All approved besides O. Agni pending our skype discussion.
Kondo Kaicho
All Good. Approvaled.
Grand Chevalier Haji
These im gonna wait on Matty to come and look over again for you.
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2018 4:48 am
Character: Taylor Aburame Technique Name: Swarming Jaws Rank: B Type: logic? Element: Bloodline Description: Aburame typically attack with vast numbers of countless insects. These insects worm in tandem, similar to a colony of ants in the way they deal with threats. Identify the threat, swarm it, dismember it or drain it of their chakra and leave them a husk.
Due to the sheer numbers of insects Taylor uses it becomes harder to deal with her swarms as they get larger and larger. This custom will confer a slight increase to any aburame technique for every 300 active insects on the field.
BlackFruity
NecroPlant
Character: Taylor Aburame Technique Name: Inescapable swarm Rank: B Type: Passive Augmentation Element: Bloodline Description: Taylor possesses a VERY aggressive hive compared to her other clan members. She trains them to not only grab people and leech their chakra away but to bite and swarm in vital areas to a person. Eyes, ears, nose, mouth and under clothin are all valid targets to her. As such her hive is almost unique in the way it performs.
Any targets dealing with swarms from Taylor have to pay both chakra AND stamina to escape her bugs in their entirety. On a successful swarm the target will be grappled and subject to the half the insects that Taylor's drone deployment deploys, in both chakra AND stamina. Those costs are listed below. The ratio for insect to damaged resources is 2 insects to 1 chakra 1 stamina to indicate that roughly half the swarm is draining, the other biting. If the insects are destroyed, obviously nothing happens
Character: Yugen Technique Name: See No Evil Rank: B Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Sight // Chakra, Scent Base Duration // Upkeep: 4 Posts // 20 Chakra Source: Phantasm Description: An active illusion placed over a target that renders them completely invisible to anyone and everyone looking at said target. Also functions as an anti-sensor technique, meaning that any sensor searching for the invisible target will not be able to notice their chakra. A sensor attempting to overcome this must pay double the amount of chakra (ie. the sum of two b-rank genjutsu).
Character: Yugen Technique Name: Buried Alive Rank: B Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Touch // Sight, Sound Base Duration // Upkeep: 4 Posts // 20 Chakra Source: Triggered Trap - AoE [50 yards per rank] Description: Performing a series of hand seals, the user primes a target with a trap genjutsu. Once opponents arrive within the AoE of the primed target, they will see, feel and hear the ground rise up to swallow them. The user may utilize their environment to make this illusion appear more convincing (ie. if the trap is set near a forested area, roots may emerge to restrain their victim's limbs as they're swallowed into the earth). If one remains within this illusion for a total of 2 posts, by their third post, the victim will faint from the feeling of suffocation which tricks them into not breathing. This jutsu affects all living beings within its AoE.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
NecroPlant
Mattysandwich
Temujin Uchiha
I keep forgetting to quote people! Sry > < also - idk if I should quote you and Matty but I did anyways bc you guys have been doing these too!
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2018 11:22 pm
Technique Name: Lucifer's Domain 6/8 Rank: X Type: Katon Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description:Channeling Katon Chakra into his body, Belamos will connect his foot with the ground. Upon doing so a wave of fire will ripple through the ground in a circle originating on Belamos. It will appear as veins of harsh red light. Any flammable material connected to the ground will erupt in flames. The flames are normal, atypical, house fire flames. Sentient Creatures are immune to this jutsu. Inorganic Chakra-Infused creations, for example a Doton Earth Wall, can be affected by, but not destroyed by, this jutsu. Belamos can exempt certain structures from his attack.
After creating these fires, Belamos can launch Katon Projectile Techniques from them by paying chakra equal to 1 Rank Higher than the Technique usually is. I.e. a C Rank Fireball would cost 40 chakra
Resubmitting with a clarification. With my previous wording, things like trees would be unaffected. RPC's/Pets/Summons still can not be affected.
Character: Taylor Aburame Technique Name: Swarming Jaws Rank: B Type: logic? Element: Bloodline Description: Aburame typically attack with vast numbers of countless insects. These insects worm in tandem, similar to a colony of ants in the way they deal with threats. Identify the threat, swarm it, dismember it or drain it of their chakra and leave them a husk.
Due to the sheer numbers of insects Taylor uses it becomes harder to deal with her swarms as they get larger and larger. This custom will confer a slight increase to any aburame technique for every 300 active insects on the field.
