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Have you ever seen hell ? If you really think about it, what is hell? What is earth? Have you ever took time and sat in a empty room just to think about random stuff ? I have. It wasnt a very good idea. it was 11 at night an hour before halloween. I had my camera recording every minute of my day as usual. i posted the videos on my Tumblr blog. I went inside this white big room on the last floor o...f my house it had no window i sat my camera in a corner of the room. I sat in a chair in the middle of a big empty room and closed my eyes. While there i started thinking about random stuff and and thought about something i read that said "Have you ever been in a really quiet room? and have you heard a very annoying sound ?well that sound is actually the effect od your ear of being in a place with no sound. If you listen to it very quietly, you will start hearing wispering voices and if you you keep listening you will be able to understand them, what are those voices? They are the future and sometimes the past !. And once you start noticing them they will start to notice you.." I instantly opened my eyes then slowly closed them again" I sat there for a few minutes thinking about random stuff again, and out of nowhere i heard that sound very thin & annoying witch each second got more louder. I started to listening to the noise as i read when suddenly i heard voices wispering, my skin got cold and i felt a very cool breeze, then i thought to myself "but theres no window !" I didnt open my eyes my explanation was "Probably came from under the door" i kept listening to the noise. I started listening to the voices. One of the voice started getting clear and it was a little girl she kept giggling and "Have you ever seen hell?" i couldnt understand the other voice i tried as hard as i could then i finally understood it. It sounded like a big tall man and he said " What is hell? what is hearth? Theres no future, there no past, but what there is, is death always by your side" it really creeped me out how they both kept repeating the same thing over and over, the noise got louder and louder i still heard the man but not the girl... Then i heard more voices repeating the same thing as the men. Alot of them whispered, as if they were scared. I heard kids crying, even men as if they were scared, as if someone were terrified of someone. My eyes were still closed, i kept listening to the voices and they got louder and then i thought "where is the little girl?" The voices kept repeating themselves "What is hell? what is hearth? Theres no future, there no past, but what there is, is death always by your side" when suddenly a very different voice said "becareful!" I said what "what?" Thats when i felt a cooler breeze as if i was sitting inside a refrigerator. My eyes were still closed, i heard the noise again it was very loud and it really bothered my ears. Then i heard the little girl again? And said "Are you looking for me?" I got gosebumps i could feel them they were hard as rocks. The girl giggled, then i heard the men say " Be careful!" As if he was talking to me. The noise got really loud and very loud and suddently it stopped ... And I felt a very cold breeze. My eyes were still closed, I didn't hear the noise anymore. Then I heard the men and the girl talking again and they kept repeating themselves I heard them so loud as if they were next to me. When suddently I heard a very loud scream. I was too scared. I never felt anything so real, so Then I decided to open my eyes. The room felt different as if there was a crowd there and had just left. I went right to sleep the next day i posted the video then i decided to watch it. I couldnt believe what was seeying in the video there was a group of people surrounding me. It got really scared i kept watching the video then a very tall man with no face stood next to me and said " becareful" everything that happened thr night before was on video. I was shyting bricks when suddenly i hear a scream and i hear a knock i fast look to my window and seen a little girl and she said " Why are you looking for me?" ..... After that halloween night i never been in a quiet room or by myself or even touched a camera.

I worked kind of hard on that story.. Sorry if you don't like it though.


I actually like this. I would to see it fleshed out and novelized.

Thank you lol I forgot all about this post surprised

No problem!

Are you going to do anything with the concept? If you aren't could I perhaps do something with it? I really got racing with the mind when it came to ideas that his could be brought to.

I actually am! Thank you though I'm glad you liked it.


Alright! Well I look forward to see it sometime!

Perfect Sex Symbol

Rikku8


Thanks! heart I wrote a few more chapters with Tynes, but haven't finished his story completely.



Oh cooool! I'd like to be able to read it when it's done.
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Rikku8


Thanks! heart I wrote a few more chapters with Tynes, but haven't finished his story completely.



Oh cooool! I'd like to be able to read it when it's done.


I'll be posting some more chapters here: 3nodding

http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/original-stories-prose/the-prince/t.85898257/

Hopefully if enough people are interested, I'll be motivated enough to finish since I've been writing so slowly. sweatdrop

Thanks again! You motivated me to start this topic.

Perfect Sex Symbol

Rikku8
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Rikku8


Thanks! heart I wrote a few more chapters with Tynes, but haven't finished his story completely.



Oh cooool! I'd like to be able to read it when it's done.


I'll be posting some more chapters here: 3nodding

http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/original-stories-prose/the-prince/t.85898257/

Hopefully if enough people are interested, I'll be motivated enough to finish since I've been writing so slowly. sweatdrop

Thanks again! You motivated me to start this topic.


No problem! It gives me things to read too so it's awesome for me!

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Good question! These one million gold contests seem too good to be true. I'll be entering your contest though heart

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Good question! These one million gold contests seem too good to be true. I'll be entering your contest though heart

This contest's deadline was May 29, which was a few months ago. 3nodding

Generous Master

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Eripsa
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So...is this still happening?


Good question! These one million gold contests seem too good to be true. I'll be entering your contest though heart

This contest's deadline was May 29, which was a few months ago. 3nodding


Ahhh LOL

Tipsy Streaker

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Eripsa
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So...is this still happening?


Good question! These one million gold contests seem too good to be true. I'll be entering your contest though heart

This contest's deadline was May 29, which was a few months ago. 3nodding


We're the results published somewhere? Clearly I can tell I didn't win, but is like to know who did!

Bashful Gaian

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xHappyPuddingx
Eripsa
Sponge Bullet
So...is this still happening?


Good question! These one million gold contests seem too good to be true. I'll be entering your contest though heart

This contest's deadline was May 29, which was a few months ago. 3nodding


We're the results published somewhere? Clearly I can tell I didn't win, but is like to know who did!

I don't know, I didn't enter. I opened the thread hoping it was a recent contest, but sadly not. Maybe PM the host? heart

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