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 Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 5:44 pm
hi just joined the guild got some poetry i wright when stressed i just want to know what you all think here's the first one i'll post
This web of lies
has diamond eyes
that see your very soul
it crafts a mask
near a golden flask
and placed it on a doll
it looks like you
it talks like you
it puts you in a sleep
it leads the way from the light of day
to steal your dreams away
you cannot scream for your lack of dreams
but your shown to the door
who was not black before
who’s handle you can’t reach
you are tied in that web of lies from which you can’t break free
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 3:07 pm
Burning fires, tortured soul
Strings of lies bind this doll
Pull the strings tight once more
Just one cut could make you fall
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:32 pm
I love them!
especially, this part from the first one,
you cannot scream for your lack of dreams
but your shown to the door
who was not black before
who’s handle you can’t reach
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2012 12:37 am
I really like them. A web of lies, interesting perspective.
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 4:03 pm
Great thing about the first poem, is that you can read it from the bottom, and it would still make sense...
Is the second one about drug rehab? emotion_awesome
Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:22 am
thank for the compliments here is a few more new ones
rage of fire
roaring higher
black flames burn your soul
darkness soaring
mind is thawing
the time of rising drawing near
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:25 am
black and white
white and black
darkness, light turn their backs
voids do dance before my eyes
colours grey no rage resides
spite to light and wrath to dark
i have finally found a path
oblivion always, lasts
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:28 am
fire cries burning tears
lightning cries from it's fears
water cries for sorrows wrought
but gaia cries for her pain
brought to her by human game
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:37 am
Lapendio Great thing about the first poem, is that you can read it from the bottom, and it would still make sense... Is the second one about drug rehab? emotion_awesome Keep up the good work! no the second one's not about drug rehab
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:00 pm
dragonfire3408 Lapendio Great thing about the first poem, is that you can read it from the bottom, and it would still make sense... Is the second one about drug rehab? emotion_awesome Keep up the good work! no the second one's not about drug rehab I know dragon, I was joking... wink When shall we expect the next one?
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 12:34 pm
Lapendio dragonfire3408 Lapendio Great thing about the first poem, is that you can read it from the bottom, and it would still make sense... Is the second one about drug rehab? emotion_awesome Keep up the good work! no the second one's not about drug rehab I know dragon, I was joking... wink When shall we expect the next one? the next one will be when i find one of my books that i kept them in or am near another breakdown so about 2 weeks at max
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2012 12:39 am
a ruby rage
a diamond fades
a saddened emerald
nightmares dance
just one last chance
for the tales gruesome keep
ha i guess it was the second one got to love relatives stare
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:00 pm
Darkness flowing through the depths
Black of heart and blue of breast
At the bottom of the sea
None alive reside but me
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:30 am
sorry i realise i haven't posted something new in a few weeks but here's a new poem for a late x-mas gift
a winter night
a snowstorm brings
frightened children hid their things
but to late does come the spring
the children gone no one sings
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