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 Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:02 pm
I hate writers block on things you love the most!
and yes, as well fills also excellently
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:07 pm
I hate writer's block on things that are 20% of my total grade! At least it's the only work I have tonight. As the guys from Monty Python sing in The Life of Brian, "Always look on the bright side of life!"
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:07 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:07 pm
no idea what you're talking about, but good luck.
i g2g, but here's some pointers, if you're not aware of them already:
1st sentence of the first paragraph should be your thesis.
next sentences should be listing the core ideas of your 3 supporting paragraphs, and the last sentences should tie them together tersely.
next 3 paragraphs develop those core ideas supporting the thesis, linking each paragraph to the next via segues. for instance
"and so it was the collapse of the ___ that lead to the ___.
An inevitability of the ___ collapsing is that the [second core idea]"
and the conclusion should restate the thesis in different words in the first sentence.
hope that helps. teetee for then, tahtah for whenever. i'll be back.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:09 pm
Never let it be said our Guild doesn't help!
xd
Johnny: Wow...that sucks!
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:10 pm
Alianna Naviri no idea what you're talking about, but good luck. i g2g, but here's some pointers, if you're not aware of them already: 1st sentence of the first paragraph should be your thesis. next sentences should be listing the core ideas of your 3 supporting paragraphs, and the last sentences should tie them together tersely. next 3 paragraphs develop those core ideas supporting the thesis, linking each paragraph to the next via segues. for instance "and so it was the collapse of the ___ that lead to the ___.
An inevitability of the ___ collapsing is that the [second core idea]"
and the conclusion should restate the thesis in different words in the first sentence.
hope that helps. teetee for then, tahtah for whenever. i'll be back.Thanks, didn't help much because I know what I'm doing but thanks for the help all the same. I believe I bitched about doing the research for this thing to Cale and CW a couple of nights ago, all I'm running on now is caffeine. Huzzah!
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:25 pm
Well if it makes you feel better I have an AP US history Essay AND a Math Exam tomorrow...
good luck though
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:31 pm
PaulTheWolf5575 Well if it makes you feel better I have an AP US history Essay AND a Math Exam tomorrow... good luck though You too. I have enough caffeine going through my system that I won't feel tired until probably 5 or 6 in the morning. After I hand this paper in tommorow I will be done for the week, with only one class on friday. So I'm happy! mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:36 pm
Yea...after tomorrow I'm done too...
and I avoid caffeine...
bad s**t happens when i get caffeine...
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:44 pm
Caffeine only makes me act weird around others if I have too much... actually it's not the caffeine I'm just a "different" guy in general or so my friends tell me. In other news, I'm getting the creative impulse! Huzzah, thank you George Carlin! (I'm listening to his "You're all diseased" right now, it always get the creative juices flowing in my brain)
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:49 pm
I become a tempest when on caffeine. Like, really bad stuff goes down!
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:26 pm
i loved AP US history essays. ranting about vietnam... what more could i ask for in a class?
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:27 pm
Oh I love that sort of thing too...problem is we're on Andrew Jackson
-_-
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:28 pm
what, specifically?
i hate most everything between the civil war and adams, but i'll try to help...
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Darkened Angel Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:51 pm
twisted evil sad stare smile biggrin xd
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