Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Anthropohagis Sanguinus Rank: B Type: Medical [ Offensive ] Element: -- Description: By forming an additional two hand signs when activating the Dead Soul Technique, the user may activate the enzymes, viral diseases and bacteria dormant within the corpse that make the effects of this technique possible. The additional chakra allows the saliva and blood of the undead to become toxic to contact with other blood, spreading the disease. The most common method of transference is biting, sometimes the consumption or spattering of blood into an open wound is enough to spread the virus. The following post after the occurrence of such contact, the target will begin to feel the following effects after the designated number of posts. Those who are healed prior to total infection will not suffer the zombification but will still carry the virus dormant, spreading it to others via saliva or blood-borne methods. • One Post: Fever and Pale Skin • Two Post: Hunger Pains • Three Posts: Pale Skin, Dark Circles Under Eyes • Four Post: Anger Surfaces in fits of rage. • Six Post: Chakra and Stamina Stop Recovery • Eight Post: Unable to access brain functions,including techniques, reacts from instinct to survive. • Ten Post: Loses all higher brain functions ( Speech, intelligent thought, ect ) • Twelve Post: Complete Zombification/Death. Effects become irreversible at this stage.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Corpse Binding Method Rank: X Type: Medical [ Offensive ] Element: -- Description: Takumi forms several hand signs, planting his palm on the ground. His chakra imbues the corpses below the earth with chakra to animate their limbs for a short time. From the earth, one dozen skeletal and decomposed limbs rise, binding their target. To break from the grip of the binding method, one must have a body rank higher than the chakra level utilized in the technique or a moderate descriptive rank above the level of the technique.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Arctic Deathscape Rank: B Type: Bloodline/ Offensive Medical Element: Ice Release Description: Takumi creates several hand signs, holding the tiger seal as ice begins to explode from his feet, covering an area of thirty feet around him in random ice formations as well as blanketing the earth with ice. While this field is active, any corpses utilized during the "Dead Soul" Technique may be summoned through the ice, breaking through to attack opponents and burrowing their way back through the ice as it repairs itself, making it impossible to trace where the corpse has gone as the ice is black in color. The ability to repair the ice remains active for four posts, leaving the ice once its duration has ended. After the initial four posts, the ice remains active but ceases to repair itself, making it impossible to conceal the undead's location after immersion.
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Character: Lahlil Nevarra Technique Name: Enveloping Darkness Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Source: Original Description: Places a hidden genjutsu that will will take effect upon the users discretion. Blocking the user's chakra signature or life force from being picked up by anyone that is infected with the user's chakra. Lasts for a maximum of [8] posts.
Character: Lahlil Nevarra Technique Name: Last Word Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Source: Original Description: Places a hidden genjutsu that will Interrupt the targets next nin, gen, or spiritual technique (Chakra/Stamina is not lost, only the time it took to preform the technique.) If a target is interrupted this way, the next genjutu cast upon them has it's base duration doubled.
Character: Lahlil Nevarra Technique Name: Fragment of Suffering Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Source: Phantasm Description: Creates an immobile phantasm that is linked to the target for [3] posts. Damage dealt to the illusion is replicated onto the target for as long as the genjutsu lasts. Ex. If the illusion is set on fire, then the target will feel as though they are taking damage equal to the rank of the technique used on the phantasm. But any damage dealt this way will be immediately removed and "healed" at the end of the genjutsu. If the phantasm would otherwise be killed by a technique, then it's linked target will drop unconscious for [1] post. Only one fragment may exist at a time.
Character: Lahlil Nevarra Technique Name: Fragment of Fear Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Source: Phantasm Description: Creates an immobile phantasm that is linked to the target for [3] posts. Any genjutsu that is cast at or otherwise directed at the phantasm, will also affect the target. Only one fragment may exist at a time.
Character: Chloe Blueford Technique Name: Assimilation Rank: D Type: Bloodline Element: Kōton Description:An advanced form of the Earth Military Movement Technique. Assimilation allows the user move through or "hide" in their black steel creations, or any form of metal that does not currently have chakra running through it. Lasts for [1] post but the user may pay the original amount as upkeep to keep the jutsu going after the first post.