Character: Taylor Aburame Technique Name: Inescapable swarm Rank: B Type: Passive Augmentation Element: Bloodline Description: Taylor possesses a VERY aggressive hive compared to her other clan members. She trains them to not only grab people and leech their chakra away but to bite and swarm in vital areas to a person. Eyes, ears, nose, mouth and under clothin are all valid targets to her. As such her hive is almost unique in the way it performs.
Any targets dealing with swarms from Taylor have to pay both chakra AND stamina to escape her bugs in their entirety. On a successful swarm the target will be grappled and subject to the half the insects that Taylor's drone deployment deploys, in both chakra AND stamina. Those costs are listed below. The ratio for insect to damaged resources is 2 insects to 1 chakra 1 stamina to indicate that roughly half the swarm is draining, the other biting. If the insects are destroyed, obviously nothing happens
Swarming Jaws: Denied: Unfortunately its been settled on that DR is something that is now specific to Tai/Buki. As in, its no longer allowed on Ninjutsuesque techniques. Additionally non active passive or rather passives that no longer have some form of active sustain cost after activation are no longer allowed via new custom rules.
Inescapable Swarm: Pending: If I'm reading this correctly these drainage's are off the charts. The average Jounin has only maybe at most 600 Chakra. At C-rank a drainage of 20 is the 'cap'. These drainage's 250 Stamina.Chakra lost at Rank C? Thats unfathomably strong. Looking at Spindle Formation a similar C-rank skill will only drain 20 Chakra and then 40 if utilizing both hands per post of exposure and thats with the detriment of being unable to use any other insects techniques past C-rank. If you're overall goal is to have your Kikai attack both Chakra and Stamina simultaneously these would be your reasonable totals.
C: 500, -10 Chakra and -10 Stamina (Total 20) B: 1000 -20 Chakra, and -20 Stamina (Total 40) A: 2000 -40 Chakra, and -40 Stamina (Total 80) S: 4000 -80 Chakra, and -80 Stamina (Total 160)
If [Drone Deployment] is a precursor technique and not the normal Aburame Dispersal rate I'll need to know what exactly it does that would allow such exceedingly high drainages. Additionally when you say the target is [Grappled] this would already naturally mean in order to break the grapple they would need to spend an equivalent amount of stamina to break the hold. If that stacks on top of the already occurring drainage's then thats double the total resource loss of the for the targeted individual and that's a no go .
If you wanted to simplify this technique. You can follow the guideline above and treat the drainings of techniques as essentially complex drainings that drain both chakra and stamina. OR you can have the technique treated as a grapple where the insects induce a [Grappled] state on the target while also draining their chakra. The target would have to expend the stamina to break the grapple. The technique being a Passive Augmentation is fine. However, all passives, augmentation or not will require a sustain on your end as an Active Passive. Since this is treated as Rank B a sustain of minimally 20 chakra will be required. That sustain will go directly to supporting the Kikai maintaining the grapple in such a case. Honestly if this is an [Augment] to essentially all Kikaijutsu you're better off as treating it as [X]-rank with a Learning Of [ B ]-rank. This way you can apply said Augment to any Kikaijutsu to allow the Kikai taking part in it to drain both chakra and stamina or induce a grappled state. Although the first choice is the simpler one. Doing this would mean you'd correlate sustain costs with ranks of the augmented technique.
I.e You Augment [Spindle Formation] the Kikai now drain 10 Chakra and 10 Stamina as oppose to 20 Chakra. To do this your paying an upkeep of half that C-rank which is an additional 10 Chakra.
Also if you're confused on anything in regards to Aburame insect dispersal, draining, and recovery feel free to ask me or Kerron.
Sleepiily
See no Evil Approved:The technique only targets, Sight // Chakra, Scent. This leaves Hearing, and Touch a sense that's still prevalent. A sensor specifically that is looking for these two things. I.e The technique which sends out a rush of wind that hits physical things and relays it back or the technique that sharpens hearing would still locate the target. I'm sure you already know this but just a heads up if that situation occurs the double payment wouldn't come into play.
Yugen Pending: Since the sustain is 4 posts it would be more to the benefit of fairness that the 4th post i.e the techniques climax would induce the unconscious state. Also I notice you have [50 yards per rank] if you want to use this technique at differing ranks that would mean you would want this techniques rank to be X-rank with a [ B ]-rank learning requirement. Otherwise its defaulted to [200] yards. Speaking of [200] yards a.k.a [600] feet seems pretty steep for a Price tag of B-ranked chakra. DATS DA SIZE OF Almost TWO FOOTBALL FIELDS gonk 25 seems a reasonable compromise.
Dexterous Prince
Lucifer's Domain Approved On my end I see nothing wrong with this.
Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2018 6:35 am
Grand Chevalier Haji
All of the customs aside from the Renkankei-kikou, Approved.
