Lord Snickers
Christian was walking around the base after him just finishing a different mission. He then sat down and when he did he rubbed his head and said “not again” he then pulled out his TADS and opened it and it read:
MISSION- Clone Clear out
Must complete Fearow of Water
The word in Lavender Town is that Team Aqua has been moving large amounts of equipment out of the Power Plant. But we don’t have an installation there, so it can't be our doing.
I've looked over the leg band recovered from the Fearow, and it looks like the work of Team Clone.
Your mission is to get inside the plant and find whatever is left of their operation. Bring back any documents you can get your hands on. Try to go unseen, but you might have to fight anyway. (Fight 0-3 guards with 1-3 Pokemon each)
Pokemon: Any basic stage Electric or Ghost type
Funds: 1000-1800
*Sticks the grade to the report*
You've added another battle since the last time I saw this report. I certainly wasn't exptecting that.... I'm also pleased to see you're developing a more strategic eye for these battles.
The story elements could still use some refinement, especially where adjectives and adverbs are concerned. Also, if you put an extra blank line between paragraphs, as I'm doing for this grade, it makes everything that much easier to read. Mind you, it's not
required to use extra paragraph spacing, but I think you'll notice the difference.
Since you fixed up the two major battle flaws and added a little more to the story, I congratulate you on another successful mission.
[PASS]Prize money is P$1600
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