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 Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 8:58 pm
This is your first assignment as a Guild Student. Fill out this character skeleton and post it back. This character does not need to be a representation of yourself. This character is one that you make JUST for the Helping Hands forum. You may ONLY post here until I, the teacher, LucksLady approve your application. You have one week to finish this. If, for some reason, you need more time PM me and I personally, will talk to the other crew members. However, if you take over a week and do not PM me then I will be forced to kick you out. Readmission is accepted but will put you at the bottom of the waiting list.
http://www.google.com/ and http://dictionary.reference.com/ are great helpers. You CAN ask me for help!
(As you fill out this Application if you have any questions, please post them below. Your input will help me, help the other students. Do not be shy!)
- Character Admission Application-
Gaia Name: (What does Gaia see you as?)
Character Name:
Gender: (Male, Female, both something in between)
Age: (Your chara's actual age)
Apparent age: (How old do they look)
Race: (Human, Dwarf, Elf, Half-Elf, Gnome, Halfling, Orc, Etc...)
Skin-
Color: (Shades, Tones, Red, Blue, Green, Ect...)
Texture: (How does it feel?)
Patterns: (Shapes, designs)
Eyes-
Color: (Retina, Pupil, Sclera)
Pupil Shape: ( Usual shaped Pupil? Stick it here. If not leave this blank)
Hair-
Length:
Color:
Style:
Build-
Height:
Weight:
Proportions: (As compared to humans)
Personality-
Basic Personality: (Serious, Quiet, Kind, Caring, Sensitive, Independent, Determined Etc...)
Alignment: (Good, Evil, Between)
Loyalties: (Who or what are you loyal to)
Goals: (what do you want to do with your life)
History:
Interests: (what are you interested in enough to study)
Likes:
Dislikes:
Triggers: (what makes you wanna strangle something)
Flaws:
Minor Mental Disorders:
Ticks: (Obsessive and/or Compulsive Actions such as twitching)
Bad Habits:
Unpleasant Personality traits sad Things they do that could be annoying to others)
Vices: (A bad habit. Synonyms for vice include fault, depravity, sin, iniquity, wickedness and corruption, failing or defect. Vice is the opposite of virtue.)
Natural Special Abilities-
Physical: (what is unusual about your body)
Mental: (what can your brain do? Telekinesis, Telepathy Ect...)
Magical/Spiritual:
Training-
Combat:
Other Physical Training:
Magic:
Mental:
Skills:
Arts:
Obscure sad Usually refered to as the "other" catagory, any training that's obscure enough that it doesn't fit into anything else.)
Practical: (cooking, seweing...things that help you survive)
Lawful: (Training that leads you to follow a code of honorable conduct)
Unlawful sad read lawful backwards)
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:44 pm
Gaia Name: Broaconstrictor
Character Name: Rukio (Kujo)
Gender: Male
Age: 25
- Apparent age: 17
Race: possesed human
Skin
- Color: white
- Texture: smooth, minus one large scar crossing my chest
- Patterns: tribal tattoo (birthmark) under my right eye
Eyes
sky blue
Hair
- shoulder length
- black with a purplish tint
- slightly messy
Build
- 6'
- 135 lbs
- tall and very thin
Personality
Im fairly quiet and calm usually (unless i open up to someone). Im neither good, nor evil, and im loyal only to myself (and kujo) and the people who i love (none at the moment). Im trying to find out who i am,my past, and why im possesed by the demon Kujo. I dont remember anything after the past six years and iv been traveling nonstop since. I study dark magic and the reason for existance. i absolutely love to cook, eat, and all hard candys. but i despise chocolate, and stuck up people. People who piss me off set off my trigger and usually make Kujo take control. Being fairly shy and quiet are really my only flaws... well, other then maybe being possessed but im used to that, and i guess you could call that a "minor mental disorder" since im not really controlling myself. And finally I smoke.
Natural Special Abilities
Im "gifted" with the power of darkness thanks to Kujo. (ie dark magic, controlling/becoming shadows)
Training
Well, since i can remember iv been fending for myself, and have been able to control darkness. I dont like to fight but i know well how to. I carry 2 daggers on me, and am extremely stealth and sneaky and seldom can someone hear me coming.
Hope you approve! =)
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:59 pm
Gaia Name: Yok-kun Treat
Character Name: Yok-kun or Yok
Gender: Female
Age: 19
- Apparent age 23
Race: Demon
Skin: Like a Human
Eyes:
- Color: Red
- Pupil Shape: Cat eye
Hair: Like my Gaia Charater
Build
- Height: 5' 8''
- Weight: average
Personality
- Basic Personality: Independent
- Alignment: Evil
- Loyalties: Master (Queenkiki9 cool
- Goals: Unknown
- History: Constant Crimes
- Interests: ....
- Likes: Master and Master's friends
- Dislikes: REALLY Friendly people (But can grow to like them)
- Triggers: People that are mean to Master
- Flaws: No Life skills
- Minor Mental Disorders: ......
