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Do you want me to post all the results on the thread as opposed to PMing them individually? Also, do you want to know the R3 prompt?

Poll whore. 0.08695652173913 8.7% [ 2 ]
Yes; yes. 0.56521739130435 56.5% [ 13 ]
Yes; no. 0 0.0% [ 0 ]
No; yes. 0.17391304347826 17.4% [ 4 ]
No; no. 0 0.0% [ 0 ]
Don't care. 0.17391304347826 17.4% [ 4 ]
Total Votes:[ 23 ]
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Just lay your head back on the ground,
and let your hair fall all around me.

I'm proud of you as well.
*applauds*

If you want to know, I'll tell you. I may use it in a future contest, but I don't know. I could use it on my next contest, but it'd have to have two rounds to it. Which would work. If it was one round, it would be a bit of prompt overload.
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Offer up your best defense,
'cause this is the end of the innocence.
Aww. You can deduct for me. sweatdrop I didn't realize it was EST. And let that be a lesson to me to find time to post earlier. *nod self*

I was looking forwards to the third prompt to see what everyone would come up with! You should definitely poke me if/when you start up a new one.
Thanks, Days. (I really must work on my procrastination.) It’s too bad that we won’t get to see the third round, but I’ll keep an eye out for any future contests.
Yeah, I'm walking on a tightrope, I'm wrapped up in vines
I think we'll make it out, but you just gotta give me time


Days: It must be challenging, if it wouldn't be so good as a round one prompt. I'm absolutely dying to see it! But save it anyway, for another contest. Just in case.

Imo: Your signature is AWESOME. It's hilarious! "May I have your name?" "No, it's mine." It's great. Fantastic.


Strike me down with lightning, let me feel you in my veins
I wanna let you know how much I feel your pain
It is written - from the desert to the mountains they shall lead us.


It's not really all that awesome. It's not that it wouldn't be good for a round one prompt, it's just that it wouldn't work as a round one prompt. At least one other entry is needed to do it.


And in their innocence and trusting, they will teach us to be free.
Yeah, I'm walking on a tightrope, I'm wrapped up in vines
I think we'll make it out, but you just gotta give me time


Well whatever it is, I'm sure it's great. ^_^


Strike me down with lightning, let me feel you in my veins
I wanna let you know how much I feel your pain

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@Cherry: Thanks. <3 It's actually a quote from my SuMoWriMo. xD

@Days: Tell me! -begs- Curiosity is killing me here! That and heat. It's 102 degrees out here. And that's not counting what it is with humidity.
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@Cherry: Thanks. <3 It's actually a quote from my SuMoWriMo. xD

@Days: Tell me! -begs- Curiosity is killing me here! That and heat. It's 102 degrees out here. And that's not counting what it is with humidity.


Curiousity killed the honestcat, my friend XD

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Awwww!
No round three?
I've enjoyed lurking. @_@

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Well, long time no talk. How's it going, PMS?

Shadowy Bookworm

Username: Wynnidele
Round: Two
Title: Legend of Larc
Time: Today, Yesterday, Day Before, Tomorrow
Column One Prompt(s): 11. What do you remember?
Column Two Prompt(s): 21. This secret dance of silk and skin.

Legend of Larc



Today


'What do you remember?'

Larc paused before the bonfire that rose up to the height he himself stood. Putting his hands forth, he proceeded to inch closer, only stopping when whiffs of singed hair reached his nose. Even in the heart of winter the heat gave no more comfort then, at present, would be required by him. But he held nearby the flames, still having mock shivers in the blowing winds; an unrelenting will of human instinct.

'What do you remember?'

His first sense of consciousness came in the thought of those dark set eyes looking upon him. She'll be saddened to see his lack of devotion, yet, it wouldn't forever be his choice to make. He felt the beast scratching at the chains barring its way out of him, and a lone solace laid in the knowledge of remembering nothing beyond this day.

'What do you remember?'

The words poked like a stick through the cage of his minds creation; he remembered it all. Larc took a step back, bare feet crunching in the snow, and brought a pawed hand to the dried blood that matted and pinched his muzzled nose. That memory was the last he wanted.

Yesterday


The midnight bells rang out over the cityscape, signaling the start of a new day. Stillness held the air, streets were empty, all was quiet this night; except for the white of snow falling, and the two men who hunted their prey despite it.

"You're bleeding bad." Jon said.

Larc looked down at the wet slick upon his black suit, and instinctively wiped a smear of red from his neck onto his hand. "That witch bite me."

"You did better then phil." The thought of the man missing his throat was still a fresh one.

His attention went elsewhere when bare footsteps appeared in the snow, and glimpses of a dusky form in burgundy attire came flittering on the edge of sight. It was a game she played well; this secret dance of silk and skin. How a little waltz turned to a foxtrot, hopping from one tree cover to another, with a twirl of frosty fluff the only trace remaining.

Fast as a fay or an elusive elf, the woman materialized from the snowy mist. She extended an arm out to him, a gesture of a master to their pet, but Larc didn't take offense. A brush was felt to his side, a quick look showed Jon with a gun pointed to his lady. An unknown rage seized him, and teeth clenched tight in a wolfish scowl.

