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 Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:06 am
Condemned Memoir Sorry for the wait and thank you for your patience. Lets see, first off you need an additional fear as we need a minimum of two. Your inventory can hold up to 15 of any projectile you only have 10. Wire is not a projectile and is available in the shops please remove. Also we recently are adding that members can gain up to 10 free ninjutsu slots via personal attribute. If you'd like to change your attribute to go along with that do so now ^^ and for future refrence make sure to quote your bloodline approval thanks~ Kai Takahashi Dun Though I can't approve it until the bloodline is approved. I'll help you edit to the point where its acceptable till then. Chose only one bloodline or Ninjutsu. If ninjutsu is chosen, pick a specific element for -10 chakra
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 5:40 am
B-but, it was accepted in another profile, so I thought it should be okay... D:
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 6:56 am
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Full Name: Lissana
Nickname: The Shinobi Gunslinger
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 134 lbs
Nindo: "Justice will always Prevail"
Personality: Lissana is a righteous and just person usually. She is also nice and kind as well to people that deserve it. She usually is on the good side of things when it all boils down to it. But she is a relentlessly vengeful person. If you betray her, expect to hunted down in whatever way she chooses for the rest of her mortal life.
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Ninjutsu
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Bloodline: N/A
Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 460 Chakra
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Fire, Lightning
Chakra Color: Red [Using Katon] Light Blue [Using Raiton]
Chakra Materialization: Transparent Coloring
Strengths:
• High Mobility
• Mid-Long Range Combat
Weaknesses:
• Close Combat
• Physically Weak
Fears:
• Being Trapped Between Glass Walls
• Being Stuck on an Island of Dead People
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.
• If this class is chosen as the first and second class, then your chakra pool is increased by 10, and you gain an additional 10 chakra each rank up. Additionally, you gain one [1] additional element to the chosen discipline, maintain the bonuses/limitations of the discipline's description. Jutsu given by this class are now per element.
Reductions:
• Learns Ninjutsu 2 Posts Faster
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Personal Attribute:
• Shinobi Gunslinger Part 1: Allows the creation of a specific "Custom Basic Weapon."[This just means it's not complex, and she starts with it.] The weapon is a set of Pistols, Twin Pistols to be exact.[To be more exact, they are simply shaped like this, they are not actually pistols.] They do not fire any normal form of projectile at all. Lissana is also not allowed to use anything other than Ninjutsu because of this. [No Summoning, No Fuuinjutsu, ONLY Ninjutsu.] She also is unable to use any other form of weapon. [Meaning if you put a sword in her hand, she'd flail it wildly and hit nothing.]
• Shinobi Gunslinger Part 2: Allows Lissana to channel the jutsu she uses through these Twin Pistols that she has. Because of this she is unable to use clone techniques, transformation techniques, substitution techniques, acceleration techniques. [Basically, anything she can't channel through the guns she can't learn or use at all.]
• Shinobi Gunslinger Part 3: Lissana does not need to use handseals when she is using jutsu through the Twin Pistols, and uses them within one to two seconds. Because of this, Lissana is unable to use jutsu in any other way, other than channeling it through the Twin Pistols.
• Shinobi Gunslinger Part 4: Allows Lissana to learn Ninjutsu that are usually fired off as projectiles two posts faster [ie. Fireball Jutsu], but learn jutsu that are considered melee jutsu one post slower [ie. Flaming Palm Technique]
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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08 [Per Element]
• Extra Slots :: 00 / 05 [From Bloodlineless Package]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: "Twin Pistols"
Weapon Range: 8 Inches
Weapon Weight: 10 Pounds Each
Weapon Location: Sides of Waist
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• None
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: (Note: Can not start with the starting techniques because of personal attribute.)
