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 Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:48 pm
Unless someone else says otherwise, I don't think single handed hand signs should be allowed unless it's in your bloodline. So you have to change that P.A.
One of your fears is dying in battle. That is a little sketchy. If it makes your character hesitate before fighting I will consider it a fear. If not you are going to have to come up with something a little more tangible. <<
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:12 pm
Dainar Inferni  ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Akira Yoshida
Nickname: Alexander Napoleon Trvowschy Neecham the III
Age: 13
Birthdate: July 21
Gender: Female
Height: 4'9"
Weight: 90 Lbs.
Nindo: "Yay yay! Tea time!"
Personality: Akira is a teenager. She's an eccentric genius and a wild animal. Never walking in a normal fashion, she usually prefers to run with her arms flailing, crawling, somersaulting, or walking on her hands. As a free spirit, she shows excessive emotions, like howling or growling like a dog. She talks in third person and respond to most people with nonsensical phrases. Akira is a skinny copper skinned androgynous girl with tufts of bright red hair. She wears a loose sleeveless shirt, tight bicycle shorts, and never wears footwear. She also dons a pair of large green goggles on her head, people mistaken her as a boy sometimes because the fact that her chest is very flat showing that she has not hit puberty yet.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Sensor
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Bloodline: The Paper Arts - Origami no Dara
(Approved)
Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Fuuton and Raiton
Chakra Color: Silver with a tinge of Vermillion
Chakra Materialization: Looks like crackling Electricity or swirling Wind.
Strengths:
• Ability to sense chakra
• Bukijutsu
Weaknesses:
• Katon
• Fighting Genjutsus
Fears:
• Being Alone Forever
• Being Bored Forever
Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
• Scout: Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
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Personal Attributes:
• Origami Genius - Akira can make beautiful pieces of art very fast (-1 post to create origami or draw on paper)
• Copycat Genius - Akira can learn much faster than normal people by observing their movements carefully (-1 post to learn a technique while with another person)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
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Weapon Type: Ninjato
Weapon Range: 19 in.
Weapon Weight: .92 lbs.
Weapon Location:
• Vertical in center, on the back▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 Shuriken
• 15 Kunai
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton
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Raiton
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Origami no Dara
•▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u•▬▬┤|T a i j u t s uN/A
N/A▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Kiss of Flesh and Steel
S t a g e 1
•
Juurai Toorima
S t a g e 1
• ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Akira was born in Kirigakure, her mother died at childbirth despite the medical nin's assistance and her father was left to take care of her. Her father was an eccentric man, not really parent material. He always traveled to different places, leaving his daughter in the hands of a neighbor. At the age of 3, her father who had left for a trip, never returned. As she grew up, the neighbors had adopted her but claimed that she was a little touched in the head, sweet but a bit obnoxious. She showed talent in becoming a shinobi and they enrolled her in the Ninja Academy. With her genius mind, she finished at the top of her class and is now a Genin.
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:18 pm
- At least one tangible fear
- 'randosity' as a weakness doesn't count.
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:47 pm
Dainar Inferni Dainar Inferni ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Akira Yoshida
Nickname: Alexander Napoleon Trvowschy Neecham the III
Age: 13
Birthdate: July 21
Gender: Female
Height: 4'9"
Weight: 90 Lbs.
Nindo: "Yay yay! Tea time!"
Personality: Akira is a teenager. She's an eccentric genius and a wild animal. Never walking in a normal fashion, she usually prefers to run with her arms flailing, crawling, somersaulting, or walking on her hands. As a free spirit, she shows excessive emotions, like howling or growling like a dog. She talks in third person and respond to most people with nonsensical phrases. Akira is a skinny copper skinned androgynous girl with tufts of bright red hair. She wears a loose sleeveless shirt, tight bicycle shorts, and never wears footwear. She also dons a pair of large green goggles on her head, people mistaken her as a boy sometimes because the fact that her chest is very flat showing that she has not hit puberty yet.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Sensor
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Bloodline: The Paper Arts - Origami no Dara
(Approved)
Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Fuuton and Raiton
Chakra Color: Silver with a tinge of Vermillion
Chakra Materialization: Looks like crackling Electricity or swirling Wind.
