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Brian_Link
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:17 pm


*Walks back into base, rubbing a big bump on my head*
Me: Well Ice, when you get sucked up by otherworldly portals, and dropped on your head, sometimes you stay places longer than expected.
*Sees a mission*
Me: Time to grade.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:20 pm


Corey nods at Jackie's comment
"Oh well, as long as they retrieved it'll be fine." he says.

MGCorey


Brian_Link
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:46 pm


Pickachu8302
Any Team Aqua member is asked to catch a Plusle

Pokemon:
Plusle

Funds upon completion: 500
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I was scanning through the missions them aqua had avalible that I would be able to do. After looking at 20 missions I found one I would be able to accomplish. My mission was to capture a Plusle. I had heard plusles were strong pokemon if you raised them well. I really wanted one because I knew I would be going on more difficult missions soon and Mudkip and Scyther might not be strong enough because there's only two of them. I wanted to do this mission because I wanted to see if I could really be a good aqua member and I wanted to get more experince with pokemon.
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My pokemon and I went down the path under the cycling road, leading to Mauville City. It was a nice day out so we were sure to see a Plusle.we had been walking for at least an hour, I could see Scyther and Mudkip were getting tired from walking so I decided we take a break. I gave Mudkip and Scyther an apple, then I gave them some water. After we were done eating we continued waking down the path. While we were walking Mudkip stoped for a second and ran down the path and stoped a near by bush. Mudkip what do you see? A Pluse came out of the bush and it looked mad, I'm just going to guess mudkip sprayed it with water being playful.
Mudkip use Mudslap! It's super affective! does 15 damage.
Pluse attacks using Thunder Wave.
Mudkip can't move! Mudkip return, go Scyther!
Scyther use Quick Attack! Does 10 damage.
Pluse uses Quick Attack, does 8 damage.
One more time Scyther!
Poke'ball go! 5 seconds later... mission accomplished.
Plusle, welcome to the team.
Plus-le! Hey You! I turned to see a trainer he looked like he was good at battles. I want to batlle, one on one, now! My pokemon were'nt very tired but I don't think they could do a tranier battle. The tranier sent out a Poochyena, I sent out Scyther since Mudkip could not move. Scyther use Quick Attack! does 10 damage.
Poochyena used Bite! does 15 damage.
Scyther, use Quick Attack again! Scyther attack missed!
Poochyena used Bite! A critical hit, does 30 damage!
Scyther Fainted!
Go, Mudkip! Mudkip use Water Gun! does 8 damage.
Pochyena used Howl! Poochyena's attack rose!
Yes, this is almost over! I said happily.
Poochyena, return!
Go, Oddish!
This was bad, Oddish was a grass type and Mudkip was a water type; so Oddish had an advantage.
Mudkip, use Mudslap! does 10 damage.
Oddish, use Poisin Powder! It failed!
Mudkip use Tackle. Mudkip can't move!
Mudkip use Tackle! It's a critical hit, does twenty damage!
Oddish use tackle it does 10 damage!
Mudkip, Finish it off with Mud Slap! does 10 damage!
Oddish fainted!
Go Poochyena! Use Bite! Does 15 damage!
Mudkip, use Mud Slap! does 10 damage.
Mudkip, return! Go Plusle!
Plusle, use quick attack! Does 10 damage.
Poochyena, use Tackle! Does 10 damage.
Plusle! use Quick Atack!
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I beat the trainer and won $200 for wining!
Come on guys, you all need a rest. Let's hurry back to H.Q and tell Brian.


*Gets rid of the red*
I only had the red in the PM so you could easily identify what I changed, you don't need to have it red in the actual mission. Anyways...

Pass. This is definitely an improvement from the first draft you PMed me. You lengthened it, you had more story and you showed some in-character motivation.

Like everyone, there is room for improvement. First, Quick Attack has 100% accuracy. Unless accuracy lowering moves are used or, evasion is increased, it should always hit. Also, don't be afraid to proof read, re-read, and use Spell Check. Also you don't need the ---------------------------------- between paragraphs(except between the header and mission), an extra line of nothing works fine. If you make use of my previous two suggestions, your missions will be surprisingly better. This next part can only be done with experience. It will really help if you flesh out your story. Yes, you started on it, but it has to be said. You can never have too much story. I've seen 39 page missions that could use more story, it's simply something you can't have to much of.