(Made edits to the strength of the jutsu based off of the petrification jutsu that is already in the guild.) Character: Chloe Blueford Technique Name: Midas Touch Rank: A Type: Bloodline Element: Kōton Description:The metal version of the petrication jutsu. Allows the user to flow petrifying chakra through any Koton/Black steel substance Unlike the user however, this metal will not stop at the just the skin, taking over bones, muscles, and veins and is as heavy as black steel itself. It will slowly force all movement to come to a halt until the target is completely petrified. Total petrification occurs over the length of [6] posts, the first post will infect the touched limb and lock up any movement. The second post will infect the main body. The third post will infect all limbs other than the head. The fifth post will infect the head, leaving them entirely immobile. The sixth post will kill the target. Requires A Ranked Eiseijutsu to heal from. Alternatively, if chakra is supplied to the target from the user themselves then the enemy will remain in their immobile state for as long as contact is held.
Character: Chloe Blueford Technique Name: Imperium Rank: S Type: Bloodline Element: Kōton Description:The advanced form of Midas Touch. The user places a hand or foot on the ground and Infects the entire surrounding area in Kōton chakra. Rapidly spreading and turning the surrounding area completely into a black steel made environment by [1] full post. This allows the Kōton user the ability to shift the environment around at will, turning the land itself into a means of attacking. Edit: I realize that I should clarify what exactly [1] full post means. If I used it at the beginning of my post in combat. Then the landscape would not be metal until the end of my second post because the technique was not activate at the start (I had to spend time to cast it.) So [1] full post would mean something like at the end of the next post.
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Character:Taketori Kaguya Technique Name:[ Dance of the Sandbur ] Rank: X (Spiritual) Type: Bloodline Element: Maruton Description: --- Requires Sawarabi no Mai [ Dance of the Young Fern ] to be already trained in order to learn.
[ Dance of the Sandbur ] is a two-part ability. Using the sample principle as [ Sawarabi no Mai ], Taketori can cause rapid and uncontrollable bone growth from any of his bones he infuses with chakra. This causes spikes to propagate from the bones proportional to the amount of chakra spent (the more chakra spent the bigger the spikes). The second part causes the spikes on the bone growth to forcefully propel themselves outward, potentially catching opponents off guard. There is a five-post window where the spikes can be launched after casting this ability.
Character: Taketori Kaguya Technique Name:[ Dance of the Bulwark Oak ] Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: Complex Description: --- Requires Tessenka no Mai [ Dance of the Clematis ] to be already trained in order to learn --- Requires training in Korabo with oneself up to B-rank
By applying the principle of [ Dance of the Clematis: Flower ], Taketori enhances all his own bones with hyper-compression the same way he would form the Flower's maximum solidity bone, increasing their durability to where they are not subject to being cut or sliced off by either normal blades or chakra steel within complex/spiritual bukijutsu, A-ranked or under.
As a result, he cannot control or even manifest any bones more than one meter away from his body. Any bone that does leave that area becomes powderized and returns to Taketori instantly, limiting the effectiveness of some other techniques. When used with his level two cursed seal form, this limitation does not apply.
When using [ Dance of the Bulwark Oak ], Taketori's mass doubles, moderately increasing his fortitude while mildly reducing his speed. Taketori must pay its B-rank maintenance cost every 3 posts after activation. When using viable bloodline abilities, such as [ Dance of the Larch ] or [ Dance of the Willow ], with [ Dance of the Bulwark ] active, they can be korabo'd to become B-rank in terms of power if they previously were not, at the cost of casting them at B-rank and using an extra supplementary activation.
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Character:Taketori Kaguya Technique Name:[ Dance of the Sandbur ] Rank: X (Spiritual) Type: Bloodline Element: Maruton Description:Requires Sawarabi no Mai [ Dance of the Young Fern ] to be learned
[ Dance of the Sandbur ] is a two-part ability. Using the sample principle as [ Sawarabi no Mai ], Taketori can cause rapid and uncontrollable bone growth from any of his bones he infuses with chakra. This causes spikes to propagate from the bones proportional to the amount of chakra spent. The second part causes the spikes on the bone growth to forcefully propel themselves outward, potentially catching opponents off guard.
