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Satsun

PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:08 am


Well, not first, more like second... but hey!
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:15 am


The picture is great!
I bet its better than I can do! biggrin 3nodding

SecretAgentX


Alienor Kaze

PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 10:39 am


satsun
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Seeing that it's your first to your second time, it's fairly good. I mean, I was 13 when I first started to draw manga-style (after abandoning it six years ago), it was hard to tell what and where the eyes were and what the face shape was. what you can try doing is shrinking Kagome's head a bit.

Try drawing the body first and then adding the clothes later. The legs could get some work, but her clothes are fairly accurate. About the leg positioning, one of them should be slightly shorter than the other. Kagome should have one foot standing in front of the other when she is firing her arrow. Your leg perspective is a bit off.

Furthermore, Kagome looks as if she is going to tip over. If you draw a straight line from the center of her chin to her feet, the line should be somewhere between the two legs. When I draw an axis through your drawing, all of Kagome's weight is placed on her left leg.

But it's your first time, and you've developed your own style from it, so it's pretty good in regards for that. Just fix up her proportion a bit, and it'll be all good... well at worst, it'll be better.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 8:18 pm


^Art student. xp I agree, though.

When I first drew Kagome, you couldn't even tell who it was. I think I may have burned it since. xd

Nakano Broadway


Satsun

PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 6:36 am


(Not going to quote kaze's long post so just pretend whee )

I always draw the heads too big sweatdrop other than on a few random works
My legs aren't "great" (....well let's not put what I think of them sometimes...) either, and I do need more practice and be patient... but I guess that'll come as I get older... and THEN I shall draw Yuna... *becomes lesbisch xd * nah I only have anime/manga/video-game eyes for Jakotsu... but anyway...

I'll take what you said into consideration when I draw her (or anyone) then next time

...and only a few more months and I get to go to an art school as well... only more or less for the heck of it
PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 11:03 am


Hanajima-chan
^Art student. xp I agree, though.

When I first drew Kagome, you couldn't even tell who it was. I think I may have burned it since. xd


After I tried drawing Sailor Jupiter in eighth grade, I was so disgusted with it I stopped drawing manga altogther. Then I began again last year. It was much better than a couple years ago. For the longest time I had the same problem as Satsun. My heads were ENORMOUS.

I've gotten all my knowledge from my Fashion Illustration class. I know it's about drawing fashion figures, but anime characters are thin, long, legged and have fashion model characteristics. Furthermore, I managed to shrink down the hair ever since I joined this class.

@ Satsun: You're lucky. My coming from traditional Korean parents, I wasn't allowed to do any art. I was forced to take science and math class. My parents tried to train me to become a medical student, which was something I so did not want to be. I suck at math and I pretty much loathe science. >.<

There are other bodily proportion things that I've learned in class, but I can't remember all of them out of the top of my head. I'll probably tell you some more tips later. 3nodding

Alienor Kaze


Nakano Broadway

PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:26 pm


I have the big head issue too, but it's not that bad. It just happens to look horrible in conjunction with everything else that I screw up. ><

I'm worst at the whole neck/shoulders/arms area. They never seem to connect right, and my characters always look totally blah because the problem messes up the poses.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 9:55 pm


Hanajima-chan
I have the big head issue too, but it's not that bad. It just happens to look horrible in conjunction with everything else that I screw up. ><

I'm worst at the whole neck/shoulders/arms area. They never seem to connect right, and my characters always look totally blah because the problem messes up the poses.


Okies... time to take out my "Fashion Illustrations" notes! mrgreen

FRONTAL POSITION (STANDING - No perspectives or body positions):
1. Body Proportion: From my notes, it is said that the figure should be about four heads high from the crown of the head, down to the "crotch".The average figure should be about 8 and half heads tall (foot included). As for the shoulders, it should be approximately three heads wide (the width of the head).

2. Arms: The point that connects the upper and lower arm should align with the waist. The hand reaches down to about mid-thigh.

3. Legs: The thigh should be about two heads long and the calf should also be about two "heads" high. It can be three, according to my professor.

idea TIP: If you're having trouble with body positioning, try using trapezoidal boxes. A larger one for the upper torso and a smaller one for the lower torso (aka hips). As I've told Satsun, if you draw an axis down the middle of the body starting from the throat, the line should go somewhere in between the legs.

When drawing hair, you shouldn't draw the hair on as you draw the body. I suggest drawing the person bald and completely naked (you can just give them a bra and panties, I do that xd ). Draw the hair on the head. Make sure that there is some space between the head and the top of the hair.

I hope it works for you. It worked for me, and my characters look MUCH better. 3nodding If it would help, I can scan in my notes for you.

Alienor Kaze


[Mustang Moon]

PostPosted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:13 am


satsun
Well, not first, more like second... but hey!
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Please tell me what you think about it
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Nice art! 3nodding
You know I should put my Inuyasha Art in. Pm me if you would like to see it. I'm not to good but I've been praticing. wink
PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:58 pm


Those are some nice tips kaze no sakura!
I'll try them out on some of my drawings...
ninja

SecretAgentX


Satsun

PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:20 am


kaze no sakura
*Fashion Illustrations notes!*


Helpfull, helpful!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 1:56 pm


hi

roxxey21


Avian+Rox

PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 1:53 pm


IT SUCkS!!!!!! YET ITS AWSOME!!!
PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:13 pm


Satsun
Well, not first, more like second... but hey!
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Please tell me what you think about it
(Sorry if I can't make a topic for this sweatdrop )
I like and more pratice you can draw but everybody in InuYasha

Dangerous Muffin


[Mustang Moon]

PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 4:19 pm


Satsun
Well, not first, more like second... but hey!
User Image

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Please tell me what you think about it
(Sorry if I can't make a topic for this sweatdrop )

If it's your first one you've done really well. ^_^
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