- Bad Habits: Clingy
- Vises: ???
- Unpleasant Personality traits: Cross dresses as a Boy
Natural Special Abilities
- Physical: Unknown Powers
- Mental: Unknown
- Magical/Spiritual: ???
Training
- Combat: Close and Long range
- Other Physical Training: Unwilling to admit
- Magic: Dark
- Skills: Cross-dresses as a Boy (People cant tell im a girl either)
- Arts: ???
- Obscure: ???
- Practical?
- Unlawful: Very
Pet
Name: Pikun
Very Loyal to Yok (His Master), Which likes to Torture him
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:20 pm
Broaconstrictor
As you are my first student I will tell you that I am being a bit harsher than normal. Here is my evaluation. 1. You can NOT skip parts you do not want to fill out. With this comment a lot of what i need to address will be skimmed down. 2. What causes you to be so angry? "People who piss me off set off my trigger..." 3. Dark Magic? Define. That is the point of this. "...ie dark magic, con..." 4. My grammar is not the best but even I know that you can not start a sentence with But"...rd candys. but i despi..." 5. All of your I's need capitalized. 6. Delete #5. It is good to get into the character, however, do not talk in first person while filling out something that is not for you personally. You are not the character. You are you ^.^ Please redo Personality Natural Special Abilities Training
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:41 pm
Yok-kun Treat As you are one of the first students I will tell you that I am being a bit harsher than normal. Here is my evaluation. 1. If you said this to a person who is not able to feel anything, he'd probably punt you across the front lawn. ^.^ Skin: Like a Human 2. Completely Red all the way though? Eyes: - Color: Red 3. Assume someone could not see your gaia character. What would you do then? Go bald? Hair: Like my Gaia Charater 4. What is average weight? Do you know? Because I don't. Build - Weight: average 5.What do the dots mean? I'm confused as the question marks you have on Vises. http://www.google.com/ and http://dictionary.reference.com/ are great helpers. You could have asked me -smiles brightly- Personality - Interests: .... - Minor Mental Disorders: ...... - Vises: ??? 6. (After several minutes of considering word choices.) Redo this. I like combat and ... combat. take it as an example and redo the rest. Training - Combat: Close and Long range - Other Physical Training: Unwilling to admit - Magic: Dark - Skills: Cross-dresses as a Boy (People cant tell im a girl either) - Arts: ??? - Obscure: ??? - Practical? - Unlawful: Very 7. Do NOT add anything to my application without notifying me first. You will, in another skeleton, be allowed a pet. Pet Please RedoSkin Eyes Hair Weight Personality Training
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:59 am
Personality:
Basic Personality: very calm and quiet most of the time
Alignment: between
Loyalties: self (and Kujo)
Goals: find out who he really is, his past, and why Kujo possesses him
History: well if he knew that he wouldn't b trying to find out about it. ^_^
Interests: dark magic and the reason for existence
Likes: loves to cook, eat, and all hard candy
Dislikes: chocolate and stuck up people
Triggers: when people don't stop talking when there isnt anything else important to say, and when insulted tremendously
Flaws: being fairly shy and quiet
Minor Mental Disorders: well, unless you count being possessed...
Ticks:always holding something
Bad Habits: smoking
Vises: the fact that he has no known family so he believes that he is alone.
Unpleasant Personality traits: he zones out alot
Natural Special Abilities:
Physical: none
Mental: none
Magical/Spiritual: Kujo gives him the power control darkness and shadows. Becoming a shadow and concentrating dark energy into his daggers are his specialties. Although he can make projectiles too.
Training:
Combat: had to fend for himself over the last 6 years of travel, he uses 2 daggers that are the only thing he has from his past, although he doesnt know where they came from. hes very fast and quiet and when it comes to killing he doesnt hesitate. although fighting isnt his favorite thing, in fact, he doesnt like it at all.
Other Physical Training: Most likely some in his childhood but he cant remember it
Magic: He didnt train with dark magic, it kind of just came to him with Kujo.
Mental: Constant meditation when alone
Skills: cooking
Arts: none
Obscure: none
Practical: he keeps himself very clean
Lawful: none
Unlawful: none
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 10:23 am
broaconstrictor The only problem I have is with Vices. (A bad habit. Synonyms for vice include fault, depravity, sin, iniquity, wickedness and corruption, failing or defect. Vice is the opposite of virtue.) You pass. Please go on to Equipment Skeleton ^.^
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:13 am
Gaia Name: Elizabethz101
Character Name: Grace
Gender: Female
Age: 15
- Apparent age 18
Race Half wolf half human
Skin
- Color Indian shade of white.
- Texture Smooth.
- Patterns
Eyes
- Color Purple.
- Pupil Shape Heart.
Hair
- Length Long
- Color Dark red
- Style Curly
Build
- Height 6'3
- Weight 135
- Proportions Long legs, short arms.
Personality
- Basic Personality Sweet, generous, kind to others, does not get mad easily.
