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 Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:04 pm
Hey ******** this man, I can't type anymore. I was ******** writing non-stop today...
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:05 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:07 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:10 pm
I'd ask what's up.. but right now that seems to be a dumb question.. so i won't ask it..
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:11 pm
I DON'T ******** SWEAR.
: P
HI KAHARA.
..Haha.
Sounds like my name. XD
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:13 pm
Sorry Shuggles, I already beat you to the ironic swear statement. BenFleming Don't ******** swear, Kira.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:13 pm
That sucks.
CALM DOWN SAHARA. D<
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:18 pm
It's just that I never said ******** in a long time. XD  [[Perfect Girl Evolution]]
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:19 pm
um.. may not be the best time to ask.. but could someone, if they have time, read the two chapters of a story i posted here in the bag o' tricks area, and tell me what you think.
Cause if i'm told it's boring and a waste of time to write.. i'm not going to bother with it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:23 pm
o: !
[[So far]] It's really good, Kahara! XD I wish I were that good. It's really interesting. <3 --Continues to read--
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:27 pm
Ya think...?
Haha, I have my brother typing now.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:28 pm
blaugh thanks. I think in some places it needs to be more detailed and descriptive, but exactly where and how i should go about all that, is where i'm stuck. I haven't even finished making up all their characters. I've been trying to make them as indepth as i can. Originally this story was for a Webcomic i wanted to start.. but i'm not that great of an artist.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:32 pm
XD
Give it a shot. It might work. I've seen scribbles that were funny.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:35 pm
Yeah, I've got most of the next chapter written up, but i need to come up with eight names for the generals, and the big evil bad guys name.. and a cult name for the people that worship the big evil bad guy, and the generals..
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:36 pm
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