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Giuseppe DeAngelo

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:13 pm


Raidatheblade
((since he's an over-arcing villian i figured it would be fine, and i only used fac ts pre-established by his or her bio's, and if she feels that i shouldn't use him, then she can say so and i'll remove it

do you think they had time to fight back.... they lived on an island, I meant it as they were asleep and the pirates attacked and pretty much killed them before they had time to wake up


and I admit the poison thing was stupid, but oops, my bad.

and thats not how i'll fight; it'lll just mean that i can move really fast...what you want me to be a slow assassin?

and I said magic/elemental poisons still effect me, i would assume that the evil bad-a** troop guys wouldn't be using your run-of-the-mill poisons. besides, i can still be shot...


and he only ecscaped when they were about tokill him because for the rest of the time he was under high security; they don't guard a 'dead-man'

so to me it does make sense. evil ))



(( Still, always ask permission

Anyways, It all just doesn't make sence to me. And from reading those past posts, It seems more then clear to me that Cobra wouldn't like you in the group he is in. It'll only lead to fights. But still you're trying to force yourself in.

To me, Your new character fails. Big time))
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:14 pm


((since he's an over-arcing villian i figured it would be fine, and i only used fac ts pre-established by his or her bio's, and if she feels that i shouldn't use him, then she can say so and i'll remove it

do you think they had time to fight back.... they lived on an island, I meant it as they were asleep and the pirates attacked and pretty much killed them before they had time to wake up


and I admit the poison thing was stupid, but oops, my bad.

and thats not how i'll fight; it'lll just mean that i can move really fast...what you want me to be a slow assassin?

and I said magic/elemental poisons still effect me, i would assume that the evil bad-a** troop guys wouldn't be using your run-of-the-mill poisons. besides, i can still be shot...


and he only ecscaped when they were about tokill him because for the rest of the time he was under high security; they don't guard a 'dead-man'

so to me it does make sense. evil ))

iamanarwhal
Crew


iamanarwhal
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:15 pm


((me and cobra have been talking about these things in posts, i've pretty much expected everything he's done so far.

and it's okay if you think so, that's your opinion))
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:17 pm


((Wich "Posts"? I don't see em nowhere. xd ))

Giuseppe DeAngelo


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:19 pm


Cobra_X
(This is an OOC discussion, take your posts and put them in there...I will do the same with this one when your posts are in the proper area.)

(On a side note to Thymen, I have spoken to Raida about all of these things and his current use of Raphael in my opinion is perfectly valid. However we can move the discussion elsewhere first)


His backstory is a thing of the past, we have discussed it. Whats relevant is his current reason to join the group and I think its pretty innovative and uses the NPC character well. Tying him to the group ina while and making him valuable to us without controlling the NPC much at all. (Keep in mind, controlling him in the present is far different then making up a connection with him in the past, especially when its within the framework of the NPCs established story)

Persoanlly, I would approve his new post. we can wait for Priya on a final word however.

Cobra may not get along with his character for several reasons, but thats not to say he wont realize the man's usefullness. if nothing else, it will lead to interesting RP situations
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:22 pm


Thymen
((Wich "Posts"? I don't see em nowhere. xd ))


sry, mistype I meant pm's


also ty cobra

iamanarwhal
Crew


Giuseppe DeAngelo

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:26 pm


Alright, I guess the character does make sence and it's just me.
What does irritate me, and when you used Vash aswell
Is that you type in first-person:

I walk to the door and open it. Then I .
I
I
I
I.

Use the character's name, or "He" instead.

For others to read I is very confusing. Not to mention annoying.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:27 pm


I realize that,... thats why if you check the last few posts, you'll see that I stopped using asteriks and starting saying Raida.

iamanarwhal
Crew


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:29 pm


Yeah I brought that up to him as well.

...he says that's how he learned, so we'll just have to work the bad habit out of him as we go. You have a legit point here Thymen as it is a standard rule that people not RP like that. However, we are a bit more casual about the RPing around here, so for now it's not TERRIBLE, though it's something i would like to see him develop out of.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:04 pm


Let it be known that I have not taken a look at the elemental RP yet. Only here so far.

Raida I really do hope you grow out of the habit that Thymen and Cobra were just discussing. They aren't the only two troubled by it. More have come to me saying that it confusing them as well.

Now I'l have a look at the RP.

ThinkingHurts321
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ThinkingHurts321
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:37 pm


Raidatheblade
"Because I was contacted about a year ago by a man who called himself the king of the ice kingdom. I went to meet him where he told me too, and I found a large palace covered in ice and snow. I went to the throne room and met with this man named Raphael. He hired me to poison the members of a rebel group and told me where to find them. So I spent 2 months living in the ice kingdom and learning they're ways while I slowly worked my way into the organization. After those two months I had learned how this Raphael had come to power, and how he had killed the queen and tried to kill the princess. I was so sickened that I revealed myself to the rebels and told them all I knew. I went back to Raphael and claimed to have killed them, and took the money he gave me and donated it to them. Since I have helped them gain members, and then came here to find Allure. I have been searching for about 6 months, and I got lucky when I looked through Vash's notes. So my reasons for joining you are to overthrow Raphael and have him pay for his betrayal."


I'd like to make a point that there was never a rebel group included in the story and such is with good reason. The king, Allure's father, fled with the queen, her mother, and were labeled for doing so. The king found the corruption hidden behind the stone castle walls but only he and his as wife along with those who worked within the castle knew of it. When they fled and when Raphael took power, he labeled them as "Traitors".

At the time he wasn't viewed negatively because nobody besides those in the castle knew what was going on. As a prince, not even Allure's father knew. Tried to bring an aura of secrecy with that.

With time, the kingdom changed and the people suffered. It is still unlikely for their to be a rebel group since Raphael has the Fire Tribe on his side.

Within palace walls are a chosen few that will aid the group later. Their hopes being that the rightful heiress would return. They'll be NCPs probably. Will worry about that when the time comes.

Don't add things please. If you asked permission then I may have allowed it.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:06 pm


if you want him gone, I can take care of it.

Sam uses a plain-ol'-custom-built(I guess that doesn't make it plain...) Musket. No fancy add-ons, Just heavy lead balls flying out a tube at an incredible velocity
(Shut up... I know that's gonna spark a lot of ineuendo comments)

Or Erin could just tie him up and do socially un-redeeming things to him with a cheese grater...

Or Pete could nom his hair...

Speaking of which, should I post a profile for pete?

Teqnologyque

Tipsy Nymph


ThinkingHurts321
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:12 pm


Is Pete going to talk? XD If so then make him a Personal NCP.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:21 pm


no, he'll just do the normal Pigeon stuff. Unless you want something totally crazy and outlandish!

Teqnologyque

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:09 pm


This would be a lot easier if everyone was on so I can figure out the little details of the story, time to read back a few pages!
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