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Me: Nope, haven't talked to him for a little while.
*Hears some cracking sounds*
Me: Some eggs need to hatch, don't they?

*Grabs a glass of water*
Me: Just be careful, getting hit by a Furret isn't exactly pleasant.

*The egg cracks open and... ((Whatever baby pokemon you choose)) comes out*

Ginji stares at the Munchlax that was now starring at him. It opened its mouth as if it wanted food. "Looks like I need to go find some food..."

Knuxy: *runs around the base a bit* YES I PASSED A MISSION WOOO!! Lol, this is the first time i've done a mission here in gaia ^_^, i think i did one in Nsider.. I just kinda lost all my cr*p so i don't remember sh*t.. >_>, anyways.. *works on two/three other missions* YES HUMOUR!! Oh well.. the advantage of having a brother who was an executive helps wink i get to read it to that loser first.

Me: "Thanks Thard. I'll be sure to note that next time. Its summer, so my brain lacks any real grammar rules."

Pump: "He can't read good is what he's saying."

MISSION- Flame on!
Go find a fire pokemon!

Pokemon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon

Money: 600

Tara Stars yawned as she awoke from her bed. She got up, got dressed, brushed her hair, and her teeth. Then she went to the door she flipped threw the mail. Then she sat down and opened one. On the paper it said" You have received a mission.
Mission- Flame On
Explanation- Find a fire Pokemon
Money- 600."

She then quick grabbed her two pokeballs and put them both into her specialty made pokestaff. This staff holds her pokeballs and reads her mind it also will only work in her use. She grabbed her bike. Opened the door. She peddled quickly out of the apartment building.

As she arrives at petalburg woods she sees nothing. She sets down her bike and walks forward. She gets startled by a small mothim flying over her head. She walks forward and sees some pokemon gathered around a some pond. She hides in a bush. She looks around and sees no fire pokemon.

She gets up to go to another area. But she heres growling and as she turned behind her she saw a vulpix. She lifted her Staff and it out shot a pokeball. It landed on the ground and out popped her Poochyena. She yelled "pooch Tackle.". The small poocheyena ran forward at full speed she jumped up and tackled the vulpix. But as she tackled the vulipix used ember causing pooch to jump back. Then the vulipix ran forward and used her tail whip poochyena jumped out of the way then howled to boost his spirts and tackled her from the side. Tara's spear opened 2 pokeballs and it took inside of it poocheyena and vulpix.

She stared at the red light on the pokeball for a couple of minutes then she heard the ring. She jumped with joy. She happily got her bike and peddled back to the aqua force. But she peddled slowly to smell the sweet air of enjoyment. On her way she stopped at the toy store and bought a key chain ofr all of her pokemon. She bought a Poochyeana, a Horsea, and a Vulpix. She bought them and put them on her bag as decoration.

When she got back she went to the apartments pool with her swim suit on. She let all of her pokemon play. Horsea swam in the pool. Poochyena took a sun bath. Then vulpix put a bush on fire horsea put it out and they did that the hole time. Until all of them got in the pool and played.
They took a nap and got up. She looked around and said “Vulpix where are you?” she looked around her eyes full of fear. She looked at the open door and ran out of it hoping to find vulpix her two other pokemon followed.

Poochyena followed her vulpixs scent until they got to the petalburg woods again. They were lead to a den there were tons of small mews coming out of it. Out came her vulpix and two vulpix babys then there mother. Tara smiled and said to vulpix “you’re a father thats why you came back.”. Vulpix nodded he cuddled up against the mother vulpix and wrapped hes tails around the 2 babys. He they mewed there good byes and he jumped into taras arms and licked her face.

They left that day knowing that family matters more then anything. They went back and ate a picnic. Have tons of yunny foods like watermelon, sweet peach cobbler, hot dogs, apples, chips, and some drinks. They really had a nice day which might have been there best. That day didnt have enough work in it so they needed to stop playing and get to work. Tara can be more serious if she worked harder. She needs to train

Thats the same thing she did the next morning they trained hard. They found wild pokemon to fight until they were going to die. Vulpix fought a Burmey he had swift moves and good defence but wasnt strong enough for that to matter. Poochyena fought a starly but couldnt fight him since he was so up high unless when he came down to attack. Then Horsea fought a barboach she was a good swimmer but needed more attacks and power.

While she ate lunch all alone she thought about her life she had no family she put her head down she had no friends she started to cry she had no life she wanted to die. She sat there eatting her head down her staff read her mind and turned black instead of a beautiful pink. She went home and changed her pink outfit all black she had white wings from the far dyed red from blood. Her arms covered in marks she threw sleeves on over them.

If I may make a suggestion, you used the pronoun "she" almost every other word. Try adding some spice into your word selection. Also, make sure to have your sentences flow smoothly and connected. I thought it was a little choppy.

I can't grade such a mission, but you might want to edit it some more so that you can get this one to pass.