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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:54 pm
MISSION- Flame on! Go find a fire pokemon!
Pokemon: Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600 *I ride my bike to the Mountains and let out my squirtle* Revan: Nothing so far squirtle, lets look around *After 10 minutes of looking around we find a trainer* Trainer: YOU THERE Rev: What Trainer: Trying to steal my Fire types are you! Rev: What? no! Trainer: Lets battle, 2v2! Rev: *Grabs pokeball from belt* your on! *The Trainer throws 2 pokeballs and a Houndour, and Growlithe come out* *I throw mine as Squirtle gets into a ready position for skull bash* *Ghastly comes out* Revan: Lets do this Trainer: Your going down! *The Houndour tries to use crunch on squirtle, but he unleashes his skull bash and hits it in the face doing considerable damage* *The grwolithe also uses crunch, but on ghastly, he dissapears and re-appears behing him and licks the fire type, paralizing him* Rev: NICE! *Squirtle uses bubble beam on it, making him faint, while ghastly uses confuse ray on the Houndour, and it starts to bite itsleft and Squirtle uses water gun, Ko'ing it* Trainer: Grr! My fire's been put out *He runs off* Revan: Well, lets find a fire type *I put ghastly back in his pokeball as we find a Charmander, i crouch down with squirtle as we ready to attack it**Squrtle sends out a water gun, the charmander responds with an ember, then metel claw, both of which dont do much damage against squirtle* *Squitle charges and bites the charmander, I throw a great ball!* *It wobbles 4 times, then stops* Revan: SCORE! Lets head back to base and heal you guys up *Puts squirtle back in its pokeball and rides back to base* **Mission Complete** Update:Squirtle: 1/3/1 Ghastly: 0/1/1 Wurmple: 1/1/0 Seviper: 0/0/0 Magby: 0/0/0 Charmander: 0/0/0 Pok袡lls Normal: 5 Ultra: 1 -Pok譯n- Squirtle,Ghastly, Wurmple, Seviper, Magby, Charmander
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:05 pm
RevanSkywalker MISSION- Flame on! Go find a fire pokemon!
Pokemon: Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600 Sorry I'm going to have to fail this. The main reason is that the charmander battle was over with one Bite. Had it been aSurf or Hydro Pump maybe, but not a bite. I also would've liked more personality in the guy you battled, as well as a little bit more story. But if you at least fix the Charmander battle, I'll pass it.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:11 pm
**Squrtle sends out a water gun, the charmander responds with an ember, then metel claw, both of which dont do much damage against squirtle*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:24 pm
RevanSkywalker **Squrtle sends out a water gun, the charmander responds with an ember, then metel claw, both of which dont do much damage against squirtle* Pass but next time I'd like the changes to be reposted with the whole thing. *Hands over the money*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:25 pm
I edited the main post though....
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:57 pm
RevanSkywalker I edited the main post though.... Me: Then at least say that you editted. But either way its all good. *Tauros raids the fridge*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:35 pm
Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him....