Strengths:
• Ability to sense chakra
• Bukijutsu
Weaknesses:
• Katon
• Fighting Genjutsus
Fears:
• Being Alone Forever
• Turtles
Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
• Scout: Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
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Personal Attributes:
• Origami Genius - Akira can make beautiful pieces of art very fast (-1 post to create origami or draw on paper)
• Copycat Genius - Akira can learn much faster than normal people by observing their movements carefully (-1 post to learn a technique while with another person)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
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Weapon Type: Ninjato
Weapon Range: 19 in.
Weapon Weight: .92 lbs.
Weapon Location:
• Vertical in center, on the back▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 Shuriken
• 15 Kunai
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton
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Raiton
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Origami no Dara
•▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u•▬▬┤|T a i j u t s uN/A
N/A▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Kiss of Flesh and Steel
S t a g e 1
•
Juurai Toorima
S t a g e 1
• ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Akira was born in Kirigakure, her mother died at childbirth despite the medical nin's assistance and her father was left to take care of her. Her father was an eccentric man, not really parent material. He always traveled to different places, leaving his daughter in the hands of a neighbor. At the age of 3, her father who had left for a trip, never returned. As she grew up, the neighbors had adopted her but claimed that she was a little touched in the head, sweet but a bit obnoxious. She showed talent in becoming a shinobi and they enrolled her in the Ninja Academy. With her genius mind, she finished at the top of her class and is now a Genin.
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:57 pm
digital m u f f i n s
- At least one tangible fear
- 'randosity' as a weakness doesn't count.
Changed with - Fighting Genjutsus as a Weakness - Turtles as a Tangible Fear
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:56 pm
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Full Name: Skye Kyohaku Oni
Nickname: Sky Or Hoshi
Age: 15
Birthdate: 3/20
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11/180
Weight: 172/78
Nindo: "Life Is Precious To A Shinobi That Why I Live To Protect The Life Of My Shinobi Comrades"
Personality: Skye isn't to temperamental, so he's kind of laid back and relaxed with a bit of a perverted side to him.
Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Oni Clan
Chakra Pool: 270
Chakra Element: Katon and Raiton
Chakra Color: Silver
Chakra Materialization: It appears as sparking aura.
Strengths:
• He's Very Adept When It Comes Close Combat
• As A Ninjutsu Class Of Course Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Realizing Genjutsu
• Resisting Beautiful Women
Fears:
• Becoming Like His Father
• Being The Cause Of A Comrade's Death
Class Attributes:
•Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
•Class Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
•Speed Slightly Increased
•Learns Bukijutsu 1 post faster
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Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 24 in.
Weapon Weight: 7kg
Weapon Location: Waist Sheath
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• Shuriken x15
• Kunai x15
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Zues's Gift [Raiton]
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Hell's Whip [Katon]
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Drunk? WhatyoutalkinboutWillis!? [Saketon]
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
• {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Skye grew up in a drunkard home, both parents were both drunkards but that's only due to his bloodline. His father was a very diluted man and would go on sporadic fits where he would beat his mother. Growing up this scarred Skye and made him hate his father and when he had turned 13 he fought his father losing badly giving him multiple scars on his face, his father left after that realizing that he was not wanted in the house hold.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 9:37 am
Mmm... I'd like you to clarify your strengths and weaknesses a bit more, if possible. It also seems odd that you have a strength of "close-combat" but a weakness of "taijutsu." Something like "Realizing genjutsu" would be an acceptable weakness, because as an Oni clan member, reality might already seem kind of whacky to you.
You should probably fix his first fear to be "Becoming like his father", too.