Renkankei-kikou: Pending. Make it exclusively S-ranked. Since it allows for such free forming manipulation, that should be fair in execution. Also, make it so that the element assigned that it can work with is chosen once the seal is placed. That should allow you to give yourself your human torch power while also giving your pets what you want. Finally, only one seal per individual.
Dexterous Prince
Judgment has been reached. Thank you for your patience. From Mam himself not even with Elemental Specialist can one jutsu at S+ ranked overpower another. However, Elemental Brandish jutsu will not be able to break it at S+ ranked. Therefore, the ability to make it only negatable to Suiton S+ ranked is denied. This stipulation will be added to the class itself to avoid such confusion in the future.
Technique Name: O, Agni Christmas Gift Free Custom Rank: S+ Type: Katon Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description:One Belamo's Strongest Jutsu's, passed down to him by his father. Belamos will instantly encase himself in a miniature version of he sun 30 feet in diameter. Anyone standing in this diameter will be pushed back. Looking upon it is akin to staring up at the real version itself, with the light and heat it emits being painfully obvious. Those standing within 10 feet of it's creation will immediately suffer 3 levels of dehydration, those within 20 feet suffer two levels and those within 30 feet suffer one, with an additional penalty of dehydration added on for every post spent within those aforementioned radius's. When the Sun is created anyone directly looking upon it will suffer one post of blindness. Katon techniques have no effect on O, Agni. While inside, Belamos must stay relatively still and can do no more than walk around. At maximum, two people may reside in O, Agni alongside himself. For anyone more than one, he must remain still as his concentration is tied up in keeping them from being cooked alive. Just as techniques cannot pass from the outside in, techniques cannot pass from the inside out. After a maximum of three posts, Belamos will extended his arms out and O, Agni will explode outwards. It will rapidly expand to encapsulate anything within a 50 foot radius centered on him and explode outwards, damaging and burning anything not protected in the area.
Character: Yugen Technique Name: Buried Alive Rank: X [learned at b-rank] Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Touch // Sight, Sound Base Duration // Upkeep: 4 Posts // 20 Chakra Source: Triggered Trap - AoE [25 yards per rank] Description: Performing a series of hand seals, the user primes a target with a trap genjutsu. Once opponents arrive within the AoE of the primed target, they will see, feel and hear the ground rise up to swallow them. The user may utilize their environment to make this illusion appear more convincing (ie. if the trap is set near a forested area, roots may emerge to restrain their victim's limbs as they're swallowed into the earth). If one remains within this illusion for a total of 4 posts, by their fourth post, the victim will faint from the feeling of suffocation which tricks them into not breathing. This jutsu affects all beings within its AoE.
NecroPlant
So will it be acceptable like this? I changed the AoE to 25 yards per rank, as you mentioned. And also the KO post requirement.
Technique Name: Magnified Magnetic Form: Rematerialization Rank: X [Learned as C] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Jiton Description: Thanks to the higher levels of magnetism in Axel’s chakra, he is able to employ a reversed version of the Iron Sand creation technique, allowing to use his chakra to bind individual specs of metal to create shapes and objects. Because of the nature of the technique, and the process that was used to create the iron sand to begin with, the individual specs of metal cannot be bound indefinitely, but have a duration based on rank; the only exception is when the specs of sand are returned to their original source. Likewise, the durability of the structures bound together this way is dictated by the rank at which the technique is performed; if a structure is hit by a technique and is not destroyed, it’s durability is reduced by the rank of the attack that hit it. For example, if a D rank technique hits an S Rank wall created by this technique, its duration is decreased by 3 posts. Should this technique be taught to any other Jiton users, the duration of the techniques is halved. The durability is factored in at the end of the user’s post, meaning that an E rank structure lasts until the end of their next post. The durability is as follows:
E Rank: 1 posts D Rank: 2 posts C Rank: 4 posts B Rank: 6 posts A Rank: 8 posts S Rank: 10 posts
Technique Name: Magnified Magnetic Form: Subjugation Rank: X [Trained as C] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Jiton Description: Stemming from the experience of being stuck in a mountain, coupled with his knowledge over Jiton’s magnetic abilities, Axel is able to force his magnetic chakra into solid stone, imbedding it with his chakra, violently forcing the rock to split apart and behave as the specs of iron sand do. MMF: Subjugation is a violent and strenuous process, meaning it takes more chakra and time to convert any amount of stone into “iron sand” than it would to convert metal.
