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 Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 7:57 pm
Redera Issun Tsu: DX -light bonk- Nah, I don't think so. : P It's just me. Anyway I see no other problems now, approved.~ Welcome back to SN~
Okay. NOW done
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:16 pm
Redera Issun Tsu: DX -light bonk- Nah, I don't think so. : P It's just me. Anyway I see no other problems now, approved.~ Welcome back to SN~
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:18 pm
Well done~. Approved.
Tsu: Anytime~ Thanks for being patient.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 12:36 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Tochiga, Hanzo
Nickname: N/A
Age: 17
Birthdate: 08/08
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9
Weight: 156lb
Nindo: "What goes around comes around."
Personality: Generally level headed, tends to say what's on his mind, somewhat manipulative, prefers to take the easy way out of things, shows an amiable disposition, smiles a lot as he is a pixyish, whimsical fellow.
Village: The Village hidden in the Snow
Rank: Gennin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Nara Clan
Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Fire, Wind
Chakra Color: Pale Blue
Chakra Materialization: Crown-shaped flares.
Strengths:
• Long Ranged Combat
• Slightly increased reaction rate
Weaknesses:
• Close Combat
• Nyctalopia - Night Blindness - He can't see very well in relatively low light.
Fears:
• Thunderstorms/ Thunder
• Extreme Heights
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
• Class Attribute - Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• 2 extra ninjutsu slots
• Speed slightly increased
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 03 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 01 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Composite Bow
Weapon Range: Between 320-370 yards.
Weapon Weight: 2.3 lb
Weapon Location: Diagonally hung right behind his back.
Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}
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• 10 kunai
• 5 Smoke Pellets
• 15 Arrows (inside his quiver)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon:
•
Fuuton:
•
Bloodline:
•
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
• {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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Hanzo was born to a woman of the Nara Clan and a civilian man in Konoha. It was often expressed that his mother made constant decisions in his life as a child for she was the more prominent figure than that of his father. One of her decisions being Hanzo to be raised outside the Nara Clan household. While he was still young he was moved to live in Yuki under his father's guidance. His mother was an irksome woman who barely tolerated any nonsense but at the same time the woman wished her son to live a simpler life. And through most of his childhood her visits became less frequent. Fortunately, it was the only thing he liked of his mother. Most of the time he was raised by his father who was more of a mother than both parents despite the majority of their decisions falling under his mother's hands. In time, he grew to take his father less seriously for his softness and less-than stern demeanor for taking on the role as the 'homemaker'. Later he began to resent his mother. In response, he delayed his academics for a period of four years. However during the trial of those years his father had seen signs of his inborn abilities. Naturally the other parent was notified of Hanzo's blood traits. When his mother finally threatened to issue another rare visit, he then registered into the academy out of fear.
Nearing the end of his academy years, Hanzo was caught into a terrible accident. Due to an over heated pipe in his home, which his father overlooked, Hanzo received several burn marks scattered across his body. Despite the treatments he's received the scars still remained. And although it did not affect his personality by much, internally he curses at his own appearance in all aspects and does his best to conceal them through bandages. In some ways his characteristics stems from a rather obtrusive childhood. He then passed the Academy with average merits on the incentive of freedom or the will to do whatever he chooses to do.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:03 pm
"• Taking too much physical damage "
I think that's a weakness everyone shares. xD
Change that, and apply for the Nara clan, and you should be good to go, Coggums.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:24 pm
: > -is not thinking quite clearly- Yep, changed it. Thanks for your help~
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:12 pm
I edited my profile, is it good now?
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:29 pm
Zachariah_M_Boliver I edited my profile, is it good now? please resubmit your profile.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:24 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Terri Jukishin
Nickname: Slick Ace
Age: 16
Birthdate: Unknown
Gender: Male
Height: 6"11
Weight: 200 lbs.
