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 Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:07 am
Well I know that the two fire tribes aren't the same, hence why the character would be with the DeLeon one against her will.
I know you mentioned in the bio that Axel died in their escape attempt? back then, I don't think they would typically have separate camps for families or male/females. The gender separation in prisons and camps didn't occur until much farther in the future (I believe the late 1800's.) Not sure how Axel's sister and Ace would know each other if she wasn't in the camp, wasn't that where the two met? Perhaps in attempt to escape, Axel did want to rescue his sister? Which would be how he was killed? His sister could have been re-captured and sold to Raphael. Or sold before and tried to escape with the boys but failed or something to that effect. I don't want to ruin any plans you may have as well, so I'm just throwing ideas out there. I'm just glad that you're giving it a chance.
Tektek away my dear. I'm currently scanning a 500 page manual into PDF format for my dad anyways lol.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:27 am
Little Kokeshi Doll Like I said, to make the story more interesting. But my idea was shot down anyways, so it doesn't matter. I may be new to this clan and guild, but I'm definitely not new to Gaia or Role Playing. I've been here for a good 5 - 6 years y'know. I don't really need explanations from the p.o.v's, I've been them all. Heck I used to own a roleplaying guild myself. I'll use just one character for now. My creative juices for characters are shot and discouraged now anyways. I need to save that energy for my commission work for Priya.
I didn't know you've been on Gaia for 5-6 years
I didn't know you had been RPing for a long time
I didn't know you RAN an RP Guild.
NOW that I know all of this, just do whatever you want. If you want to make another character, then go ahead, integrate it however you want. You're obviously experienced enough, so go ahead...you only need Priya's permission anyways.
...(Also, although a lot of us came to the party through the same members in a somewhat random fashion, you have to realize that we did what we could at the time. I would appreciate that you not call such a development as "typical and tiresome" as I consider how Cobra came into the group to be creative and unique, and it fits his back story and who he is perfectly well.)
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:48 am
Cobra I never took your post as an attack O.o
It's fine to ask questions of course. I was just letting you know that the talk about the different standpoints weren't necessary. To each their own. I'm not trying to say that you're views are wrong. If you feel only one character is necessary, then that's fine, that's your opinion. I'm just trying to help make the RP more interesting.
The character was shut down regardless of your input. It just wouldn't work. Do you act this way every time someone makes a second character?
And yes, the random character bios and all just so happening to meet and whatnot does get a little bit typical and tiresome..TO ME, I see it everywhere in Barton town, but that's only MY opinion. Don't get offended if it differs from your own, I don't mean to be insulting. If the random fashion of joining the group suits your character, than good, I'm not asking you to change it. Havessa joined the group randomly to you know, so it's not like I'm totally against it.
I will wish you wouldn't take this discussion as a personal debate. It was never meant to be. I'm ending this argument now, I hope you know, I still harbor no ill feelings towards to despite the clear misunderstandings of this conversation. I don't want to fight with other members.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:59 am
Little Kokeshi Doll The character was shut down regardless of your input. It just wouldn't work. Do you act this way every time someone makes a second character?
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:19 am
And I make a living as a freelance writer now, I'm working on four different RP's right now, plus I'm looking for a job, plus I'm working on my own projects. I know a thing or two about writing.
Also, It's hard to tell someone's emotion by a group of cleverly aligned pixels on a screen. So both of you! Stop taking this so seriously! It's just a game!
as far as character race goes; Lieutenant First Class Kage Ikagi, a character that I had a while back was an armour poltergeist with immensely powerful psionics. "With a flick of my wrist I can change your religion" and so much more.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:39 am
Sorry for the delay. My brother was here, and wanted to play a game at the 360 with me. He lives with his father, whom I wish not to see anymore. So I couldn't resist. Anyways, voila:  I decided to make him spanish. The family crest of his....family...contains a rose. smile A good name suggestion for his sister: Rosetta. As for how she would know Ace... Definitly not the same camp. But, she could have been eavesdropping guards in her time as a prisoner. That an Ace Mistry escaped together with Axel (surname. Up to you. I hope I'll like it too. xd ) But that they "caught" Axel. Ace will wear, along with his dragonscaled armor, a cape. The cape of the Mistry family. People will recognise the cape. (Ace wears the cape, so that his father gets word that Ace is once again seen. This time, saving a kingdom. twisted ) Anyways. Rosetta might recognise the cape. I can't see why they would be enemies though. But from the little information she's heard. She'd blame Ace? Still. Knowing Ace. (Since I am Ace.) He'd try to talk her out of it. Like with Straven.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:44 am
Cobra - I can understand why you would want to prevent chaos, it's never fun, but please, believe me when I say I'm not trying to start up something bad.
Alex - that's crazy. I sometimes do editing for a few of my friends and their pieces.
Thy - Hmmm...I like it, it works. I have to get ready for work, so I'll come up with something more after alright? I like where this is going though.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:12 pm
This was mostly brought up at the beginning of the discussion but I'd like to justify myself.
I'll state the purpose of both my recently added Personal NCPs.
Aria - Thought up over a month ago. Main reason for her existance was to somehow explain how Allure managed to know what was going on to DeLeon while she was exiled. [Obviously someone had to tell her or it would make no sense, right? She can't exactly go near the place...] A while ago, Thymen brought up the issue of if Allure did reclaim her kingdom then her character would be out of the story more or less...I mean, she needs to take care of her kingdom and of course the others can't be expected to stay there. Still, she'd reappear for the main battle, I guess? I haven't thought that far ahead...So Aria was going to be my new character after. She would basically be bound to do so by Allure.[Not the best choice of words but you'll see.]
