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 Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 9:35 am
Dark1313 MISSION- Flame on! Go find a fire pokemon! Pokemon: Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon Money: 600 ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Fail. First off, fix the structure of what you write, its annoying to read. Lines shouldn't be longer than each other, except for at the end of a paragragh. Which leads to my next point, use more paragraghs. Finally, which may not be all, Mean Look prevents the opponent from escaping. You'll have to fight that Poochyena. (Heck trainers don't get intimidated that easilly anyways)
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:04 am
*Walks out of tent*
Me:Hello anyone who's here.
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:08 am
squirtlelover101 *Walks out of tent* Me:Hello anyone who's here. Me: Hey SL. *Sits back on a rock*
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:09 am
I quit I cant do anything right
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:44 am
Wakes up.
Ahh. Afternoon people.
He gets up from where he is from sleeping all day.
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 1:39 pm
*Wakes up next to the pokecenter*
Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 1:49 pm
squirtlelover101 *Wakes up next to the pokecenter* Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja Me: I see lots of things. *Someone tries to take my PokéBalls and I smack them in the face*
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 1:54 pm
Brian_Link squirtlelover101 *Wakes up next to the pokecenter* Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja Me: I see lots of things. *Someone tries to take my PokéBalls and I smack them in the face* Me:Hi Brian. *Looks at the person you just smacked* Me:That was randomness...O.o
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 1:59 pm
squirtlelover101 Brian_Link squirtlelover101 *Wakes up next to the pokecenter* Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja Me: I see lots of things. *Someone tries to take my PokéBalls and I smack them in the face* Me:Hi Brian. *Looks at the person you just smacked* Me:That was randomness...O.o Me: Well that guy tried 3 times today to steal my stuff, it was getting annoying. *He goes and runs off to a building on the northern part of town*
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 2:00 pm
Brian_Link squirtlelover101 Brian_Link squirtlelover101 *Wakes up next to the pokecenter* Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja Me: I see lots of things. *Someone tries to take my PokéBalls and I smack them in the face* Me:Hi Brian. *Looks at the person you just smacked* Me:That was randomness...O.o Me: Well that guy tried 3 times today to steal my stuff, it was getting annoying. *He goes and runs off to a building on the northern part of town* Me:Oh, well that explains it. *Looks around* Me:Too many people around here...I HATE big cities!>.<
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 2:04 pm
Sport walks out of his tent. "Hey everybody!" he says.
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 2:05 pm
squirtlelover101 Brian_Link squirtlelover101 Brian_Link squirtlelover101 *Wakes up next to the pokecenter* Me:Woops...Guess I fell asleep...I hope no one saw that... ninja Me: I see lots of things. *Someone tries to take my PokéBalls and I smack them in the face* Me:Hi Brian. *Looks at the person you just smacked* Me:That was randomness...O.o Me: Well that guy tried 3 times today to steal my stuff, it was getting annoying. *He goes and runs off to a building on the northern part of town* Me:Oh, well that explains it. *Looks around* Me:Too many people around here...I HATE big cities!>.< Me: I know. I ain't a city dweller my self. But what must be done must be done. *Wanders around*
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 2:09 pm
*Waves to Sport*
Me:Hi.
*Spots the gym*
Me:Co-ol. ^_^
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 2:10 pm
*TADS starts to beep*
Me:NOOOOO!!! gonk I've gotta go...
*Runs out of the town, leaving a trail of dust behind her*
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 8:11 pm
Wakes up in bushes.
Uh.
Gets up.
How did I get in these bushes? I must've had a bad night.
Walks around looking for the others.
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