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 Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:18 pm
[ Deadly Maze ]
It sort of seems like you crapped out on your idea half way through. Care to reword it or anything? ^ ^;
[ Random Manipulation ]
Have its rank read "Passive", and then note that it'll take 5 posts for you to learn it.
[ Infectious Blood ]
Mmm... I'll have to say no. It's sort of like the dragon on a smaller scale.. and the dragon is already a freakin' ridiculous technique. x . x
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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:06 pm
Those three techniques sound a lot like Deadman Wonderland. >.> I must ask: from where did the inspiration for the techniques come? It seems a bit strange to me to come up with an idea as similar to DW as this one without a really good source.
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:22 am
Ergo War Those three techniques sound a lot like Deadman Wonderland. >.> I must ask: from where did the inspiration for the techniques come? It seems a bit strange to me to come up with an idea as similar to DW as this one without a really good source.
@Shin: Okay, they are fixed.
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:36 pm
Alright, that's all I needed. Feel free to send a technique list, if you would like to do so, but I do not need it.
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:26 am
Well, I won't send it unless ya really need it. It's reeaaaalllyyy freaking long. But if ya decide ya need it, I'll send it for ya. (:
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 9:44 am
Character: Fuyu Aoi
Technique Name: Genwaku Jitsugen [Blinding Realization]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The genjutsu effects all the senses but, it starts with a purely optical trigger. The user will take out a kunai in whatever position they are in and casually begin to twirl it, by putting the ring on the butt of the kunai on a finger. Again the user will casually spin the kunai around his or her finger maybe even engaging in conversation the opponent non the wiser to the situation. This tactic is the perfect sneak attack for a lull in battle, the opponent must be looking in the users general direction and be fully aware that the user is spinning the kunai. (Target also cannot say they were looking at the user and not the kunai as it only requires you to be aware the kunai is being twirled.) Once a complete post has passed of the target observing the user while the kunai is twirled the target will start to get tunnel vision. Once this starts the opponent is already trapped in the genjutsu. By the end of the post they will lose their ability to hear, see, smell, taste, and move their body. Their body and mind loses communication causing the fully functioning body to fall into a psuedo comatose state. (This cant be kai'd or released by pain as the opponent is literally in a psuedo comatose state. The opponent also cannot release themselves in the same post they fall under the genjutsu. )
Thought it was a clever genjutsu when I came up with it off hand, so why not use it? ^^
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:15 pm
o_-
Alrighty... so...
• It's a visual trigger genjutsu- kunai spin.
• A post must pass for the genjutsu to activate.
• Even if the kunai is in the user's peripheral vision, it still works.
• Leaves the body comatose, but the mind believes it is still active- paralysis.
Doop... Mmm... if you can simplify the wording, it should be fine.
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:20 pm
You got the last bullet backwards. The mind believes it is comatose therefor the target loses all function as if they are trapped in their own mind, cant see, hear, etc. Simplify it a little like what? .-.
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:48 pm
But... if the mind believes it's comatose, then the afflicted will know they are in a genjutsu. =/
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 9:47 am
Character: Sanshi Satetsu
Technique Name: Iron Sand particles
Rank: E-S
Type: Bloodline: Satetsu
Description: The Iron sand particle technique allows San to pulverize his Iron sand into indectable flakes that form a 360 degree magnetic field that allows him to instantly know where everything in the room is without having to use a post for a sensor jutsu. On top of that, because it is dust, offering a larger amount of chakra San can recombine the particles into their normal size allowing his bloodline techniques to appear "out of nowhere." (the second part of the jutsu can only happen if a field is already in place, and using a bloodline skill 2 ranks over what the field is eliminates the field.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:47 am
Uuuuhhhhh.... Mmmmmm....
C Rank: Small radius (5 yards)
B Rank: Medium radius (10 yards)
A Rank: Large radius (20 yards)
S Rank: Huge radius (30 yards)
With that, I think it would be okay.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:07 pm
oh yeah, i ment with the leveled rank of chakra that different levels would increase the size of the field. thanks
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:55 pm
Alright your good brother go ahead and post it up.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 1:10 pm
posted it in my post on the first page
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:16 pm
Character: Doku Le
Technique Name: Cloud of Cranes
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Paper Release
Description: Doku sends out a 'flood' of papers in to the air, and folds them with the chakra that is soaked in to them. They turn in to Origami Cranes that will simply float through the area. Doku is then able to make them glow, lighting up the area, in any color she desires. This was initially created due to her fear of candles, and sometimes being without another light source. However, it is now able to be used for other attacks, as a base.
Character: Doku Le
Technique Name: Paper Coffin
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Paper Release
Description: This technique allows for Doku to send out a mass of paper in to the air, or to creep along the ground. The paper will then shoot up outwards, and wrap around the opponent, much like the Desert Coffin technique. Unable to kill the opponent, it is able to take [-5] chakra away from them per post. It constricts and binds the opponent to the point where they are unable to move on the inside, though the pressure isn't enough to break bones or cut off circulations.
Character: Doku Le
Technique Name: Paper Funeral
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Paper Release
Description: This is the follow up technique to Paper Coffin. With the opponent constricted within the Coffin, they open their hands up, and then 'crush' their hand in to a fist, following a motion like they're actually crushing their opponent. The paper smashes together, crushing the opponent on the inside, turning them in to a dead, bloody mess.
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