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MISSION- Night Raid on Devon
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box.

Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one):
Zigzagoon
Voltorb
Duskull

Funds upon completion: 1000


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As I was running away from Zach I decided I would do a mission. I got away and went to the mission board and looked for a good mission. I found the perfect mission Night raid on Devon. I accepted and went straight home. I decided I would go to the Eterna forest considering its right down the road.

When I got to the Eterna forest I sent out all four of my pokemon out. I had my pokemon fight wild pokemon which came through trees to see what the commotion was. My new Bagon was doing very well considering it was the first time I battled with it. My Mudkip took most of the pokemon out. At about 10 pm I left for Devon Corporation. As I got to Roseboro city I noticed it was very quiet. When I got to the Devon building I noticed 1 guard I sent out my Mime Jr. Mime Jr used hypnosis and stuck the guard to sleep. I dragged him into the bushes and switched clothes with him.

As I walked up to the door I used the guards’ key cards to open the locked door. The door opened and a second guard asked what the ruckus was about. I said in a deeper voice that there was a sneaky little trainer out there. As I told him he asked why the cloths were sagging I called in my Mime Jr, and told it to use confusion. The attack completely fried the guards’ brain. I then called out my Shuppet and asked it to use flash. The light illuminated the dark stairs. When we were climbing the stairs I took off the cloths.

When I got to the top two guards were talking. I took the chance and called out Mudkip to use Mudshot. When they got hit with Mudshot they got coated then I sent out Bagon to use Ember. This attack hardened the mud completely rendering them immobile. I went down a hallway to a big room with 3 guards. Knowing that this was going to be hard trying to knock out the guards. One of the guards noticed me and alerted the other guards they all called out Zigzagoon. The guards then had them all use quick attack. The three pokemon tried to hit Shuppet but was immune to the attacks. I then had Mime Jr use Hypnosis on everyone which knocked all the guards and there pokemon out.

When I got over to the next set of stairs there was a guard (which heard the ruckus) was running down the stairs. He then called out his Zigzagoon and tripped over his own feet. When he got to the bottom he was unconscious. The Zigzagoon tried to wake up the guard but couldn’t. I had Mime Jr use hypnosis on the pokemon and ran up the stairs.

When I got up the stairs two huge guards where standing there knowing that this wasn’t going to end well. I told Mudkip to use water gun and then run. When he did it the guards sent out Voltorbs. Then I had Mime Jr confuse one to use self-destruct. It worked and blew both guards into the wall and set off the other Voltorb and blew the windows out. When I got up there the alarm started to go off so I went grabbed the tipped over box and got a rope that I had grabbed before I had even got here, and tied the rope to the desk and roped down. All of a sudden I start to feel the rope start to stretch knowing it was going to snap. I quickly go down and hit the street and take off.

Yeroc"nice dude" *still running in circles

Reaper: "Thanks man, hey why don't you release your pokemon from their pokeballs?"
*looks at his pokemon then yeroc*

Fail. Sure, I know you're not as experience of a mission writer as some like Thard, but the mission is too short with not enough story. Most guards would realize that a Quick Attack would not be able to harm a Shuppet. Using Hypnosis on the guards would not knock them all out or all of their Pokémon, maybe one at minimum, and Hypnosis doesn't have the greatest hit chance either. Your Pokémon should NOT attack the guards themselves, either you should discreetly knock them out or defeat them in a battle (don't make the battles too short though).

And last but not least, you need to inform an Admin that you caught the Bagon, as do Reaper and Cody who were also there.

P.S. (Reaper) Due to your rank, you should not be able to catch a Flareon. Please check the Aqua Ranks thread in the Support Forum to discover what you are and what you are not allowed to have at this time.

Also if you want, you can catch one of the Pokémon listed above, though that does not limit what the guards may have.

Reaper: *to sportsman*
"I didn't catch a flareon, I caught a torchic, Cody caught a flareon."

Yeroc: "Its ok hunter was on when i did the training mission" *then starts to run around in circles again*

Sport shakes his head. "I'm not an Admin, though I'm one of the older members of Aqua and I'm currently one of the higher ranks in the Team. I believe I'm three ranks away from Admin but don't expect the rank anytime soon. And those four are the only Admins."