Umm... and have your first attribute read "Speed slightly increased", please.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:04 am
Shinsua Mmm... I'd like you to clarify your strengths and weaknesses a bit more, if possible. It also seems odd that you have a strength of "close-combat" but a weakness of "taijutsu." Something like "Realizing genjutsu" would be an acceptable weakness, because as an Oni clan member, reality might already seem kind of whacky to you.
You should probably fix his first fear to be "Becoming like his father", too.
Umm... and have your first attribute read "Speed slightly increased", please.
How's That?
break the two of us...
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:04 pm
digital m u f f i n s Unless someone else says otherwise, I don't think single handed hand signs should be allowed unless it's in your bloodline. So you have to change that P.A.
One of your fears is dying in battle. That is a little sketchy. If it makes your character hesitate before fighting I will consider it a fear. If not you are going to have to come up with something a little more tangible. <<
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:07 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Yuuto Kurama Nakamura
Nickname: Ghost
Age: 17
Birthdate: December 26
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 158 lb.
Nindo: "Everyone has their own way of saving the world, with its best intentions at heart. Mine is just more...entertaining. See how the humans crawl around like ants? Disgusting."
Personality: Yuuto enjoys pinning people against each other, watching friends fight each other. His form of 'entertainment' involves twisting the logic of others, confusing them until they either begin to despair, or simply start to fear him. His entire life is based on lies, there is a falsehood lurking in almost each and every one of his statements. Yuuto despises friendship and family with his entire being due to his history. However, his alternate personality is not as sadistic as he is. While he is blood-thirsty and fearless, his alternate personality his much more fearsome. Ghost, as he has dubbed his other side, is cold, calculating, merciless, and always sorrowful. Ghost only appears in intense and negative emotional situations, or when Yuuto is in danger of losing his life.
Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Medical
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Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Fire, Wind
Chakra Color: Dark purple
Chakra Materialization: When calm, it seeps from him like a miasma. Once angered, it spirals around him and extends upwards towards the sky.
Strengths:
• Strategist
• Genjutsu
• Quick reflexes
• Never underestimates someone
Weaknesses:
• Water jutsu
• Taijutsu
• Acts without thinking when angered
Fears:
• Letting someone get close to him
• Insistent kindness
Class Attributes:
• Percieving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu [1] post faster
Bloodline Reductions:
• All Sakkakugan users learn genjutsu [1] post faster
• Genjutsu rank D - C cost [5] less chakra to perform.
• Genjutsu rank B - A cost [10] less chakra to perform.
• Genjutsu rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform.
• Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform.
• Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. )
Personal Attributes:
• Chakra Expert: Learn ninjutsu [1] post faster
• Smooth Talker: Gain 1.5 times more the amount of ryo from missions
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Taijutsu Styles : : 0 / 0
• Bukijutsu Styles : : 0 / 0
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 08
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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 34 in.
Weapon Weight: 3 lb.
Weapon Location: On his back
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• Kunai x10
• Senbon x20
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Fuuton
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Sakkakugan
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Eiseijutsu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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Not much is known about Yuuto. He arrived at Yukigakure no Sato suddenly one night when he was a child, with scratches and bruises marring his body. His eyes were dulled, and anyone who saw him would think that he was already dead. The most strange thing was that he had blood-streaks running down his cheeks, as if they were tears. The Yukikage however took him in. Yuuto has never once uttered a word about his past ever since, and he was dubbed an enigma because of it. He was originally from the genjutsu-heavy Kurama clan because of his bloodline, and changed his first name when he enrolled in the ninja academy. It is suspected that no one knows what his first name originally was or where his birthplace was.
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:42 am
Approved. X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X . But in the future, please wait until your profile is approved before you start posting. Pending. Your second personal attribute, "Prodigious Mind", is not acceptable. Increasing the AC gain is not allowed. Increasing the Ryo gained is possible.
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 9:07 pm
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