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:37 pm
Bloody Sword Dancer Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him.... Me: He's your trainer. *Sips a Coke*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:40 pm
Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him.... Me: He's your trainer. *Sips a Coke* Blade: Oh Ha Ha. So anyway any news on the next RP? *Blade grabs a can of pepsi, opens it then takes a sip*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:47 pm
Bloody Sword Dancer Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him.... Me: He's your trainer. *Sips a Coke* Blade: Oh Ha Ha. So anyway any news on the next RP? *Blade grabs a can of pepsi, opens it then takes a sip* Me: Thursday 1W/2M/3C/4E sound good? *Blissey grabs a slurpie*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:49 pm
Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him.... Me: He's your trainer. *Sips a Coke* Blade: Oh Ha Ha. So anyway any news on the next RP? *Blade grabs a can of pepsi, opens it then takes a sip* Me: Thursday 1W/2M/3C/4E sound good? *Blissey grabs a slurpie* Blade:*thinks* Sounds pretty good to me. I believe I can make it, assuming RL doesn't get in the way.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:55 pm
Bloody Sword Dancer Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Brian_Link Bloody Sword Dancer Dark:*walks around HQ looking emotionless. He looks around then heads into his lab* Blade:Wonder what's bothering him.... Me: He's your trainer. *Sips a Coke* Blade: Oh Ha Ha. So anyway any news on the next RP? *Blade grabs a can of pepsi, opens it then takes a sip* Me: Thursday 1W/2M/3C/4E sound good? *Blissey grabs a slurpie* Blade:*thinks* Sounds pretty good to me. I believe I can make it, assuming RL doesn't get in the way. Me: But to warn you... unless you got the soundproof ability... you're going to want earmuffs. *Goes to compy*
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 3:47 pm
FlameRed1 Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box. Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one): Zigzagoon Voltorb Duskull Funds upon completion: 1000 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I just joined team aqua when I heard about a mission by some more members; I thought it was a good opportunity to show why I wanted to join team aqua, so I went to the mission board and saw the mission the other members must have been on about, it was called Night raid on Devon, It looked good and I was ready for it, so I put my name down to do the mission, and went to Devon ready with my trusty Carvanha and Geodude, the night came quickly, and I new there were going to be guards about but that didn’t worry me, I sneaked behind one of the guards as he entered the building, as I entered I noticed, the room had about four guards all armed with a Pokeball, so I didn’t want to get noticed, I slipped past one guard as he turned around and sat in a dark corner, thinking on how to get past them, I knew I had to make I diversion and chucked a rock over to the other corner furthest away from the stairs, and I crawled fast put un-noticed to the stairs and up making sure no one was following me or coming down the stairs, I sneaked up to see what was going on, and noticed that there was no guards in this room and I wondered why, I walked in making sure there were no cameras, and then suddenly I heard a noise to my side and turned to find a Duskull standing there watching me, but it looked ready for battle so I chucked my Pokeball out and Carvanha appeared, looking fierce as always, Duskull was first to strike with a night shade attack but Carvanha just jumped out the way before striking back with a super effective bite attack, tacking it hp low, it gave Carvanha a scary leer attack then using night shade to blast Carvanha back, but taking its memories of leer away, before Carvanha strikes with a deadly Bite attack nearly knocking the pokemon out, after wards I returned Carvanha and chucked a Pokeball at the Duskull, the Pokeball rolled around for some time, before the centre red light went back to being white again, and I continued my travels to get the PokeNAVs, I walked on to here so guards running down the stairs saying they heard something, I hid behind a big plant and quickly ran to the top of the stairs, without being caught, I nearly got caught by a guard, but he turned the other way, and I hid near a desk. I noticed there was a far desk with a box that said PokeNAVs on, but the guards were surrounding the table, I sent out my Duskull out to make a distraction with night shade, before running to another desk closer to the box, then Duskull used a long nightshade to distract all the guards and I managed to grab the box, before, jumping through a open window and using Geodude to float me back to the ground, I then ran round the corner and onto the beach, and located the aqua submarine near by, and swam to base from there before giving the PokeNAVs to the Team Aqua Adim. Pass, and I'll give you a rank up for doing your first mission. *Puts you on the roster officially* Now for some tips that will help you in future missions. First off you could avoid using huge run-on sentences. Periods are very important writing tools and break up what is being read, and therefor easier to read. Then your battle would be better if you put it in a seperate paragragh. Finally, a more elaborate story would be appreciated. A sentence per guard(s) isn't suspensful. But I can see potential, Good job.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 4:30 pm
Dark:*walks back up from his lab holding an anoucment* So there's an RP Thursday? *Dark pulls out his cell phone and dials a number. He mumbles somthing to the person on the other end and hangs up.*
Blade:Who'd you call? Dark:I ordered pizza for after the RP. Blade:You ordered it 2 days early... Dark:Nah I told them to drop it off on thursday cause I'd forget to order if I wait. Blade: Makes sence I guess.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:54 pm
Sojiro turns his head and puts his hand on the hilt of his sword.
"Put it away son. Its not worth you getting beat again."
((((((((((((((Don't kill meh suiken!! crying ))))))))))))))
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