Technique Name: Earth Conversion Rank: Null [Learned at C-Rank] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Doton Description: The user performs a few hand seals then rests one hand on the ground. The molded doton chakra is directed to the target area. The chakra aggressively converts the earthly materials in the target area into another earthly material of their choosing (ie - dirt into stone, stone into metal, etc.). The user can only convert substances into up to one other material per body rank (D-rank=1, C-rank=2, etc.). For every rank of chakra applied during the execution of this technique the area affected grows by up to ten [10] cubic meters, (C-rank minimum). Cannot create crystals of any kind with this technique.
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Gift of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:“After a lifetime of loving to swim, Nozomi toyed with the idea of having a mermaid-like tail. After a while of thinking about it, Nozomi came up with the idea of a jutsu like the transformation technique that would turn her legs is to a fish tail. Since this form is more sleek, streamlined, and made for swimming— it grants her with a moderate bonus to speed and reflexes when submerged in water. This technique is passive once learned and activates when the user is in water past waist-height.”
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Sight of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:Due to repetitive swimming with no eye gear, Nozomi formed a jutsu that lines her eyes with a protective layer of chakra that activates upon contact with water. This technique is passive once learned and is activated when the eyes come in contact with water.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:21 pm
Given the thematic and mechanical similarities, these should be partially passive like the Breathing Underwater technique, so they'd activate automatically and drain the requisite Chakra from you upon entering water. I'd also bump the Sight of the Sea custom down to D-Rank. Does that sound reasonable?
Lily Platypus
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Gift of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:“After a lifetime of loving to swim, Nozomi toyed with the idea of having a mermaid-like tail. After a while of thinking about it, Nozomi came up with the idea of a jutsu like the transformation technique that would turn her legs is to a fish tail. Since this form is more sleek, streamlined, and made for swimming— it grants her with a moderate bonus to speed and reflexes when submerged in water. This technique is passive once learned and activates when the user is in water past waist-height.”
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Sight of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:Due to repetitive swimming with no eye gear, Nozomi formed a jutsu that lines her eyes with a protective layer of chakra that activates upon contact with water. This technique is passive once learned and is activated when the eyes come in contact with water.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:12 am
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Gift of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:“After a lifetime of loving to swim, Nozomi toyed with the idea of having a mermaid-like tail. After a while of thinking about it, Nozomi came up with the idea of a jutsu like the transformation technique that would turn her legs is to a fish tail. Since this form is more sleek, streamlined, and made for swimming— it grants her with a moderate bonus to speed and reflexes when submerged in water. This technique is passive once learned and activates when the user is in water past waist-height. Requires upkeep half of original cost to continue past the first post.”
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Sight of the Sea Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:Due to repetitive swimming with no eye gear, Nozomi formed a jutsu that lines her eyes with a protective layer of chakra that activates upon contact with water. This technique is passive once learned and is activated when the eyes come in contact with water.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
Ergo War
Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:03 pm
Approved.
Lily Platypus
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Gift of the Sea Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:“After a lifetime of loving to swim, Nozomi toyed with the idea of having a mermaid-like tail. After a while of thinking about it, Nozomi came up with the idea of a jutsu like the transformation technique that would turn her legs is to a fish tail. Since this form is more sleek, streamlined, and made for swimming— it grants her with a moderate bonus to speed and reflexes when submerged in water. This technique is passive once learned and activates when the user is in water past waist-height. Requires upkeep half of original cost to continue past the first post.”
Character: Nozomi Aburame Technique Name: Sight of the Sea Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description:Due to repetitive swimming with no eye gear, Nozomi formed a jutsu that lines her eyes with a protective layer of chakra that activates upon contact with water. This technique is passive once learned and is activated when the eyes come in contact with water.
Character: Masato Umechika Technique Name: Bodiky Manifestation Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Maruton Description: Through meticulous physical training paired with the Ninja arts associated with his Brawler/Berserker Subclass, Masato has learned to utilize ninjutsu that remain attached to the body without the use of hand seals. The cost of doing so is a D rank amount of chakra, allowing Masato to continuously press a physical offense while activating a ninjutsu.
