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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:18 pm
Man, I severely messed up with this story...
Tried to make it into a short story in the beggining but halfway in decided to change it to a novel...
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:19 pm
Yeys! Now where should I post? And what is Ritsuka going to wear...?
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:20 pm
That's not a good idea El Fuego... I've tried that before. >< It ends up coming out kind of strange because the length is in between a short story and a really big novel. O_o;
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:20 pm
So it's a bad thing you decided to change it into a novel?
If it means anything.. i turned a story i was going to use for a Webcomic.. into a novel.. which i should get working on.. except my problem is i can't think of evil sounding names.. like end of the world type evil names... and there's not enough detail in my stories..
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:21 pm
Eh, I stopped it at five paragraphs and turned it into the epilogue, but it's still horribly done...
Edit: When you change it like that it changes the tempo of then events occuring, well at least the way I write. My short stories have events flying about but my novel's have events slowly going by and so the pace dramatically changes throught the whole of it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:22 pm
Wait..... the story's only five paragraph's long???
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:24 pm
ah Winter, can we RP in the Skylit Art Studio?
I havent been there yet^^
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:24 pm
I stopped up short...
Plus that's only the epilogue.
Edit: Prelude I mean.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:24 pm
Don't you mean a prologue??
Prologue=before the beginning.
Epilogue= after the end..
So it's horribly done.. tis why we go back and edit. 3nodding You can't expect everything to turn out perfectly on the first attempt.
unless you do.. that would be bad..
Edit: you can ignore the = parts..
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:25 pm
Its to closed up.... I need the open air with nature and stuff... ; ;
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:27 pm
ahh okies.
how bout the Green house?
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:29 pm
Poshted at the Hot Springs Chelby, though it's horrible.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:29 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:29 pm
Prologue! That's it! I'm really brain-dead right now...
But, that's the first time I've ever messed up! Dx
Well, 'cept for one other time but that was years ago...
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:30 pm
okies, I'll post back, hope you don't mind terribly much if it's short.
And I think I'm inventing a new character.
Just now^^
Cause I don't want Joy to be in two places at once.
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