Aria was only recently added because 1. We are now near the point of actually reaching DeLeon and 2. I had issues with a name[I'm very picky] and appearence. XD
Well...she ended up being the information person[tied in by the whole noble best friend...close to the family] and the only one who knows of Lucien[Eh, that bit was also needed since Lucien would be the one telling Aria where Allure was before Allure left for France.
Lucien - Thought up about a month ago though he was only mentioned in DeLeon's forum[I don't remember if I mentioned Aria...well, I did indirectly in the RP but more towards the beginning]. Havessa would be my witness to around when he was thought up. The reason? My friends irl said Allure's story would be incomplete without some kind of love. I was fineleaving her without one but then I caught sight of the Supernova Dragon/Wyrm from Fallen Wish and figured....why not have him be that? [I didn't like the idea of an actual ice demon....too normal lol] So a human with a "curse" seemed like fun. This was also inspired by the original Snow Queen. The original would kiss a man and he would be entraced. With a third kiss, he would be a slave. That's where the name Allure came from. Okay but Allure is not evil so that power could not be used but instead....something interesting with the kiss? Even brought in forbidden love with this lol. Good pieces to a tragedy. So yes, he's loyal but that's pretty sad too especially since she can't even stand being around him without feeling guilty[That's nowhere on my profile. Only in the Snow Queen story in my journal] My writting is poor...sorry. Rushing. Hoping you can follow all this too. I'll clearify if not.
Soooooooooo, simply....Lucien is the forbidden love piece. A dragon only because I really like that Fallen Wish form lol. Look at his personality as well...shoot, if I use him in battle, it'd be insanely minor. I spent forever building Allure's character to where it is and I want he to take down Raphael especiallly with the disadvantage she has. It's be a great end to that character's role[No she is not dieing]
Lucien...I gave him weapons in case there was ever a reason...I mean, a dragon that keeps his identity a secret...he need defense. XD He might come along with the other's going up the mountain and maybe carrying one or two slower people. [doubt it since they need to be fast and him carrying people would be slow. He's only 12ft in length after all] Oh! Maybe he should carry Rune sicne she'd be shooting arrows.
Seriously rushing so I can't double check this.
Alright sooooooo, the main point of this RP is to stop chaos[haha funny...there's chaos even by just having the RP lol]
The multiple characters with no real realation is actually really good cause perhaps dark pasts can be made better[like what's happening with Allure right now] and it could increase elemental's forces. Allure would have DeLeon's army at her hands if she succeeds on winning the favor of the people. See? That could help against France's Knights though I do not think we'd end the RP with a war lol. Just mentioned possibilities.
Multiple characters....multiple possibilities....simple and complex as that lol.
Dragons, I wouldn't want a lot in the RP either. Obviously, I didn't want Lucien to play a big part and restricted him to just that by making him bound to the mountain. So yea...he's out of the way. xD
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:27 pm
Ok so here`s what I got for Rosetta then.  Possible Surnames: Benavides GalÃndez Gamez Lazaro Melgarejo Pacheco Preciado (I like them all, so you can pick one kay Thy?) Age: 18 Race: Human, perhaps from an elemental family? Remember I need a reason why Raphael would want her in his control. I was thinking her element could be electricity, generally passed down in the males of her and Axel's family, but some how it was switched in their generation perhaps? Or just randomly passed. I figured that with too much fire could be devastating to the snow queen's castle and the mountain, and so with a limited fuel source, perhaps Raphael is using her to power the castle itself? Of course the Snow Demons had it figured out themselves when it came to power, but Raphael didn't have the luxury, especially if he was the only one in the reining tribe with ice manipulation abilities. Her limitations would be: She only has minute control over electricity, but her real power is in producing it from her body. But since she can't control it, it strikes where ever it wants. So along with maybe a few other lightning elementals collected throughout Europe, she gets chained to the ceiling and floor with perhaps something strong but mute to carrying electrical currents (like dragon scales molded into shackles?) with iron/copper bar to act like lightning rods to draw the electricity into generators (I believe by this time, the lightbulb have been created? if not we can come up with something else.) Thy, what did you have planned for Ace for the attack on DeLeon? Allure might know the castle from before, and have info from her lady-in-waiting, but I think perhaps there should be a little pre-mission to get inside for one reason or another. Maybe another way to collect info? And since Ace controls fire, perhaps he could infiltrate in disguise as one of the tribe members...which can be how him and Rosetta cross paths? OH OH OH! What if Aria was caught by Raphael and he was on a rescue mission or something. Again, throwing ideas out there. Priya I'd like you opinion on this too. So back to the past. I'm thinking another camp it a good idea. Maybe Axel's other reason for escape was a rescue attempt for Rosetta? Could work. Let's indulge on this a little bit more alright?
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:01 pm
Pfft, who needs dragons when you've got a pigeon!
Sam's pigeon I mean.
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:06 pm
Alexandria Vance Pfft, who needs dragons when you've got a pigeon! I'd love to see that battle. Oh thank the lord. XD A laugh at the erfect time. ;D
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:33 pm
Kokeshi,
Ace would totally do that.
But he'll be the one leading the others:
Veronica, Yuuske, Gloryrness, and Sam..
Against the fire tribe.
As Ace was trained from his born, he knows every single bit about it.
Besides, who else would have to lead this?
xd
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Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:44 pm
Indeed Thy 3nodding
Yeah he could lead the battle, but I mean before the battle part lol.
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Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:54 am
And how is Ace supposed to get in the castle, before the attack?
Impossible.
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