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Valentine Valtieri
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 1:33 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
Valentine Valtieri

While you were doing that, I was punching myself in the brain to create some dudes for a book. I just finished their minor profiles, but it's hard to really know what I'm doing when I'm the only critic.

What's the book about?


Oh, you know, the usual. Artificial humans called Espers, who spend their very short lives keeping a place called the Imperium alive and well at the cost of their own bodies. Most end up dying by overstressing their abilities and doing something called a Synapse Break, in which case, they're hunted down by one of the four protagonists. Those would be Exodus, Genesis, Revelation, and Timothy. They aren't pawns of the Imperium, but will often work with them when Revelation requests it. Just your typical stuff.

Ex is the main protagonist, and has an addiction to a drug called Perception. It allows him to break his Synapse Links at any time he wants, but it shortened his lifespan waaay more than it normally would've. The only reason he's alive is because Revee can repair a broken link. He's part of Series ACHYLS, Sixth Generation Esper. His model number is 0524-4444, which...in Japanese, means "Nothing(524) and DeathDeathDeathDeath(4444)" Like every other one of his brothers, he was created through Revelation's DNA, so he has an extremely proficient use of Espering, but a high tendency to lapse.

Genesis is his brother, and the only one who will willingly do a Synapse Break for the power because his just repair themselves. He takes Perception half as much as Exodus just because of the amount of times he'll lapse out because he did that too many times. He's part of Series TITAN, Twenty-First Generation, model number 3301-7511, which means absolutely nothing. His generation number is so high because the TITAN model was an extremely successful unit, but a few Espers in the Twenty-First were killed by Genesis out of his random anger. He has the ability to kill them because he was created from Revelation.

Timothy is the third brother created from Revee. He has a higher proficiency for Espering than either of his brothers, but moderate physical skill at best. He's a part of Series PURPOSE, but doesn't have a model number since he was the only experiment for that series. He has the largest amount of Espering abilities, and does not take Perception since it interferes with his ability. He's the most unique in the way of being able to use all Esper abilities, but he's still subpar compared to Revee because of where she came from. Not to mention he's only a copied fraction of her power, just like the others.

Revelation is the only remaining Esper from the original Series SERAPH, and the only living Esper from the original First Generation. Her model number is 0001-0001, and while she's the strongest when it comes to Espering, she hangs back and gives backup to her "brothers" through communication. Revee is normally contracted by the Imperium to deal with Espers that have broken a link, but most of the missions end without Esper fatalities because of her underlying hatred for humanity. She fought one time in the story, and leveled hundreds of buildings far over her head with no effort, but high use of her Synapse.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 1:46 pm


Valentine Valtieri

Sounds pretty cool, but something that would be told better through an rpg game than a book.

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Valentine Valtieri
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Blessed Hunter

PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 1:53 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
Valentine Valtieri

Sounds pretty cool, but something that would be told better through an rpg game than a book.


Oh? I always thought games were on too strict of a budget and time limit to actually tell the whole story, but that's an easy work around. I think the story feels too clichéd to join the game market...on top of that, I just don't know how I'd do it.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 2:07 pm


Valentine Valtieri
Fist of the Bro Star
Valentine Valtieri

Sounds pretty cool, but something that would be told better through an rpg game than a book.


Oh? I always thought games were on too strict of a budget and time limit to actually tell the whole story, but that's an easy work around. I think the story feels too clichéd to join the game market...on top of that, I just don't know how I'd do it.

I think it would fit in well with open battle rpg controls like ones found in phantasy star online, FFXIII, or kingdom hearts. Synapse breaks sound similar to the limit breaks in final fantasy. If you've ever played this table-top rpg called Paranoia, this story reminds me of that, where you play an artificial/cloned enforcer in a techno totalitarian city with lots of player death.

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Darestrum
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 2:29 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
Valentine Valtieri
Fist of the Bro Star
Valentine Valtieri

Sounds pretty cool, but something that would be told better through an rpg game than a book.


Oh? I always thought games were on too strict of a budget and time limit to actually tell the whole story, but that's an easy work around. I think the story feels too clichéd to join the game market...on top of that, I just don't know how I'd do it.

I think it would fit in well with open battle rpg controls like ones found in phantasy star online, FFXIII, or kingdom hearts. Synapse breaks sound similar to the limit breaks in final fantasy. If you've ever played this table-top rpg called Paranoia, this story reminds me of that, where you play an artificial/cloned enforcer in a techno totalitarian city with lots of player death.


Do you realize...what you said... FFXIII... OPEN BATTLE RPG.... MOTHER ******** THATS WHAT WAS WRONG WITH XIII! FFXII WAS!

In other news my first shift at my new job is tomorrow at 3pm till 11pm.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 6:49 pm


Post you two. gonk
shut up hamlet

Kirin Benoit

Fist of the Bro Star
Captain

Shirtless Seraph


U SO MAD BRO

PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 6:54 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
Post you two. gonk
shut up hamlet

Kirin Benoit
I'm working on it homeslice.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 6:59 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
Post you two. gonk
shut up hamlet

Kirin Benoit

I had work Bro. DX
Sorry

Great Lord Wulvengar

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Fist of the Bro Star
Captain

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 7:44 pm


Kirin Benoit
Fist of the Bro Star
Post you two. gonk
shut up hamlet

Kirin Benoit

I had work Bro. DX
Sorry

It's cool. I'm just excited to throw some more horror-themed fun your way. cool
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 8:05 pm


Oh my god! You guys post so much D:

xDarkpass906

Wealthy Gekko


Fist of the Bro Star
Captain

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 8:40 pm


xDarkpass906
Oh my god! You guys post so much D:

It's too fun to stop. emotion_awesome
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 8:42 pm


Fist of the Bro Star
xDarkpass906
Oh my god! You guys post so much D:

It's too fun to stop. emotion_awesome

Nono, but I love it.
I wish most roleplayers were like you all.

xDarkpass906

Wealthy Gekko


Fist of the Bro Star
Captain

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:01 pm


xDarkpass906
Fist of the Bro Star
xDarkpass906
Oh my god! You guys post so much D:

It's too fun to stop. emotion_awesome

Nono, but I love it.
I wish most roleplayers were like you all.

Well thank you. I wish most roleplayers were like me too. cool
PostPosted: Sat Oct 05, 2013 5:15 pm


I guess everybody is out enjoying octoberfest tonight.

Fist of the Bro Star
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Shirtless Seraph


Fist of the Bro Star
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Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:04 pm


xDarkpass906

I think Zanko is looking for you back in the un-living room. I wonder what would happen if you two tried to look through a book together? xD
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