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 Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:36 am
Character: Shunketsu Arashi
Technique Name: Speed Hunter
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Whenever the user has an "Armor" technique active, their speed increases greatly/incredibly. Instead of using 40 chakra upon activation, 10 chakra is taken away for every post that the user has the "Armor" technique active.
(I'm not too sure about what the difference between greatly and incredibly is. And how "greatly/incredibly" would apply in terms of ranks and stuff.)
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:23 pm
Character:James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: King of the Frozen Sand
Rank: S
Type: bloodline
Element: Wind, Water
Description: As with all of James custom techniques James blends his knowledge of multiple arts with his bloodline. Utilizing the form similar to the Kaiser Fist Lightning armor, James adds in his hyouton element, forming a frozen battle armor with similar effects, but with visual and one functional difference. James armor sits at -80 degrees C. effectively freezing what it touches. freezing the grround that James walks upon, and anything else to come into contact unless James wills differently. literally Making the Suna based Hyouton king of the frozen sand under his feet. James is of course immune to the cold caused by this technique.
 closest picture I could find.
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:59 am
[ Winter: } Do you have a technique or something that makes you immune to the cold? When Haku was first shown as a child, on the Mist village bridge, he was shivering from the cold snow. So... unless we have some attribute in the Hyouton bloodline that I forgot about, I'd say you need your own way to protect yourself from the frost. :I
[ Code: }
[ Kosa Ho ]
Make note that it'll take 10 posts to learn it, as it is more a less a style.
[ Mirror Fist ]
Approved.
[ Yakushin ]
I'd say this is more a long the lines of B or A rank. Make the change you see more appropriate, and approved.
[ Drizz: } So... sight activated? Approved, I suppose.
[ Oath: } The order is something like: Slight, Moderate, Increase, Sharp, Great, Significant ( finally got rid of incredibly ).
As a B ranked technique, I'd say a sharp increase would be more accurate.
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:54 pm
was going to make it part of this technique, but could I make a passive custom that makes me immune to cold? burn two slots or something? or that my Kaiser armors do it im up for whatevers allowed.
It was also ment to be just the cold of his personal technique, not other people's stuff
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 3:37 pm
iOath
Character: Shunketsu Arashi
Technique Name: Speed Hunter
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Whenever the user has an "Armor" technique active, their speed increases sharply. Instead of using 40 chakra upon activation, 10 chakra is taken away for every post that the user has the "Armor" technique active.
(I'm not too sure about what the difference between greatly and incredibly is. And how "greatly/incredibly" would apply in terms of ranks and stuff.)
Okay, I changed it. Oh, and...would this be auto-learned or would my character train for it while using an "armor" technique? Edit: Would this be better as a complex taijutsu technique?
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:24 pm
Character: -Sealer/Genjutsu-
Technique Name: Utsuro Fuuin - [Blank Seal]
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Description: Created by Shiki. He will form a blank seal. No set amount is truly used to create it. Rather, Shiki will form it with any amount he wishes and then use his Edit techniques to have to do a variety of actions, taking it's chakra from the seal. This can vary from creating explosions, forming into a barrier, storing a jutsu and any other edit technique the Shiki has.
-Other stuff.-
A maximum of three edits can be used on the seal at once.
The seal will disappear once it has performed all the programmed actions.
The actions programmed into it cannot be changed once set.
The action programmed will use the Utsuro Fuuin's chakra.
The actions don't have to happen right away, but rather activate whenever the sealer wishes.
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((If possible, have these edit techniques take up half a slot? It's like Taizo's seals. They're only parts of of a jutsu, plus they're pretty basic too.))
Character: -Sealer/Genjutsu-
Technique Name: Explosion -[Bakuhatsu]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: An edit technique created by Shiki for the Utsuro Fuuin. This forms the chakra charged into the seal to explode on command, the more chakra it takes from the Utsuro Fuuin, the higher the rank of the blasts released.
Note : Edit techniques take their chakra from the Utsuro Fuuin.
D : Normal explosion, equal to one exploding tag.
C : Explosion is 2x stronger.
B : Explosion is 3x stronger.
A : Explosion is 4x stronger.
S : Explosion is 4x stronger. explodes twice.