Character: Taketori Kaguya Technique Name:[ Dance of the Bulwark Oak ] Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: Complex Description:Requires Tessenka no Mai [ Dance of the Clematis ]
By applying the principle of [ Dance of the Clematis: Flower ], Taketori enhances all his own bones with hyper-compression the same way he would form the Flower's maximum solidity bone, increasing their durability to where they are not subject to being cut or sliced off by either normal blades or chakra steel within complex/spiritual bukijutsu, A-ranked or under. As a result, he cannot control or even manifest any bones more than one meter away from his body. Any bone that does leave that area becomes powderized and returns to Taketori instantly, limiting the effectiveness of some other techniques. When used with his level two cursed seal form, this limitation does not apply.
When using [ Dance of the Bulwark Oak ], Taketori's mass doubles, moderately increasing his fortitude while mildly reducing his speed. Taketori must pay its B-rank maintenance cost every 3 posts after activation. When using viable bloodline abilities with [ Dance of the Bulwark ], they become B-rank in terms of power if they previously were not.
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2017 6:34 am
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You have all been recognized. Customs approval will be temporarily unavailable. New Regulations for customs judging are being made. As such we would like to hold off approving anything so as not to trouble you with resubmitting at a later date should they not fall under judging criteria, We apologize for this inconvenience and here's hoping this hastens the process of reaching crew consensus on customs guidelines.
I'm aware the customs arent being accepted, I just want to post this before i lose it/the motivation
Character: Rinka Technique Name: {Oni Potency Rank: * Type: Bloodline Element: Saketon Description: Oni Potency: Rinka's clan has a particularly rich and potent Saketon chakra. So rich in fact, that mere contact with the alcohol created via their jutsu is enough to send even the heaviest of drinkers into an almost instant inebriation. This powerful addition to their chakra comes at a steep cost, however. It is a very common occurrence that members of her tribe are unable to harness the 5 base elemental chakras, with only very rare cases of members being able to even use a single element that isn't their own Saketon. This is a passive jutsu that gives the following effect to all of Rinka's Saketon techniques: "Any individual hit by this technique receives a minus one [-1] DR to their reflex stat. This change lasts until the afflicted individual has slept off the alcohol [one [1] hour of rest]. The afflicted individual may also have all instances of Oni Potency removed by being healed once with the Jokyo Dokubutsu [ Poison Removal ] medical jutsu. Additionally, this jutsu treats Katon as an elemental weakness." This minus increases by an additional minus one [-1] at each rank Rinka trains in Oni Potency [minus two [-2] at C-rank, minus three [-3] at B rank, ect] all the way up to minus six [-6] at S-rank. The next level of negative modifiers must be trained in according the the appropriate rank found in the custom jutsu rules and may only be trained in once Rinka has reached a Body Rank equal to or higher than the rank of Oni Potency. This ability comes at a steep cost, however. Rinka is unable to learn any elemental ninjutsu or any taijutsu or bukijutsu that has an elemental component. She also receives a permanent minus three [-3] to her own Reflexes, to reflect her own, seemingly perpetual, drunken haze. Additionally, other members of the Oni clans are completely immune to this effect due to their own Saketon affinity. Further more, all of her Saketon Jutsu's costs increase by 5 chakra.