Anyways, it was a fine first mission. Keep the Plusle, take an additional 300 PD (to supplement the 200 that you got), and take a rank up. Congrats.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:49 pm


Jackie nodded and pet Luna and Branch. They swayed slightly and Jackie put them in their pokeballs.

troublespirit


Brian_Link
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:23 pm


*Comes back from making a bunch of posts*
Me: So who all is here?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:27 pm


~Is sitting in a chair reading a book~
hey Brian i was wondering... is there a title in the guild thats Pokemon researcher?

iAgent


Brian_Link
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:35 pm


*Checks the ranks*
Me: Nope, the closest to that was being a BioLab scientist. But we got rid of that.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:59 pm


Corey snapped to from a daydream
"Oh, heya Brian!' Corey greets him
"Sorry about me absence for so long..long and weird story about that."

MGCorey


Teh Soupreme

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:01 pm


Sora wanders around Mt. Coronet.
Man. I have nothing to do.
He then spots a Bronzor.
Tight. A Bronzor. I should catch this one. Come on out Luxio.
Sora throws a pokeball and Luxio appears.

Okay. Let's use an easy Thunder Fang.
Luxio runs to Bronzor with electrical teeth. Luxio quickly jumps up and bites Bronzor hard. Bronzor was hardly hurt. Bronzor quickly sent out a Confusion. The Confusion hit Luxio. Luxio was down to almost yellow life.
Okay. Now use Discharge.
Luxio charges up a massive amount of energy. Bronzor uses an Extrasensory. The attack hits Luxio, but doesn't faze him at all. The attack brings Luxio to a bad yellow life. Luxio lets out the massive amount of energy, which hits Bronzor. Bronzor was brought down to yellow life, barely though. Luxio was sent down a a red life.
Luxio, Crunch Bronzor hard.
Luxio goes running to Bronzor ready to crunch down Broanzor. Bronzor uses Iron Defense to raise it's Defense. Luxio bites Bronzor. Bronzor was then sent down a little more, still at yellow life.
Crunch Bronzor again.
Luxio goes running to Bronzor again. The attack hits Bronzor as Bronzor sends out a Confusion. The Confusion hits Luxio. Luxio was sent down to almost fainting. Bronzor was sent down to red life.
Okay. Now return Luxio. Come on Grotle.
Sora returns Luxio and sends out Grotle. Grotle appears in a white flash.

Okay. Now attack Bronzor with a Bite.
Grotle runs to Bronzor. Bronzor sends out a Confusion. The Confusion hits Grotle. Grotle was easily hurt, but doesn't give up. Grotle bites Bronzor. It hardly sent Bronzor down, but it was clear enough to catch Bronzor. Grotle was easily sent down to yellow life.
Okay. Time to throw a Great Ball. Go!
Sora throws a Great Ball at Bronzor. The ball hits Bronzor and brings him in.

Shake, Wiggle, Bounce......... DING!

The the ding was heard, Sora returned Grotle. Sroa then runs to the Great Ball and picks it up.
Your mine alright.
He puts away the ball and then tries to look for a way out.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:01 pm


MGCorey
Corey snapped to from a daydream
"Oh, heya Brian!' Corey greets him
"Sorry about me absence for so long..long and weird story about that."


Me: Eh, if everyone were perfect, we wouldn't be human.
*Looks at my dull blue hair*
Me: Well 100% human at least.

Brian_Link
Captain


Teh Soupreme

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:02 pm


He wanders around the place and sees a very glowing light. He follows the light and finds his way out. He then looks around and sees Veilstone City.
I am so lucky.
He starts to run and heads over to the Pokemon Center. He gives his pokemon to Nurse Joy, which heals them. In a couple of minutes, Nurse Joy gives him his pokeballs. Sora then runs back out and heads underground.

When he reaches the underground base, he looks around.
Where is our base again?
He looks raound and spots a door.
There it is.
He runs to the door and opens it.
Hello Aquas. Been a while since I was here. Oh wait. It was just yesterday. Hehe.
He goes and sits down on the couch.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:04 pm


~Looks at Brian~
what pokemon are we allowed to capture in Mt. Coronet?

iAgent


Brian_Link
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:12 pm


IceAgent
~Looks at Brian~
what pokemon are we allowed to capture in Mt. Coronet?


Me: Any cave dwelling Pokémon.
*Grabs an ice pack and slowly touches it to my bump*
Me: stressed
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:12 pm


Corey nods at Brian's statement
"Too true on that.." he replies

MGCorey


Teh Soupreme

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:16 pm


Looks at everyone and then Brian.
What happened?
Looks confused.
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