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 Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:45 am
Wow. Last one was a bit intense. lol Might lead to foreplay a bit sooner than planned if ya give that to some gals biggrin
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:45 pm
I like the last one best, though the second one is just behind it (:
Very good work, Illiud, I like your style ^^
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:38 pm
Illiud My favourite part about the last one is the last few lines. I'm fairly confidant that I could say those word verbatim to her face, and she'd smile, and not slap me. XP
Hee hee. All in all, your poems just seem to have a persona all on their own which relates back to you and I like that a lot.
As for saying that, I'm with Maku though I dunno what I'd personally do if someone came up to me and said that. XD
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:52 pm
Yeah, I had fun writing all of them. Lots of fun.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:36 pm
Ain't that the most important part?? wink
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:43 pm
Usually. As I was writing them, I was imagining saying the last one to her.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:46 pm
No wonder it's your favourite. And yes, I think the parts where your personality peaks are the things that seem realistic enough to say yet still in harmony with the poem. 3nodding
If you write anything else lemme know, I love reading poetry though I can't write it worth a s**t.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:16 pm
Well, if you ever do tell your mystery girl that last one, you gotta let us know how that one plays out biggrin If it does lead to some good foreplay, I hope you won't mind me using it wink
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:19 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:56 pm
VD, check the infirmary. i posted a bit late.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:57 pm
I'm feeling more and more like reading that last one to her, actually. I think it'd work...
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:05 pm
I think it would be a good idea to tell her how you feel. Plus, what girl doesn't get a rush out of a guy writing them something. At least I do...xD
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:09 pm
I am a sucker for what most people think is corny. Taking me out for a walk, making a song, writing poetry, picking me flowers, all make my heart melt.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:09 pm
You know...I just can't abbreviate Valkyries name without snickering out loud...God, I'm such a pervert...
Anywho, I'll stick with the Fable approach to making my wife feel special.
1. Pump arm in air
2. Constantly say "Hey" in a seductive voice
3. Pelvic thrust the air
4. ????
5. PROFIT!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:10 pm
Illiud I'm feeling more and more like reading that last one to her, actually. I think it'd work...
And yeah. Definitely go with the telling her how you feel thing. It's better to try and know the outcome rather than to wonder forever what could have been.
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