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2017 5:39 am
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Vibrating Gentle Fist Rank: B | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: Kenshin applies chakra into either his fist or his blade. This chakra causes a violent vibration with a particular frequency used to shatter bones, armor, and weapons upon contact. The vibration tampers with the metal in armor causing the armor itself to vibrate until it breaks which allows this attack to gain one rank ineffectiveness against the armor, this also applies to weapons.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique. Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Push Rank: B | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: The Hyuuga releases a large amount of chakra from one side of his body to send a twenty-five-foot wave of chakra in one direction. A direct hit from this blast will break multiple bones as well as lock any tenketsu points the wave comes in contact with.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Tornado Palm Rank: A | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist | Fuuton Description: The Hyuuga clansman surrounds his palm/blade in wind chakra before releasing the palm as a physical strike. Once the palm is thrust outwards the strike forms into a tornado around the target. This then traps the target and releases numerous air jabs towards the tenketsu points of the targets trapped within.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Divine Justice Rank: S | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist | Fuuton Description: Kenshin displays his mastery of the Gentle Fist by releasing sixty-four palm/blade strikes with each holding the force equivalent to a standard vacuum palm. These strikes can be sent towards a single target or towards many targets at both short and long range with devastating effects.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
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Character: Belamos Karna Technique Name: Sun Child Rank: Augmentation Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description:Belamos will not be able to launch any katon techniques normally required to be directed from the mouth from his hand.
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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:31 am
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Infinity Marks: Pending. Chakra can from this moment on only be sealed if it's being used for a particular technique. This is subject to change, but for the moment the idea of just having free chakra lying about is unapprovable.
Semipermeable Defense: Denied. An E-ranked technique cost five chakra or stamina. Why should it be powerful enough to negate 25% of the damage you take? What does 25% even mean in a roleplay? If you get stabbed with a knife, does the dagger go in 25% less effective? A fireball burns 25% less of your body? This whole percentage business irks me because it also does nothing with the ninjutsu systems and tai / bukijutsu systems we have in place. I would seriously suggest making your technique focus on one of those two systems.
Sin Mode: Pending. In accordance to the new rules, a custom technique can only at max boost any stat up to your current body rank, (slight for D-ranked, and so forth). You are allowed still to min-max, however, so if you want to drop one rank moderately while increasing another by a supreme, then there's room to discuss that. I don't truly know how that'll get approved, but it's not an automatic denial.
Ninjutsu: Pending. Just make sure it clearly states that the technique only affects the sense of sight and hearing. It cannot do any damage to the opponent.
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Anthropohagis Sanguinus: Pending. First of all this needs a duration separate from the dead soul technique. Second of all the zombification cannot be uncurable. I recommend making the duration of the infection shorter than the duration of the zombification, and then making it more like a hazard system where the more bites you get the quicker the zombifying occurs, as well as renews the duration.
Corpse Binding Method: Denied. I'm sorry but the Kaguya clan, for whatever reason, already has a technique similar in function to what you're trying to do. Therefore, in accordance to the new rules where customs cannot have the abilities of a bloodline without being part of said bloodline, I cannot approve of this. Maybe try something with ice zombies instead?
Arctic Deathscape: Pending. The ice needs a duration. I know you have a limit for how long you can keep it up with the ice still regenerating, but you also need to specify how long the ice last on its on. I would recommend six post since the repairing effect last for four.
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Betraying Thought: Denied. You can't use a genjutsu and a korabo to make an improvised sharingan. Also new rules state that techniques cannot be made which mimic already existing bloodlines unless you're part of said bloodline.
Enveloping Darkness: Pending. Just need a duration. I recommend eight post since that's the most we'll be allowing B-ranked jutsu for duration.
Last Word: Pending. This technique frustrates me because I really like the idea you're going for. Logically though, I'm torn as to whether or not this is a genjutsu or not. Because if this technique only prohibits the opponent from using a jutsu of chakra base, then it's more akin to the temporary body paralysis since there's no real illusion being cast. Make an illusion to be used in conjunction with the technique and then we'll be in business. Also give the opponent a time limit for this technique. I don't like how, in conjunction with the opponent being hindered with being unable to use a technique, you also get that double duration perk for your next genjutsu, so please remove it.
Fragment of Suffering: Approved.
Fragment of Fear: Approved.
Assimilation: Pending. Needs a duration.
Midas Touch: Pending. Tortured Sleep had something similar denied because it didn't comply with the frost hazards of the ice clan. While I respect that there are no hazards for this clan, if you want to go about this manner than I suggest writing a design up for them. Otherwise the max I can allow is one limb per contact, and that there needs to be a duration on how long the limb stays metalized.
