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[Oo_Cooney_oO]

It takes a creative mind to look up at the sky and only see clouds.

[Orange Chus]

Priest Boat

If you couldn't tell, my story is a gripping tale about an abusive husband and his doormat wife. He keeps beating up and belittling his wife and she just takes it and takes it and takes it. The story starts and ends at the climax, when the husband and wife are celebrating Thanksgiving with all their relatives and friends. The wife spent a month and a half planning the dinner and slaved in the kitchen after getting only one hour of sleep the night before. The husband, angry about something, marches to the bedroom, finds his wife's d***o, and brings it to the table to show all the dinner guests what a scummy whore she is. This is the breaking point. She kills herself. It's a tragic story with a tragic beginning and a tragic end.

what is the point of writing the small part if you're going to need to give an explanation bigger than the story itself

[hi-q-gurl-123]

he ran the end

[Mira Moon Darling]

I thought I could- I couldn't...

[Orange Chus]

Orange Chus

Priest Boat

If you couldn't tell, my story is a gripping tale about an abusive husband and his doormat wife. He keeps beating up and belittling his wife and she just takes it and takes it and takes it. The story starts and ends at the climax, when the husband and wife are celebrating Thanksgiving with all their relatives and friends. The wife spent a month and a half planning the dinner and slaved in the kitchen after getting only one hour of sleep the night before. The husband, angry about something, marches to the bedroom, finds his wife's d***o, and brings it to the table to show all the dinner guests what a scummy whore she is. This is the breaking point. She kills herself. It's a tragic story with a tragic beginning and a tragic end.

what is the point of writing the small part if you're going to need to give an explanation bigger than the story itself

damn i just got trolled

[rinniex]

He had just won the world, but lost the treasures within it.

[Eh Meh Gahd]

She finally met the man of her life and then met his wife.

[Grape Flavoured Prozac]

It's the water.

[WritingaRockStar]

He thought she hated him, so he chose another girl, and the first cried herself to sleep.

[_Let-Me-Love-You-My-Way_]

"Stupid, stupid human!"

Oh yeah. I'm that awesome.

[CaptainErsatz]

Head in her hands; hand on her shoulder.


If I don't come up with something better, this will be the one I want judged.

[CaptainErsatz]

Double post. Dead thread. ARISE.

[Cupidette]

She didn't know that giving away herself, would be giving away her life.

I hope I'm doin' it right, PM me any suggestions!!!
xoxo

[you can be the sailor]

I died.

[AlambiqueCiel]

Dusk cloaked the ancient marble mantle.