Character: -Sealer/Genjutsu-
Technique Name: Empower - [Kyouka]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: An edit technique made by Shiki for the Utsuro Fuuin. When this edit takes place in a seal, it manipulates the chakra to strengthen the physical abilities(strength, speed, defense, reaction time) of the one the seal is used on. Rather then taking [40] chakra, it will instead take [10] chakra from the Blank Seal every post until deactivated. Lasts 10 posts.
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:30 pm
[ Winter: } Yes, something like that would work out. Just make it clear that the technique itself isn't the cause of his immunity. Er... actually... if you wanna just have King of the Frozen Sand eat up two slots, that'd make it a lot simpler.
[ Oath: } There are learning instructions on the first page here. Because it's passive, I'd say you're better off having it as a ninjutsu additive. So... just leave it. :I
Approved.
[ Desin: } Approved. The two edit techniques together can be considered one slot, if that's what you meant.
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 2:36 pm
Character: Shinsetsu Aburame
Technique Name: Yudoku Kikkaichu (Poisonous Destruction Bugs)
Rank: B (Passive Ability)
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Due to Mutation, the destruction bugs that inhabits Shinsetsu’s body developed a unique poisonous characteristics that allows them to release deadly poison from their fangs when they bite their target. Though the amount of poison from a single bite isn’t that much big of a threat, being bitten by a large swarm of these Kikkaichus proves to kill an enemy almost instantly.
When a target is bitten by these Kikkaichus they would experience.
Stage 1 = Blurred Vision - when the poison begins to enter the victim's blood stream (After 2 posts)
Stage 2 = Dizziness - when the poison reaches and begins to infect certain nerves inside the body (After 4 posts)
Stage 3 = Cramping of the Muscles - when the poison spreads itself more inside the target’s body due to being carried by the target's blood stream (After 6 posts)
Stage 4 = Paralization of the entire body - occurs when the poison finally destroys the nerves the infected nerves. ( After 8 posts)
Stage 5 = Death - when the poison finally reach the victim’s heart. (10 posts)
If the infected target get's bitten once more by the Kikkaichu bugs, they would skip one stage as more poison enters the blood stream.
(Ex)
Victim is in stage 1 and gets bitten again, he/she would skip stage 2 and proceed to stage 3
In addition, by taking the Kikkaichu's poison and mixing it with the host's chakra, Shinsetsu could easily make an Antidote for it to give to allies or a spared adversary. (costs rank E of chakra to create one antidote)
Because the Kikkaichu bugs inhabited their host’s body for a long period of time, Shinsetsu gained Immunity against their poison and abled his body to have a high tolerance against other type of poison.
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 4:57 pm
The only thing I see about this that needs changing is because its poison we are talking about here you would need to put ALOT more information into it like what the poison does, how long it takes to do what it does. How many bites it takes for a lethal dose. that sort of thing. Post here again once you have finished.
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:04 pm
Character: Akane Haruka
Technique Name: Hātosutorēji [Heart Storage]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: This skill involves the hiding of one of the five hearts at his disposal. By taking a limp off and implanting a heart within the limb, he can then leave the limb and heart in an area away from him. This removes a limb from the user but grows vital to the life of a Joingu. If all of the hearts within the main body are destroyed, this heart will activate and keep them alive. Of course their main body will not be able to survive long due to lose of hearts, it will die off. But with the use of walking limb the user can literally pull the Heart that's in storage to a host, or body and remake themselves. The limbs that are taken with this skill can be replaced with fakes. If the Heart in Storage is destroyed, the limb will lose life and the Jiongu will know of the destroyed heart away from him. This technique can only be used twice within the whole life of the character. Anymore times and the heart will cease to beat, no matter if it's a new heart or old.
Character: Akane Haruka
Technique Name: Aisuru Ningyō [Loved Puppet Technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu, Kujutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The skill is quite simple, int the times of a heart leaving the body of a user, Joingu user, it may implant itself in a Puppet and make the tendrils spread through the inside of the puppet, creating a puppet body for themselves. This can be used in unison with Hātosutorēji [Heart Storage Technique] or the Jouju no Omoi [ Realization of the Heart Technique] to produce a weapon or a life vessel.