E Rank’s Worth is created instantly and takes D rank chakra D Rank’s Worth is created in two [2] posts and takes C rank chakra C Rank’s Worth is created in two [2] posts and takes B rank chakra B Rank’s Worth is created in three [3] posts and takes A rank chakra A Rank’s Worth is created in three [3] posts and takes S rank chakra S Rank’s Worth is created in four [4] posts and takes twice the chakra of a normal S rank technique.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
NecroPlant
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 8:25 am
Rexnov
Character: Axel Storn
Technique Name: Magnified Magnetic Form: Rematerialization Rank: X [Learned as C] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Jiton Description: Thanks to the higher levels of magnetism in Axel’s chakra, he is able to employ a reversed version of the Iron Sand creation technique, allowing to use his chakra to bind individual specs of metal to create shapes and objects. Because of the nature of the technique, and the process that was used to create the iron sand to begin with, the individual specs of metal cannot be bound indefinitely, but have a duration based on rank; the only exception is when the specs of sand are returned to their original source. Likewise, the durability of the structures bound together this way is dictated by the rank at which the technique is performed; if a structure is hit by a technique and is not destroyed, it’s durability is reduced by the rank of the attack that hit it. For example, if a D rank technique hits an S Rank wall created by this technique, its duration is decreased by 3 posts. Should this technique be taught to any other Jiton users, the duration of the techniques is halved. The durability is factored in at the end of the user’s post, meaning that an E rank structure lasts until the end of their next post. The durability is as follows:
E Rank: 1 posts D Rank: 2 posts C Rank: 4 posts B Rank: 6 posts A Rank: 8 posts S Rank: 10 posts
Technique Name: Magnified Magnetic Form: Subjugation Rank: X [Trained as C] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Jiton Description: Stemming from the experience of being stuck in a mountain, coupled with his knowledge over Jiton’s magnetic abilities, Axel is able to force his magnetic chakra into solid stone, imbedding it with his chakra, violently forcing the rock to split apart and behave as the specs of iron sand do. MMF: Subjugation is a violent and strenuous process, meaning it takes more chakra and time to convert any amount of stone into “iron sand” than it would to convert metal.
E Rank’s Worth is created instantly and takes D rank chakra D Rank’s Worth is created in two [2] posts and takes C rank chakra C Rank’s Worth is created in two [2] posts and takes B rank chakra B Rank’s Worth is created in three [3] posts and takes A rank chakra A Rank’s Worth is created in three [3] posts and takes S rank chakra S Rank’s Worth is created in four [4] posts and takes twice the chakra of a normal S rank technique.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
NecroPlant
Unless another mod disagrees, I'm cool with these, and with you making it the rank you put in giving you the same amount of chakra, so D-D, C-C etc.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 9:10 am
Character:Kya Senkei Aomine Technique Name: The Hand of Veneca Rank: A Type: Uchiha Advanced Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: This skill creates a massive claw of flame, rivaling in size the body of a Susano'o, that moves forward, consuming anything not sufficiently defended in it's wake and leaving intense Uchiha fire in it's wake. The hand itself is capable of closing in around a target, surrounding it in an intense, crushing inferno. With precise control stemming from her Mangekyo sharingan, she can direct the attack, giving her a degree of control over where the hand goes that is higher than one would expect for such a large attack. Can manipulate the skill for up to five posts until destroyed, but this busies one offensive activation per post, and the hand must stay in sight. This skill sets flames to just about anything in it's pathway, and even after it is defended against the explosion from most collisions causes fire to scatter everywhere, creating a hazardous zone of flames that can consume a large portion of most threads.
Conversely, this skill can fire off five nail like spears of flame that explode and create deadly fire zones for the next five posts after it's created, though this weakens each specific bolt to be a C rank technique and also rendering her advantage for bloodline jutsu inert (which causes them to act as normal Katon.) This is mostly used to start flames.
Mattysandwhich
Temujin Uchiha
NecroPlant
Technique Name: Kortal Khan's Cloak Rank: D-A Type: Uchiha Advanced Nin Element: Katon Description: This skill is a supplemental skill that enshrouds Kya in flames born of Uchiha fire. The skill effectively renders inert fire incapable of harming her, and even from up to an equivalent technique of any nature. It also has the nifty effect of giving an opponent a reason not to want to touch her, as getting within melee range will cause a half dose of dehydration per post to anyone nearby. This skill can also be used over her Susano'o, increasing the range of this effect to within range of being struck by it. This skill lasts for five posts before it can be reapplied for half the original costs, or until a technique of sufficient strength hits the shroud. Requires an attack that is empowered the way Bloodknight or Elemental specialist is in order to defeat in one hit, or a normal attack and one of a single rank lower (as the math behind that makes them equivalent.) Techniques that outpower it will damage as usual.
