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 Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:32 pm
I find it amusing that Ton has girl troubles...
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:34 pm
^^ Hehehe, it wasn't that way in the book that I worte.
It as the other way around. Ton kept finding Eca lost in the caves, helping her out, acting all sweet, and she was being a b***h about the whole thing. I tohught it might be fun to switch things around a bit.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:36 pm
Amusing non the less. It's fun to see men all frustrated. It means we're winning...
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:44 pm
^^ hehehe.
I just got a pink link on the memo baord. *luffles pink links* so now I am up to 59k.
I'm thinking about posting part of my story in the RP accompaniment thread, either in mini stories or in it's own thread. Since it's so darn long....it's twenty pages typed on the computer. At least, the twenty pages that I deemed "finished." Darned thing is 227 pages long in it's length.
I'm a little embarassed with it though.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:46 pm
Wow that's quite a thing.
I used to write stories...only to realize that over half of it was all crap...I'll stick to drawing and my little short stories that are actually good.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:48 pm
There is alot of good about this story, it's just a bit corney, and not all that well thought out. I wrote it in grade nine, then re-wrote it for a project in grade 12. I got a relaly good mark on it, because it made my teacher laugh with some of the dialoge exchange I did.
What the hell. I'm gonna post it. Not that I expect anybody to read all 20 pages worth.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:50 pm
Free time makes us do things.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:19 pm
Indeed. that was a fair bit of work.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:21 pm
they story I got on my comp is at 224 pages, and it's not even halfway through the story, much less revised and such enough
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:26 pm
*claps*
I hope you get through it then, and not stop like I did. It might have been good, if I had finished it.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:31 pm
I just slave Steph in writing on her story.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:35 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:37 pm
Proverbially stand behind her with a 2x4 with rusty bent nails in it and make sure she works on it. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:38 pm
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