The Colosseum V [Duelling Grounds]

[calviness]

redface

I need to get my spell checker checked... wink
good job Vi!

[Zero is an Integer]

isis79

omgChe

Thanks for judging so promptly, Adi. ^ ^

Thanks for the duel, Inoue. =)




I find it pleasing that you decided to talk about the one part of the alliteration sections that I favour the most. =D

I really hoped that my enjambment would give cause to proper pause. But how does an author's hope change a poem?! XD Actually doing something more to make my expectations happen (more certain) is the way I should have gone. I just really like saying the first line from that bit aloud. It's fun. =P

Thanks again for the critical non-crit. 3nodding <3

I almost defeated you and vespertine. That in itself is a victory of which I can be proud. Thank you kindly for the duel. It was most certainly fun. heart

Losing is losing. Doing so with grace just makes you a chump.

[ViRabbit]

thanks cal! smile it was a good duel.

[Mahayr]

Hey ViR... I was invited to that Ink guild and saw you over there, nice idea, duels hahaha. I have seen a couple of others going up here abouts, dueling wheres, I mean.

[ViRabbit]

Mahayr

Hey ViR... I was invited to that Ink guild and saw you over there, nice idea, duels hahaha. I have seen a couple of others going up here abouts, dueling wheres, I mean.

Haha smile
The colosseum will always be the original, though. heart

[Mahayr]

ViRabbit

Mahayr

Hey ViR... I was invited to that Ink guild and saw you over there, nice idea, duels hahaha. I have seen a couple of others going up here abouts, dueling wheres, I mean.

Haha smile
The colosseum will always be the original, though. heart

Yes *smiles*, thanks to LongTimeListener yet again.

[Zeo]

The Duel:

Defender Name: Calviness
Challenger Name: Akashya Inoue
Judge: Zeo
Duel Type: Flash Call Out
Form: Free-Verse
Context: Open
The Bet: 4,000 gold

Enguarde!

[calviness]

Probably Zero

Losing is losing. Doing so with grace just makes you a chump.

So what does non-competing make you? Am I being irritating enough? I wouldn't want you to feel that I am neglecting you.

Also, since it is a flash duel, I guess I'd better hurry up and post something quick.

Don't Wake Me Up

If it were up to me
I'd dump this
petri-dish of scuttling ambuli -
spilling the lurid light
back into biofreeze
and letting the heart stop,
so the spreading culture
may better seep.

[Zero is an Integer]

calviness

Probably Zero

Losing is losing. Doing so with grace just makes you a chump.

So what does non-competing make you?

Desired, apparently.

[Mahayr]

Wow, that sounds like an echo of Sqarr's general sentiment about the human race.

[Zero is an Integer]

Mahayr

Wow, that sounds like an echo of Sqarr's general sentiment about the human race.

Smart man, that one.

[Mahayr]

Probably Zero

Mahayr

Wow, that sounds like an echo of Sqarr's general sentiment about the human race.

Smart man, that one.

Amen, dahling, amen.

[calviness]

Pshh. talk2hand That only really works in feminist chick flicks and sitcoms.