wip help!!!!

[freakybutlovable]

can i please have your opinion on my latest piece please???? yes i know it is still a wip.

[Ferity]

Was there something specific you were looking to get advice on?

[Halloween Hipster]

This is all I found that was off, hope it helps. :]

[MaAlGon3]

The breast on the back looks a bit higher than the one on the front. That's about it. Get coloring, there's potential in there.

[shutup_jackie]

The mouth is a little bit wonky and the eye is a tad too big.
Everything else has pretty much been pointed out.

Good work. c:

[freakybutlovable]

shutup_jackie

The mouth is a little bit wonky and the eye is a tad too big.
Everything else has pretty much been pointed out.

Good work. c:

thank you for your help!!!!

[shutup_jackie]

freakybutlovable

shutup_jackie

The mouth is a little bit wonky and the eye is a tad too big.
Everything else has pretty much been pointed out.

Good work. c:

thank you for your help!!!!

No problem!
Also, if you find yourself struggling with drawing certain poses, try making the same pose
while looking in the mirror. Or you could ask someone you know (a friend, parent, sibling) to
make the pose and take a picture of it. That way you have a better idea of what you're drawing
and how comfortable it would be to hold a pose like it.

[freakybutlovable]

shutup_jackie

freakybutlovable

shutup_jackie

The mouth is a little bit wonky and the eye is a tad too big.
Everything else has pretty much been pointed out.

Good work. c:

thank you for your help!!!!

No problem!
Also, if you find yourself struggling with drawing certain poses, try making the same pose
while looking in the mirror. Or you could ask someone you know (a friend, parent, sibling) to
make the pose and take a picture of it. That way you have a better idea of what you're drawing
and how comfortable it would be to hold a pose like it.

ill keep that in mind for next time thank you

[Aeronel]

Her ribcage seems a little too shallow (like the area under her breasts), it should probably be a bit more convex. That's the only big thing I see, otherwise looks good! smile