Imperium: Denied. Too many abilities at the same time. I have no problem with you turning the whole land into metal and shifting through it like a shark. I don't even have a problem with you doing so and affecting everyone touching the ground with your midas touch. But you need to do so with multiple techniques. So if this technique does both turn the ground into metal and then shark around it, then you need to use midas touch as a secondary technique and a second activation.
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Dance of the Sandbur: Pending. Need to give a duration of how long the spikes can last just coating your body before they fly off.
Dance of the Bulwark Oak: Pending: This sounds like a korabo technique, where the user combines dance of the clemantis with this technique. Make sure it specifies that both must be cast at the same time, and that you need your korabo with yourself at least up to B-ranked. Otherwise I think it's alright.
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Oni Potency: Pending. This technique does not work in conjunction to how passive jutsu will work. For your technique to work as it does, it must be a supplementary technique used in conjunction with your oni techniques.
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Vibrating Gentle Fist: Pending. Needs a duration first of all. Second of all, what does, "...which allows this attack to gain one rank ineffectiveness against the armor..." mean? Is this technique more effective against armor or less?
Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Push: Pending. You can't lock tenketsu points without hitting them directly. That's why rotation doesn't do that. Also given the wide range of this hit, I don't feel comfortable with it also being able to shatter bones.
Eight Trigrams: Tornado Palm: Pending. Does this technique require the user to hit the opponent with the palm or sword in order to use it? Or can they stand fifty feet away and just force push them into a tornado?
Eight Trigrams: Divine Justice: Approved.
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Sun Child: Pending. We're going to get that fire alteration style soon which does this. A current rule being debated on is whether or not we're going to allow customs to do something of a style if they are not part of that style. Once it is decided, you will get either an approval or denial.
As a personal note, thank you everyone for being so patient. I know that it's frustrating when you want to enjoy the guild to the maximum potential but that there is delay in the action of approvals. Thankfully, it is to my belief that once these custom rules are finalized that we will be able to provide you all with the greatest potential of roleplaying possible. I again apologize for the delay, and thank you all for your patience.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Vibrating Gentle Fist Rank: B | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: Kenshin applies chakra into either his fist or his blade. This chakra causes a violent vibration with a particular frequency used to shatter bones, armor, and weapons upon contact. The vibration tampers with the metal in armor causing the armor itself to vibrate until it breaks which allows this attack to gain one rank in effectiveness against the armor, this also applies to weapons. This technique lasts for an eight user post duration at maximum.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique. Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Push Rank: B | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: The Hyuuga releases a large amount of chakra from one side of his body to send a twenty-five-foot wave of chakra in one direction. A direct hit from this blast will force an opponent or object back a great distance. The Heavenly Push can be performed whether Kenshin is moving or not. This allows him to easily escape ensnarements as well as repel incoming assaults.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Tornado Palm Rank: A | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist | Fuuton Description: The Hyuuga clansman surrounds his palm/blade in wind chakra before releasing the palm as a physical strike. Once the palm is thrust outwards and enters a close range of five feet of their body the strike forms into a tornado around the target. This then traps the target and releases numerous air jabs towards the tenketsu points of the targets trapped within.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Anthropohagis Sanguinus Rank: B Type: Medical [ Offensive ] Element: -- Description: By forming two hand signs, the user hyper activates the enzymes, viral diseases and bacteria dormant within any corpse that make the effects of this technique possible for five posts. This technique allows the saliva and blood of the undead to become toxic to contact with other blood, spreading the disease. The most common method of transference is biting, sometimes the consumption or spattering of blood into an open wound is enough to spread the virus. The following post after the occurrence of such contact, the target will begin to feel the following effects after the designated number of posts. Those who are healed prior to total infection will not suffer the zombification but will still carry the virus dormant, spreading it to others via saliva or blood-borne methods. Each bite or application of infection doubles the speed at which the infection progresses. • One Post: Fever and Pale Skin • Two Post: Hunger Pains • Three Posts: Pale Skin, Dark Circles Under Eyes • Four Post: Anger Surfaces in fits of rage. • Six Post: Chakra and Stamina Stop Recovery • Eight Post: Unable to access brain functions,including techniques, reacts from instinct to survive. • Ten Post: Loses all higher brain functions ( Speech, intelligent thought, ect ) • Twelve Post: Techniques that affect necrotic flesh can be used on the target suffering this effect.