Nindo: "I will fight with Honor and hold nothing back but otherwise Have fun and be happy"
Personality: Serious in battle otherwise Carefree and Happy
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Samurai
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Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Dark grey
Chakra Materialization: It appears as a stream swirling around the point of origin in which it was used
Strengths:
• Swordplay
• Close Combat
Weaknesses:
• Long range Combat
• Stealth Fighting
Fears:
• Whatever lies beyond death
• Snakes
Class Attributes:
• Meager Muscles
• Arrogant Skill
Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu 1 post faster
•
Personal Attributes:
• Physical speed increased
• Skill with Katanas increased
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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 28 Inches
Weapon Weight: 3 1/2 pounds
Weapon Location: in a sheath strapped to his side
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬30x Kunai
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Raiton
Suiton
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
[/color▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Terri was an ordinary kid like any other in his home village of Kirigakure, he lived on the outskirts of the village with his parents and lived a happy life up until his 10th birthday. His house and parents were attacked by enemy ninja and killed in front of him. He would have died too if not for a moment he would never forget.
As the enemy ninja advanced towards him a blur of movement caught his eye and standing in front of him was a wandering Samurai. He watched as the Samurai cut down the intruders with great skill and ease and then took him to the nearby orphanage. He never forgot the Samurai and devoted his free time to learning everything about them.
Around the age of 13 at the beginning of his ninja training he took up a katana in honor of the Samurai who saved him and took a whole year to master wielding it. At 15 he was very skilled with his blade and ended up being quite deadly with it in battle. Now he's a loyal ninja of the Kirigakure, ready and willing to fight but he remains carefree to keep his happiness up.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:40 pm
Elements: you may have two elements, you have listed Raiton as your only one and later on placed Suiton. Please place both in this section. Personal Atributes: please place the word "Slightly" in both of your personal attributes. "Slightly increased" Kekkai Genkai: Have you chosen to not have a bloodline? after that, you should be good to go. Just let me know when you have edited and I shall review it.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 5:17 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kyūzō Kōkyō
Nickname: Kyu, Eien Hakai no Ryuu
Age: 19
Birthdate: December 31
Gender: Male
Height: 6'9"
Weight: 250lbs
Nindo: "My life is going to be like an explosion, a brilliant flash of beauty and destruction then fading into darkness"
Personality: Kyuzo is a very bi polar individual. He can be very quiet and secluded one moment before getting very loud and social. He loves training and proving his worth. Kyuzo is also a bit of a explosive junkie, anything that explodes or could be made into explosives, he absolutely loves. He also enjoys art in all it's shapes and forms. His one weakness though is that he smokes. He can almost always be seen with a cigarette in his mouth.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Samurai
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Bloodline: Bakuton
Chakra Pool: 340
Chakra Element: Katon, Doton
Chakra Color: Dark Orange
Chakra Materialization: Blazing Flames
Strengths:
• Swordplay
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Water
Fears:
• Not having any Smokes
• Losing his ability to blow stuff up
Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop - Backup pool of [25] chakra
• Meager Muscles - Physical Endurance slightly increased
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu Class- Ninjutsu -1 post
• Personal Attribute- Bukijutsu -2 post
Personal Attributes:
• Explosive Might - Learns Bukijutsu 1 post faster
• Mushroom Cloud - At the cost of losing genjutsu kyuzo gains [30] chakra
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Ryo: 0両
AC: 0AC
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 3ft
Weapon Weight: 2lbs
Weapon Location: Back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x15
• Shuriken x15
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
•
Doton
•
Bakuton
•
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Santoryu
• Stage One
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Kyuzo grew up in a small village in earth country. He grew up fairly normal blowing things up with his concocted explosives. Yea...normal. When kyuzo was nine he accidentally killed a family with his explosives. He was sickened with himself and was banished from the village forever. So at the age of nine he was wandering the world looking for a place to settle down in and call his new home. He had wandered all the way over to kirigakure and had talked with the mizukage at the time. He was granted a new home and had instantly joined the ninja academy. He now trains to master his explosive techniques to help kiri.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:20 pm
Personal Attributes: A) Explosive might: If you want to learn Bukijutsu 2 posts faster, please choose one type of Jutsu to take a penalty of one in. B)Mushroom cloud: Please reduce the chakra bonus to 30. Weapon Data: You may only start with one weapon, in the case that it is a set such as: Claws or Kusarigama...etc, you may have it. A Katana is considered one weapon and is not a set. You may start with one katana.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 10:05 pm
Personal Attribute: Explosive Might: What I meant by specific Jutsu, was not specific Ninjutsu. I meant Topic, as in Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, genjutsu,...etc.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 10:10 pm
Screw it I took it too one post reduction
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