Katon
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Raiton
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Lissana was raised under extremely harsh circumstances due to something about her chakra. A family full of shinobi, including herself, and yet she was unable to utilize her chakra or learn how to use a usual shinobi weapon properly. Because of this her whole clan looked down upon her, even her own parents, with the exception of a single person, her uncle. Eventually, her parents disowned her, and her clan head banished her. Her uncle stood up for her, and he as well was banished. They left, and were on their own, her uncle eventually managed to locate special stones that weren't before seen. Being a blacksmith he forged these stones into a pair of what looked to be kunai launcher without barrels for kunai to be fired from. He gave them to Lissana and told her to try using jutsu her chakra. She managed to do exactly that, and fire chakra from the guns. Her and her uncle took her up to the mountains to train her. But her troubles did not stop there either, it took her a long time to get through the academy, because of her special condition of being unable to learn normally, she never was able to learn the jutsu that were needed to pass the academy. She finally managed to get special permission and passed though.
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 8:07 am
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Full Name: Erebos Thassa
Nickname: The fox
Age: 12
Birthdate: september 1
Gender: male
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 110lb
Nindo: "never take the spotlight"
Personality: stays quiet but always listens. will do what he must to accomplish his mission.
Village: konoha
Rank: Genin
First Class: bloodline
Second Class: medic
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Bloodline: kemuriton
Chakra Pool: 330
Stamina Pool: 170
Chakra Element: Katon
Chakra Color: smokey red
Chakra Materialization: dark grey smoke
Strengths:
• stealth
• assassination
Weaknesses:
• exposed combat
• social interaction
Fears:
• pandas
• pacifists
Class Disciplines :
• Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline.
• HARMFUL Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin.
Reductions:
• eisei jutsu 1 post reduction
• bloodline 1 post faster
- bukijutsu 1 post faster
Personal Attributes:
• 1 more buki slot
• when gaining stamina and chakra from ranking up erebos gains 20 less chakra and 20 more stamina than normally allotted.
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Ryo: 両{Money} ziltch 0 nada nuthin
AC: {Advancement credit} ziltch 0 nada nuthin
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 04 / 03
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 02 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 00
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Weapon Type: wakazashi
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Location: back at hip height
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 10 kunai
• 5 shurikan
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Kemuriton
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Eiseijutsu
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Jing Shen Jei Fang
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Shunkan no Hagane
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will write one up when i'm actually awake. going to bed now wanna maker sure the body of the profile is done.
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 9:36 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 3:00 pm
B-but, it was accepted in another profile, so I thought it should be okay... D:
Edit: Bloodline application is approved.
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 3:55 pm
Kai Takahashi Dun B-but, it was accepted in another profile, so I thought it should be okay... D:
Edit: Bloodline application is approved. Link?
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 3:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:02 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji Kai Takahashi Dun B-but, it was accepted in another profile, so I thought it should be okay... D:
Edit: Bloodline application is approved. Link? Link to approved bloodline application is on the profile.
Here's the link to PA approval.
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 5:21 pm
So does the first PA or anything else on the profile need to be changed, or...? o n o;
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 5:32 pm
Kai Takahashi Dun So does the first PA or anything else on the profile need to be changed, or...? o n o; Mine has been changed so that it consumes a custom slot to balance it. Just figured i should say that. Also DONT BE COPYING ME FOOL XD XD JK JK
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 5:47 pm
Azeiel The Fallen Kai Takahashi Dun So does the first PA or anything else on the profile need to be changed, or...? o n o; Mine has been changed so that it consumes a custom slot to balance it. Just figured i should say that. Also DONT BE COPYING ME FOOL XD XD JK JK Myurai Hattori is my idol! D:< *uses Sharingan to copy* Mwahahaha! Ok, so if I make a similar change, then it should be accepted right?
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 5:53 pm
Kai Takahashi Dun Azeiel The Fallen Kai Takahashi Dun So does the first PA or anything else on the profile need to be changed, or...? o n o; Mine has been changed so that it consumes a custom slot to balance it. Just figured i should say that. Also DONT BE COPYING ME FOOL XD XD JK JK Myurai Hattori is my idol! D:< *uses Sharingan to copy* Mwahahaha! Ok, so if I make a similar change, then it should be accepted right? lol - is ok with this as long as its in character too- XD XD XD XD and should be
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