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Arctic Deathscape Rank: B Type: Bloodline/ Offensive Medical Element: Ice Release Description: Takumi creates several hand signs, holding the tiger seal as ice begins to explode from his feet, covering an area of thirty feet around him in random ice formations as well as blanketing the earth with ice. While this field is active, any corpses utilized during the "Dead Soul" Technique may be summoned through the ice, passing through it without breaking it to attack opponents and returning back through the ice as it repairs itself, making it impossible to trace where the corpse has gone as the ice is black in color. The ability to repair the ice remains active for four posts, leaving the ice once its duration has ended. After the initial four posts, the ice remains active but ceases to repair itself, making it impossible to conceal the undead's location after immersion. On its own, this technique endures for six posts.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Necrotic Regeneration Rank: C Type: Offensive Medical Element: ---- Description: This technique only effects targets who are dead or suffer from necrotic flesh via another technique. The user forms five hand signs, targeting necrotic flesh. This technique gives the user the ability to heal wounds on the undead, repairing them to continue the fight. Additionally, when this technique is applied to a partial necrotic body, it regenerates its cellular structure, reforming the rest of what should be attached to it. If that target was not the main body, in order to control said regenerated body it needs to have the Dead Soul technique applied to it separately.
Character: Takumi Saegahara Technique Name: Necrotic Synchronization Rank: B Type: Offensive Medical Element: ---- Description: For the duration of five posts, this technique allows the user to mentally link with all the corpses in the area. Doing so gives them the ability to see what is within the corpse's range of sight as well as gives them access to any memories of the corpses in question to include techniques. The user may command the corpse to use techniques they knew in life at the cost of the user's own chakra. The user may learn one technique from a corpse as long as it is within the parameters of their own abilities.
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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2017 1:36 pm
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Betraying Thought - Removed Enveloping Darkness - Made edits
Last Word - Well the illusion is supposed to operates on a similar level to Shiin's Kanashibari Music [ Unnamed ]. Since this jutsu is is based on the original means of casting a genjutsu on someone (i.e. infecting them with your chakra.) My chakra would react to the opponents chakra being formed into a jutsu and create a temporary disruptive/paralysis effect on their chakra network for like a fraction of a second. Only long enough to stop something from being cast but not continuing because I'm not feeding it chakra through a median like the flute in the music genjutsu. I thought about making it a Maruton but at the time it just seemed like it would fit genjutsu better since I'm infecting someone with chakra, which is genjutsu's whole basis. As well as affecting someone's brain.
With respect if I can't have the increased duration then I would like to remove the (Chakra/Stamina is not lost, only the time it took to preform the technique.) Stipulation, or have the ability to control which jutsu it interrupts. Since otherwise I paid an A ranked amount of chakra to remove a single activation from the opponent for a single post. Which is kinda lack luster in this guild where we get three of them.
Assimilation - Edited
Imperium - I should explain because I don't think I made it clear when I wrote the jutsu what my intentions were with it. Being able to swim/shift around the landscape is what assimilation does. What I mean by shift here is essentially metal bending the environment. I get what you're saying with the limits of one jutsu so how about this? I remove the Midas touch effect from Imperium and change the wording of Midas touch to be this. "Allows the user to flow petrifying chakra through any Koton/Black steel substance." This way it allows me to do the same thing but is broken up into two different S and A ranked jutsu.
Midas Touch - So the whole thing with this is I actually had it a lot similar to what you want, but then I came across a jutsu already in your lists that just kinda.. dwarfed it.