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:12 am
Azeiel The Fallen The only thing I see about this that needs changing is because its poison we are talking about here you would need to put ALOT more information into it like what the poison does, how long it takes to do what it does. How many bites it takes for a lethal dose. that sort of thing. Post here again once you have finished. edited
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 8:00 pm
Character: Shiki Narumi
Technique Name: Shukuchi - Reduced Earth
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/Passive
Description: Shukuchi is the power of teleportation attributed to some sennin. Those possessing this ability were believed to be capable of moving vast distances in a single step, in reality, one has just trained him/herself to move their entire bodies at amazingly high speeds, rivaling that of the Shunshin. Once one has trained themselves intensely enough, they too will have this ability.
((Some more edit techniques, 1/2 a slot each. Second one replaces Empower - Kyouka))
Character: Shiki Narumi
Technique Name: Shouheki - [Barrier]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: An edit technique created by [Character] for Utsuro Fuuin. Once this has been activated, it will form into a flat, solid chakra barrier able to stretch much to amazing lengths. The higher the rank of chakra used, the more it can stretch and the stronger the techniques it can block before breaking. Can take [3] attacks of the same rank or [1] attack of a higher rank before breaking.
D : up to 6ft tall/wide, D rank and below cannot penetrate it.
C : up to 10ft tall/wide, C rank and below cannot penetrate it.
B : up to 12ft tall/wide, B rank and below cannot penetrate it.
A : up to 15ft tall/wide, A rank and below cannot penetrate it.
S : up to 30ft tall/wide, S rank and below cannot penetrate it.
Character: -Sealer/Genjutsu-
Technique Name: Armor - [Yoroi]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton/Varies
Description: An edit technique made by Shiki for the Utsuro Fuuin. When activated on a seal, creates an effect similar to the Armor techniques of the Kaiser Fist style. The chakra of Utsuro Fuuin will envelop the user in a flame-like shroud that sharply/greatly/significantly increases all physical abilities and reaction time of the target of the seal. Yoroi also acts as a defensive shield that, sharply/greatly/significantly reduces incoming attacks damage. Lasts [8] posts. Effects depend on rank of chakra used. Lowest is B ranked, highest is S. For a bonus [10] chakra it can take one of the elements of the user.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:03 am
The rules for the base of my custom just changed, and considering that this custom or customs is the basis for my character I need to resubmit it for approval with the changes I desire. the technique is powerful, and I'm willing to eat the rest of my custom slots up to get the right effects. Excluding King of the Frozen Sand as it is already approved from the count I have 4 custom slots open.
Im dividing the effects into 3 separate customs but like I said I will do it any way it seems fair to get it done.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Frozen Soul
Rank: null
Type:Bloodline
Element: (Wind, Water,
Description: James lives and breathes the cold. The freezing a temperatures a relaxing blessing to the shinobi. James is immune to cold effects.
Character:James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: King of the Frozen Sand (X custom slots)
Rank: S
Type: bloodline
Element: Wind, Water (Armor Technique)
Description: After surrounding and infusing his body with the chakra infused Hyouton Ice, James will greatly increase his speed, power and reaction time. This chakra will also act as a defensive shield, being able to greatly decrease the strength of incoming attacks, like a Chidori. The increase in speed will also grant him reflexes on par with Yondaime Hokage. These abilities will also be used in conjunction with his already powerful Taijutsu to create even deadlier attacks. This armor sits at a constant temperature of -80 degrees Celsius and conveys all the physical effects of that temperature to the world around it. instantly freezing anything to come in contact unless James wills differently.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Mind and Body
Rank: null
Type: Eisejutsu
Element:
Description: James knows the human body, and even more so his own. Through the extemsive exploration of the Kaizer Fist style, and the constant study of anatomy James has learned to weave chakra through his skin with an efficiency previously unseen. James Ignores the time limits set on all Armor Techniques.
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have it as one jutsu
James pays an S rank amount of chakra to have these effects.(Armor speed and defense strength. The cold effect and all that. but the speed and strength only last for ten post. the armor and its defense powers last until its willed away or destroyed. but James Must pay a B/A rank amount of Chakra to continue the speed and strength bonuses.
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