- Alignment Good.
- Loyalties self , friends, cousin, (kujo)
- Goals To find my long lost brother.
- History . Long ago when i was young and my family was happy and together, my brother was taken away from my parents and my parents died. They left me to find my brother and find something that means the world to me, the hear crystal necklace.
- Interests Music, art.
- Likes People who are nice to me. I love animals.
- Dislikes People who lie to me, people who want to kill me.
- Triggers When someone makes fun of someone or when someone insults me.
- Flaws none
- Minor Mental Disorders none
- Ticks none.
- Bad Habits Being organized.
- Vises When someone wants to hurt someone else when they didn't do something, Or when someone wants to hurt me.
- Unpleasant Personality traits . When someone lies about something but i already know the truth. When people complain about the stupidest stuff.
Natural Special Abilities
- Physical Hear far away, smell fear or instantly know when someone is dieing or need help, good eye sight. photographic memories.
- Mental telepathy, in my mind i can see the future and the past. Control someone with my mind.
- Magical/Spiritual control fire and water.
Training
- Combat
- Other Physical Training
- Magic
- Mental
- Skills
- Arts
- Obscure
- Practical
- lawful
- Unlawful
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:54 am
Elizabethz101 First off, for the other players, I will say that you've talked to me about the training and I agreed to let you ignore that part. 1. Please define Indian shade. Skin - Color Indian shade of white. 2. How long? Please Define. Hair - Length Long 3. We've all got flaws. ^.^ and the response for unpleasant personality traits is completely wrong. Personality - Flaws none - Unpleasant Personality traits . When someone lies about something but i already know the truth. When people complain about the stupidst stuff. 4. The ability to smell fear... Mentally where you have a subconscious empathy that allows you to sense fear. Magically where you have the ability to sense fear through scent, Physically where you have a strong enough sense of smell that you can smell the pheromones coming off of people when they are scared. Natural Special Abilities - Physical Hear far away, smell fear or instantly know when someone is dieing or need help, good eye sight. photographic memorie. 5. It is good to get into the character, however, do not talk in first person while filling out something that is not for you personally. You are not the character. You are you ^.^ Please Redo Skin Hair Personality Physical Special Abilities
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:22 pm
Skin
- Color for instance, Cherokee, dark tan.
Hair
- Length Long 10 inches
Personality
- Flaws being shy and not opening up to someone.
- Unpleasant Personality traits . day dreams to much.
Physically where you have a strong enough sense of smell that you can smell the pheromones coming off of people when they are scared.
Natural Special Abilities
- Physical where you have a strong enough sense of smell that you can smell the pheromones coming off of people when they are scared.
Photographic memorie,Good hearing.
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:29 pm
Gaia Name: Yok-kun Treat
Character Name: Yok-kun or Yok
Gender: Female
Age: 19
- Apparent age 23
Race: Demon
Skin: Kinda Pale
Eyes:
- Color: The Iris part of my eye is red
- Pupil Shape: Cat eye
Hair: Sholder lenght, Black w/ blonde streaks
Build
- Height: 5' 8''
- Weight: 98 pound
Personality
- Basic Personality: Independent
- Alignment: Pure Evil
- Loyalties: Master (Queenkiki9 cool
- Goals: Unknown
- History: Constant Crimes
- Interests: Meat
- Likes: Master and Master's friends, Meat
- Dislikes: REALLY Friendly people (But can grow to like them)
- Triggers: People that are mean to Master
- Flaws: No Life skills
- Minor Mental Disorders: None
- Bad Habits: Clingy
- Vises: None
- Unpleasant Personality traits: Cross dresses as a Boy
Natural Special Abilities
- Physical: Unknown Powers
- Mental: Unknown
- Magical/Spiritual: Only knows one Magic attack, HellFire (Very Fatal though)
Training
- Combat: Very skilled in both Close and Long range
- Other Physical Training: None
- Magic: Uses "HellFire" every once in a while
- Skills: Im very skilled in Thievery and Lock Picking
- Arts: None
- Obscure: None
- Practical: Unknown
- Unlawful: Never Follows the law
Like that? Or, Does it still need work? confused
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:11 pm
Yok-kun Treat 1. "My" Do not refer in first person. 2. Spell check is very helpful. Most of the people here will agree that they'd rather everyone use it. 3. Will you study meat? Personality - Interests: Meat 4. You were trained to not follow the law? Training - Unlawful: Never Follows the law Because these things are little you pass ^,^ Keep them in mind and go on to the Equipment Skeleton.
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:17 pm
elizabethz101 1. This is a bit iffy. Use your own words please. Natural Special Abilities - Physical where you have a strong enough sense of smell that you can smell the pheromones coming off of people when they are scared. Photographic memorie,Good hearing. 2. Spell check is very helpful. Most of the people here will agree that they'd rather everyone use it. Because these things are little you pass ^,^ Keep them in mind and go on to the Equipment Skeleton.
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