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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:15 am
I finally finished Koth's bio. Now to send it to CW and my partners in crime.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:17 am
I hope CW gets back to me about mine soon...
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Darkened Angel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:42 am
9 out of 10 people agree that 1 person out of 10 will always disagree with the other 9.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:03 am
PaulTheWolf5575 I hope CW gets back to me about mine soon... Well, is there a reason armour that was destroyed is mentioned? ^^ Seems to be an unnecessary detail. But yes. You really should shorten it.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 6:34 am
Bloody snow. I hate it when it Hoths outside.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 9:35 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:27 am
IT's been rather mild up here in Michingan. We had an ice storm and soem snow, but other than that it has been mild.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:51 am
The armor was destroyed when Arch's command bought it...he fought for close to a week straight, almost died from an close landing artillery round, so by the end of that fight there was little more left than useless chunks of plasteel...
I was gonna explain how in detail in a flashback post early in Factions...It's something I wanted to explain in the RP...
And why do I need to shorten it? My previous bios were that long...like I said, Arch's isn't a change from the last one, with the exception of the four year updates and the Armor...
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 11:04 am
Johnny Malone IT's been rather mild up here in Michingan. We had an ice storm and soem snow, but other than that it has been mild. That's because this snowstorm actually came from the south. It hit Kansas pretty hard I believe.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:55 pm
PaulTheWolf5575 The armor was destroyed when Arch's command bought it...he fought for close to a week straight, almost died from an close landing artillery round, so by the end of that fight there was little more left than useless chunks of plasteel... I was gonna explain how in detail in a flashback post early in Factions...It's something I wanted to explain in the RP... And why do I need to shorten it? My previous bios were that long...like I said, Arch's isn't a change from the last one, with the exception of the four year updates and the Armor... Yeah, but it was Me and Nelo who were looking over bios. Not CW. If she finds it hard to read, then you have to work with her to shorten it. She's the law in this one.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:12 pm
Cale Darksun PaulTheWolf5575 The armor was destroyed when Arch's command bought it...he fought for close to a week straight, almost died from an close landing artillery round, so by the end of that fight there was little more left than useless chunks of plasteel... I was gonna explain how in detail in a flashback post early in Factions...It's something I wanted to explain in the RP... And why do I need to shorten it? My previous bios were that long...like I said, Arch's isn't a change from the last one, with the exception of the four year updates and the Armor... Yeah, but it was Me and Nelo who were looking over bios. Not CW. If she finds it hard to read, then you have to work with her to shorten it. She's the law in this one. Plus, you only need to add what you did in the last four years. Not your entire lifespan.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:51 pm
Agreed. Sometimes too much is too much.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:49 pm
So what's everyone up to?
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:50 pm
Ral Roke So what's everyone up to? Just got in from moving snow.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:59 pm
Just trying to do some homework.
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