Character: Masato Umechika Technique Name: Armageddon Clap Rank: X Type: Taijutsu Element: n/a Description: Through heavy physicsl training, Masato's monsterojs strength has granted him the ability to create pressure waves through a clapping motion. This clapping motion involves swinging both arms from shoulder to finger tip toward each other for impact. The results of the sheer impact create a pressure wave that results in a sonic boom. This pressure wave travels outward in an expanding wave motion from the clap's impact. This pressure wave carries the concussive force to blow an enemy back 10 feet for each rank applied, rupturing ear drums and causing hemorrhages within the ear cavities. The force of this blast is also able to exstinfuish flames and turn ninjutsu of a lower rank than itself in the opposite direction and crumble formations as durable as rock and severely damage steel constructs.
Character: Masato Umechika Technique Name: Overwhelming Presense Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Maruton Description: When the user uses a technique that transforms them into a different state for a period of time such as a jinchuriki's transformation, Eight Gates, Sage mode, ect, that transformation enacts a nullifying effect on incoming attacks through the form of a thin layer of chakra equal to the user's body rank for no additional activation cost. The user may pay the difference in chakra to defend for an additional activation.
Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 3:05 am
Kondo Kaicho
Is this to summon ninjutsu without handsigns? And it is limited to only ninjutsu that activate on the body and that stay on the body? If so, then yes. Approved. Technique Name:Bodiky (< Was this intentional? Got a good laugh from me XD) Manifestation Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Maruton Description: Through meticulous physical training paired with the Ninja arts associated with his Brawler/Berserker Subclass, Masato has learned to utilize ninjutsu that remain attached to the body without the use of hand seals. The cost of doing so is a D rank amount of chakra, allowing Masato to continuously press a physical offense while activating a ninjutsu.
Make it complex, have the striked out section is removed, and add in the actual dimensions of the wave of the sonic boom and I'll re-look at it! Technique Name: Armageddon Clap Rank: X Type: Taijutsu Element: n/a Description: Through heavy physicsl training, Masato's monsterojs strength has granted him the ability to create pressure waves through a clapping motion. This clapping motion involves swinging both arms from shoulder to finger tip toward each other for impact. The results of the sheer impact create a pressure wave that results in a sonic boom. This pressure wave travels outward in an expanding wave motion from the clap's impact. This pressure wave carries the concussive force to blow an enemy back 10 feet for each rank applied, rupturing ear drums and causing hemorrhages within the ear cavities. The force of this blast is also able to exstinfuish flames and turn ninjutsu of a lower rank than itself in the opposite direction and crumble formations as durable as rock and severely damage steel constructs.
Denied and will not be allowed on any circumstance - if you would like an explenation, let me know! Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Maruton Description: When the user uses a technique that transforms them into a different state for a period of time such as a jinchuriki's transformation, Eight Gates, Sage mode, ect, that transformation enacts a nullifying effect on incoming attacks through the form of a thin layer of chakra equal to the user's body rank for no additional activation cost. The user may pay the difference in chakra to defend for an additional activation.
Technique Name: Armageddon Clap Rank: X Type: Taijutsu Element: n/a Description: Through heavy physical training, Masato's monstrous strength has granted him the ability to create pressure waves through a clapping motion paired with a burst of chakra. This clapping motion involves swinging both arms from shoulder to finger tip toward each other for impact. The results of the sheer impact create a pressure wave that results in a sonic boom. This pressure wave travels outward 10 feet per rank in an expanding wave motion from the clap's impact, spreading 5 feet in width per rank.This pressure wave carries the concussive force to blow an enemy back 10 feet for each rank applied, rupturing ear drums and causing hemorrhages within the ear cavities. The force of this blast is also able to exstinfuish flames and turn ninjutsu of a lower rank than itself in the opposite direction.
