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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:08 pm
redbird_23 MISSION- Birch's First Break-in Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Prof. Birch's lab in Littleroot and steal one of his three pokemon (Treeko, Torchic, Mudkip). You must sneak in at night. But don't get caught by Prof. Birch or his assistant. At some point you must battle the pokemon you stole/are stealing, if you want to catch it. Pokemon: Treecko Torchic Mudkip Funds upon completion: 300 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fail. Although it is an easy Level 1 mission, you make it way too easy. A bit more stealth could be added, plus the fact that the mission is supposed to take place during the night (which you never stated). There are two problems with your battle: 1. Corphish can't learn Bite 2. Pokemon can't dodge Pokeballs. At the end you have Archie passing your mission. There are also a couple problems with this: 1. You must have someone in Tier 2 or up grade the mission 2. Archie is not the leader of Aqua in this RP.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:12 pm
redbird_23 It was my first day at Team Aqua and I am just sitting there in my room thinking of something to do when I realize there is some missions I could do. I run down to the message board and fin this one: MISSION- Birch's First Break-in Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Prof. Birch's lab in Littleroot and steal one of his three pokemon (Treeko, Torchic, Mudkip). You must sneak in at night. But don't get caught by Prof. Birch or his assistant. At some point you must battle the pokemon you stole/are stealing, if you want to catch it. Pokemon: Treecko Torchic Mudkip Funds upon completion: 300. *A meteor crashes down just outside HQ. As the dust clears, a trainer with an irritated look stomps up out of the crater* You're new here so perhaps you don't yet know this. Archie IS NOT the Team Leader. He was overthrown LONG before even I joined up. Please do not make that mistake again. *Waves Dreamcatcher menacingly* As for the mission, not a bad effort for your first attempt. I don't know what "Leaf Cut" is supposed to be, but Treeko can't use Leaf Blade. Absorb or Mega Drain would make a lot more sense. In the future, try to expand on your battles. I found the lack of details pretty boring. Also, some of the mission graders would like a minimum length of about one-and-a-half pages in Word, so extra details will help you there, too. Oh well, as long as I'm here, I might as well stay a few minutes. *Goes inside to grab a soda*
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:15 pm
*walks in and sends out Flygon*
Me: Anyone up for heading to Shoal Cave?
*hops on Flygon but waits for the rest to answer*
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:16 pm
*Hunter jumps at the loud crash outside HQ*
Me: What the?!?
*Hunter stands up and turns around to find Thard walking through the entrance*
Me: Thard! =D
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:16 pm
HunterMetroid64 Fail. Although it is an easy Level 1 mission, you make it way too easy. A bit more stealth could be added, plus the fact that the mission is supposed to take place during the night (which you never stated). There are two problems with your battle: 1. Corphish can't learn Bite 2. Pokemon can't dodge Pokeballs. At the end you have Archie passing your mission. There are also a couple problems with this: 1. You must have someone in Tier 2 or up grade the mission 2. Archie is not the leader of Aqua in this RP. Ah, hello Hunter! He actually did specify that it was nighttime. But you are right about Corphish. I completely overlooked that in my review! *Puts Dreamcatcher away and sits on the couch*
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:20 pm
Thard_Verad Ah, hello Hunter! He actually did specify that it was nighttime. But you are right about Corphish. I completely overlooked that in my review! *Puts Dreamcatcher away and sits on the couch* *Hunter reads through the mission a little more thoroughly this time* Me: You're right! >.> Nevertheless, I stand by what I said aside from that
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:22 pm
*waves his arm randomly*
Me: What am I, chopped liver? Who wants to go to Shoal Cave?
*waves at Thard*
Me: And hey! Long time no see not counting your mission reports anyways...
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:23 pm
Oh, but enough disecting the mission. How've things been here in Aqua lately? Legendary Brilliance Gang giving you any trouble?
*Casually sips the soda*
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:24 pm
Sportsman189 *waves his arm randomly* Me: What am I, chopped liver? Who wants to go to Shoal Cave? *waves at Thard* Me: And hey! Long time no see not counting your mission reports anyways...*Waves back* Hi Sportwurst! razz Didn't mean to ignore ya. I'm not gonna go on the TRP, but don't let me keep anyone else from going!
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:27 pm
Thard_Verad Oh, but enough disecting the mission. How've things been here in Aqua lately? Legendary Brilliance Gang giving you any trouble? *Casually sips the soda* Me: Things have been fairly quiet, aside from a few run-ins with Teams Zypher and Lunar *Hunter looks at Sport* Me: And to answer your question: Yes, you are chopped liver xP
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:28 pm
HunterMetroid64 Me: Things have been fairly quiet, aside from a few run-ins with Teams Zypher and Lunar *Hunter looks at Sport* Me: And to answer your question: Yes, you are chopped liver xP *sends out Charizard* Me: Flamethrower on Hunter. *Charizard spits flame from his mouth* Me: Never call me chopped liver again. *looks at Thard* Me: And stop taking all the missions!
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:30 pm
HunterMetroid64 Me: Things have been fairly quiet, aside from a few run-ins with Teams Zypher and Lunar *Hunter looks at Sport* Me: And to answer your question: Yes, you are chopped liver xP Well, I guess it's not all bad that some of those teams are still active. After all, it'll keep everyone sharp knowing there are enemies around. *Pulls out a Penumbra sword and begins idly polishing it* *Turns to Sport* Oh, that's right! You made Tier 2 and you're itching to grade a mission, eh? Okay then, next time Red reposts that mission I'll step back and let you take care of it. I just figured people would appreciate a prompt review, so if I find it first....
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:33 pm
Sportsman189 *sends out Charizard* Me: Flamethrower on Hunter. *Charizard spits flame from his mouth* Me: Never call me chopped liver again. *looks at Thard* Me: And stop taking all the missions! Me: o.o *Hunter drops to the floor to avoid the Flamethrower* Me: Um... I was planning on going to Rustboro to get the Stone Badge...
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:38 pm
Me: Fine. But I want a Venasaur and a Sceptile, and they need one more Mission/Battle each.
*hops on Flygon and returns him*
Me: Now go beat Roxanne!
*returns Charizard*
Me: Now, to work on the next mission...
*gets on the computer and starts typing*
Me: I don't know why, but I've become obsessed with missions recently...
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:41 pm
Sportsman189 Me: Fine. But I want a Venasaur and a Sceptile, and they need one more Mission/Battle each. *hops on Flygon and returns him* Me: Now go beat Roxanne! *returns Charizard* Me: Now, to work on the next mission... *gets on the computer and starts typing* Me: I don't know why, but I've become obsessed with missions recently... Heh, maybe you want to know what Team Clone is really up to with their recent activity? Oh well, I think I've stayed perhaps too long. I really should get moving. Give my regards to Brian and the others. *Puts Penumbra away, hastily finishes last bit of soda, gets up, and turns to leave*
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