rank or higher can defend against it.

Drizzit
Critical Mass- Specify what kinds of things the tendrils can cut through. Also, I suggest working on grammar and spelling. smile

Tenshi Ryukai
Simply specify one Rank for each Jutsu. Also, on the projectiles, each range of the projectile should be dictated by the Rank of chakra used. For example, Sho Tosha [Small Projectile] The Ranks would be E through C so that the three ranges would fall under a rank of chakra each.

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