Technique Name: Stay in Motion Rank: D-A Type: Uchiha Advanced Nin Element: Katon Description: This skill expresses a large degree of control over her bloodline attacks, as this skill makes it possible for Kya to close distance on a target, moving in a firey rush to any location where her Uchiha fire has touched in combat. The cost varies because Kya becomes cloaked in fire, as with Kortal Khan's Cloak as the user makes their high speed movement, just functionallty slower than a shunshin as to give shinobi aware of her presence ample time to respond to her as she closes the gap. If that shield is broken, the second part of the technique is cancelled. Upon arriving at her location, Kya releases the flaming shield of in a burst of flames dealing damage to an area of five feet per rank around her location, blowing away anything in the impact zone with rank appropriate damage.
Technique Name: Panty Raid [ Pantīreido ] Rank: E Type: Taijutsu Element: Simple Description: A supplementary technique that simply exercises the user's impressive ability to disrobe other people on contact. This is typically used alongside another taijutsu, hard, or soft physical formless maneuver. Without even having to remove top-layers of the victim's attire, the user can swipe their underwear with their magical hands of gloriousness. On that note, this technique absolutely does not allow the user to do anything else to the victim aside from steal underwear. This takes no additional activations to use if performed while using another taijutsu or hard/soft physical formless action.
Technique Name: Crystal Counter Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user sends a surge of their chakra outward in a single direction, crystallizing everything along the surge's path. The more chakra applied to this technique, the further the surge travels. Also, this crystallizing chakra can affect any technique(s) up to one rank lower than the applied ranked value. This technique cannot crystallize anything organic except things created by other techniques. Can only use this jutsu once every other two [2] posts. • E-Rank: 10ft | D-Rank: 20ft | C-Rank: 40ft | B-Rank: 80 | A-Rank: 120ft | S-Rank: 160ft | S+ Rank: 200ft
Technique Name: Crystal Abundance Rank: Null [Trained at C-Rank] Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user snaps their fingers and causes a crystal formation they have made to explode, unleashing crystal shrapnel in all directions. The power of the explosion and its shrapnel is dependent on the rank of the crystal formation. If another jutsu had been crystallized and was used for this technique then the explosion's power is increased by half of the crystallized technique's strength. The user pay's the ranked cost of the crystal formation to be detonated to activate this technique.
Technique Name: Crystal Beacon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user can amplify the effects of refraction through their crystal creation when or after it has been created to create a brief, blinding flash (blinds anyone who sees the affected creation for 1 post). If activated at the same time that a crystal creation is created then this technique is counted as supplementary.
Technique Name: Panty Raid [ Pantīreido ] Rank: E Type: Taijutsu Element: Simple Description: A supplementary technique that simply exercises the user's impressive ability to disrobe other people on contact. This is typically used alongside another taijutsu, hard, or soft physical formless maneuver. Without even having to remove top-layers of the victim's attire, the user can swipe their underwear with their magical hands of gloriousness. On that note, this technique absolutely does not allow the user to do anything else to the victim aside from steal underwear. This takes no additional activations to use if performed while using another taijutsu or hard/soft physical formless action.
Technique Name: Crystal Counter Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user sends a surge of their chakra outward in a single direction, crystallizing everything along the surge's path. The more chakra applied to this technique, the further the surge travels. Also, this crystallizing chakra can affect any technique(s) up to it's applied ranked value. This technique cannot crystallize anything organic except things created by other techniques. Can only use this jutsu once every other two [2] posts. • E-Rank: 10ft | D-Rank: 20ft | C-Rank: 40ft | B-Rank: 80 | A-Rank: 120ft | S-Rank: 160ft | S+ Rank: 200ft
Technique Name: Crystal Abundance Rank: Null [Trained at C-Rank] Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user snaps their fingers and causes a crystal formation they have made to explode, unleashing crystal shrapnel in all directions. The power of the explosion and its shrapnel is dependent on the rank of the crystal formation. If another jutsu had been crystallized and was used for this technique then the explosion's power is increased by half of the crystallized technique's strength. The user pay's a cost equal to half of the explosion's total power to activate this technique.
Technique Name: Crystal Beacon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline) Element: Shoton Description: The Shoton user can amplify the effects of refraction through their crystal creation when or after it has been created to create a brief, blinding flash (blinds anyone who sees the affected creation for 1 post). If activated at the same time that a crystal creation is created then this technique is counted as supplementary.
Mattysandwhich
Temujin Uchiha
NecroPlant
These are all fine besides the third technique. The cost efficiency here is essentially giving you a rank boost to a crystal technique if I'm reading it right.
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