Day Before


Larc took up his glass for a sip of whiskey on rocks, and continued watching the elegant ladies dance around the grand ballroom. He stood with two other men dressed as he was, simple black suit and tie. They awaited their guests arrival, and it was the strange-looking pair who entered that immediately caught his eye.

One of them was a mammoth sized man, but despite his bulk, however, he had a smooth and easy step about him. Grizzled side-burns went down his massive jowls, and a long mane of hair came to fall over one shoulder. Though, it was those yellowed-eyes that gave a quick pause.

But Larc only had eyes for the creature who dangled on his arm, a woman draped in sheer silks of deep burgundy. Her skin was dusky, and dark eyes sat unseen with merely a small flash to show them off. Tight waves of black curls surrounded the shape of her face, and lips, set on the edge of a laugh, were full and moist.

Pointing to the men, she whispered behind her hand to her large companion. He gave a wave to dismissed her, but she remain at his side, a displeasing look settled over her.

"Do we go, or wait for Larc?"

"I'm here," he said, never looking away from the dark lady. "You know that, Jon."

The man tapped him with an elbow, showing a large smile. "I know, but I simply feel the need to check on you at times." There was no smile to the other fellow as he felt for the gun hidden beneath his jacket. "Do we go?"

Phil took a puff of his cigar before he spoke. "No. Let them come to us."

"Seems a shame to make them wait," Larc said.

"Down, dog," Jon put forth, knowing what was on his colleagues mind. "Her escort has the look of a fighter."

"Do you wish me ill, Jon?"

"You are of my heart," even making the effort of a hand on his chest. "Always."

Larc and Jon stood behind their associate, while he hastened to put out his cigar. The pair walked over and the three started off by shaking hands. Catching sight of the exquisite female, Larc put a smile upon his face and stood up a little straighter. That's how it went, proper and agreeable, but only in a momentary passing; the wolf-man lunged forward with a bite.

Tomorrow


With the moon full in the sky, and a howl carried by the wind, the beast rushed through the woods at a pace set only by a dark evil. Trees shied away in an unseen breeze. The brush cleared a path not daring to hinder this hunters way. And its midnight pelt shone darker in a moonlight forbidden to touch it. It was a fiend as sinful as the deeds it committed.

Prey came upon the air, and it swallowed hard as feet quickened to catch up. Soon...soon it would be more then air in that yellow-stained grin. Sight of meat in the distance was a blurred image solely seen in those wolven-eyes. It licked at the dripping saliva brought forth from chops ready to bite, and let out a low growl of anticipation to end a good chase.

Closer...closer.

Coming closer still, the creature made ready to end this hunt. The wolf, Larc was it named, jumped...

Man-Hungry Hellhound

... xp


Ouch... I didn't get a chance to check the update until right now and the stories were due 15 hours and 40.5 minutes ago... sweatdrop . Sorry, I wait until the last minute to do everything and it seems like it bit me in the butt for these last few contests. Oh well. Maybe I will make it a novel now heart heart ~!! Who knows. Either way, I can't let this get me down because I have a party to go to tomorrow whee .
It is written - from the desert to the mountains they shall lead us.


Judging Update:

I have judged five of the twelve entries (a bit out of order from the way I put them on my AlphaSmart) and so far the highest score is a 22, with the second and third highest being 21 and 20. The lowest score so far is a 17.

Keep in mind that this is just my scores so far. Knight's scores will be added later on for a score out of fifty, rather than twenty-five. As of now, I have one story I am totally in love with, but I still have seven other stories to judge, so it may be bumped from its spot.
Who knows?
^__^
Right now, though, I need to take a little judging break after that entry.

Just thought I'd let you guys know.

Also, a quick question. Would you guys rather me PM you your forms individually, or post them all here on the thread? You'd be getting one from me and one from knight either way. I personally like to see what other people got score- and comment-wise so I can look at their entry afterwards and see what the comment was talking about so I can use it for the things I write in the future, but I know that not everyone likes that kind of thing, so I'll leave it up to you.

Deadbride: Don't worry about it. You still got an entry in for the first round.


And in their innocence and trusting, they will teach us to be free.
I just got home from work, and am starting the judging now.

I know days has her own comments, but I am writing up my own comments on the judging as well. They will be available in addition to hers, in whichever way you guys choose to recieve them.

I'll warn you - I do not sugarcoat things. I won't be a jerk to you, don't get me wrong, but I will be very honest with you on exactly why you got the score that you did. I would be doing you an injustice otherwise.

I may not exactly be quite as talented as days, but I still have high expectations for writing XD

Not that I'm saying I think any of you will flame me... but I just like to say that before judging, just to make things clear smile


So, having gotten that out of the way...

How is everyone?

Chatty Pumpkin

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I'm well thank you, Knight. I haven't really been around, posting, because I've in the SuWriMos guild, holed up like a hermit. Writing ma novelz. domokun It's going very well, and I should be finished in the next month or so. <33

How are you?

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