Sekka no Ichigeki [ Petrifaction Blow ] Rank: A Official Description: Sekka no Ichigeki is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by wandering Shinobi Ishidate. Using his petrifaction gauntlet, Ishidate can touch his target and activate the process. First the eye on the gauntlet will open, then a latice of chemicals will flow through the target. The gauntlet turns the matter into a rigid or stone-like substance. This stone form can be returned to normal if treated in time with Ninjutsu healing. If the body remains in this stone form for too long though, it will become permanently damaged. The petrifaction gauntlet can also be used to manipulate other stone. Ishidate can grab chunks of stone and then strike them with the gauntlet. While in the air the stone will then split into numerous sharp daggers. Guild Description: See official description. Requires any Eiseijutsu to heal from. The first post will infect the touched limb. The second post will infect the main body. The third post will infect all limbs other than the head. The fifth post will infect the head, leaving them immobile. The sixth post from the target will kill them. Gauntlet not required.
So I made edits to it's strength because I obviously didn't want my custom, especially a bloodline custom, to be weaker than something that was already in the guild. If I made the edits to Midas Touch be that it can be transferred to someone through any black steel and create a hazard that follows the [6] post infection rate of Petrifaction Blow would that be alright? The duration would be forever since I'm turning them to metal and killing them with it. Just like Petrifaction Blow is turning them to stone and killing them with it. I can remove the A ranked Eiseijutsu jutsu requirement and have it be any Eiseijutsu. So that way it mimics the limitations of Petrifaction Blow though?
So what would be the best way to go about this? Do i drop the -3 to reflexes and +5 to cost and tale out the part where it ranks up with body ranks? My intentions were to originally make this a PA, but was told itd be better as a passive jutsu. Its supposed to be in her blood, not a jutsu she learned... idk is there a way to make it a passive, or will I have to make it an augment style technique?
Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2017 1:27 pm
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Both approved my dude.
SB5K
Oni Potency: Make it a supplementary technique. "While this jutsu is active, when the opponent is hit with a sake technique their reflex stat drops in equal rank to the amount of chakra provided." So like, if you use oni potency at C-ranked, then you can drop your opponent's reflex when their hit by a moderate amount per hit. Then give it a time limit which scales with the rank you use it at, and you should be fine.
Evanescently Magnificent
Enveloping Darkness: Approved.
Last Word: Pending. This is why I said this technique frustrates me. Yes genjutsu disrupts the chakra network. But it does so with the consequence that the target feels some illusion. So let's compromise. I can allow you to take out the stipulation that their chakra is not used, or I can make it so that you can make this genjutsu to make the person feel as though they were hit with the force of the attack that they were going to use on you. This would have to make it unable to be used with genjutsu since that would basically then just be the genjutsu reverse, but I think you could have use in a technique which makes a ninjutsu ninja feel as though they're being hit with their own attack. If you don't want to go that angle and want to make them pay the cost, then just say that the illusion riffles them with a temporary surge of pain which denies them the ability to use the technique. This then would still work with countering a genjutsu cast.
Assimilation & Imperium: Approved.
Midas Touch: Approved but on a trial run. When you use this ability in a fight, you are to quote me and then I can see if it's something which should be in the guild. Make no mistake, however, if I deem it too powerful, then I will also take out that other technique from the guild. I won't give you the half baked version of a technique which already exist.
Kondo Kaicho
Anthropohagis Sanguinus: Pending. Why do I have to repeat myself? You gave the technique a duration, which is appreciative. But you still did not specify that this technique is not permanent. That once you get twelve dosages of zombie bites that you don't remain a zombie forever. This has to be something which cures itself over time. Like, if you keep biting them and keep making them stay a zombie that's one thing. But it needs to have a clear duration. Also people are not going to carry this virus for the rest of their roleplaying lives.
The other three, however, approved. Zetsumei would be so proud.
Character: Belamos Karna Technique Name: Hear me, Sol Rank: A Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Belamos, with a simple flick of his wrist, can create a dense wall of flames. The wall is 40 feet high, 15 feet wide and 3 feet thick. Belamos can adjust those proportions to be smaller then, but not larger than, those numbers for situations in which the wall would not fit. Belamos can also create small openings no larger than a single humans body in the wall temporarily. The wall lasts 3 posts