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:23 pm
Kondo Kaicho
denied as is suggested changes in bold
Technique Name: Armageddon Clap Rank: X Needs to be made complex, this is involving a burst if chakra so spiritual as well. Type: Taijutsu Element: n/a Description: Through heavy physical training, Masato's monstrous strength has granted him the ability to create pressure waves through a clapping motion paired with a burst of chakra. This clapping motion involves swinging both arms from shoulder to finger tip toward each other for impact. The results of the sheer impact create a pressure wave that results in a sonic boom. This pressure wave travels outward 10 feet per rank in an expanding wave motion from the clap's impact, spreading 5 feet in width per rank.This pressure wave carries the concussive force to blow an enemy back 10 feet for each rank applied, rupturing ear drums and causing hemorrhages within the ear cavities. The force of this blast is also able to exstinfuish flames and turn ninjutsu of a lower rank than itself in the opposite direction. We also need you to tone down the distance so five foot distance per rank one foot width per rank 1 foot knockback per rank
Character: Karuto Raiken Technique Name: Thunder Lord's Strike Rank: X Type: Complex Taijutsu Element: Lightning Description: An augment/complimentary action to Formless Taijutsu, by paying the equal amount of Chakra as the Formless Taijutus's Rank, Karuto can emit a quick bolt of lightning from the source of the strike.
Technique Name: Air Bounce Rank: X Type: Complex Taijutsu Element: Null Description: By kicking against the air very rapidly and expelling chakra out the bottom of his foot, Karuto can "leap" while already in the air. This allows him to change direction mid-jump. However, he will insist to all others that he is just "flying." 1 direction change per E Rank of Stamina and Chakra Expended. To "hover/fly" Karuto must rapidly kick and expel chakra, requiring great concentration. He can not use Ninjutsu while in the air and must expel a B-Rank of Stamina and Chakra per post.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2017 6:00 pm
Character:Jeon and Jay Park Technique Name: Kuchiyose: Great Flaming Pillars of the Jade Emperor's Palace Rank: B-S [Learned as B] Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Description: Utilitzing the raiton chakra flowing within the twins, this skill, following either handseals or through the Mystic Hero passive, will cause 8ft spears made of lighting to erupt from the ground all around the user. These spears are capable of being grabbed and used by the twins at any time so long as they remain and can deal potentially lethal damage if an opponent is below them when they rise. The spears created come up in the for cardinal directions based on where the twins were looking when it was used, and only four are created within five meters. For A rank, 8 spears rise from the ground, with the additional four coming in the spaces between. The S rank variant springs up 12 spears, with the additional four rising within 10 meters anywhere they choose. The rising of the spears themselves can pierce and skewer those who don't move on the span of a second after lightning crawls along the ground to where they'll come up from, and they deliver painful shocks at their rank to anyone who isn't the twins who touches them. Lasts for 8 posts, then an upkeep of half the original cost can keep it going for another four.
Character: Sanae Uzumaki Technique Name: [ nazuma akusesu no jutsu [ Lightning Access Seal] ] Rank: C Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: Maruton Description:A fuuinjutsu which stores individual weapons in seals which are inscribed upon the user's body like a kind of tattoo. By touching a hand (the owner's) to the seal the weapon can be summoned to ones own hands at will so long as it is in its sealed state. Likewise when the weapon is held in hand it can be sealed once more by touching a hand to its corresponding seal. To create a seal for a given weapon costs a C - rank amount of chakra and one must be holding it their hands. In addition one may pay five [5] chakra to return their weapon to its seal while it is out of their hands. May only possess one [1] sealed weapon per body rank.
BlackFruity
Holy Rinaku
Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 5:42 pm
Nami Tenshu
Honey you're doing amazing sweetie! The only thing I need to get this custom approve is to get rid of that stipulation where you can reduce the cost of re-sealing objects.
NOJAMNOJAMNOJAM
Approved
Dexter Prince
Thank you so much for your patience! So you have two tricks. With your lightning punches conversion custom, you need to specify how far the lightning fires, as well as what kind of damage your lightning is doing. You also need to explain whether the lightning is costing chakra, stamina, or mixed, as well as the fact that you need to elaborate if your lightning gains bonuses based on your speed and strength stat. I would very much prefer if they didn't, but I will try to work with you.
As for Air Bounce, Air Bounce: Change it to one direction change per rank, no hovering without using up a direction change for every action you stay in the air. I really think that there are enough air walking techniques so you don't need to use this one, especially since you have the wind element. Like, there has to be easier ways to do this. But, you do you pal.
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