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Does poetry help you when your depressed?

Yes, sure does. 0.75925925925926 75.9% [ 41 ]
Nope, never depressed, thanks to my ridelin!!! 0.24074074074074 24.1% [ 13 ]
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Poems in this contest must be dark and morbid, sorrowful, etc. Here are the rules.
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arrow 1. Poem must be dark, morbid, and/or sorrowful.

arrow 2. Entry Fee is 250. The All over prize is 2500. Half for the Winner, half for me, and maybe a optional judge.

arrow 3. You must send the poem to me first so I can approve it.

arrow 4. The Deadline for the new contest has no due date. This should give you time to converse share poems, etc. Because the day after all the poems are in I will be judging.

arrow 5. No booing, flaming, bashing, use Constructive Criticism dont be mad because people can write better than you.

arrow 6. Please do not use other peoples poems for your own doing. Plagerism isnt cool.

arrow 7. Poems will be judged by,
Grammar
Originality
Darkness
True Emotion
Length
Understanding the point.


arrow 8. All gaian rules apply

arrow 9. Extra Poem fee is 100.

arrow 10. No Poems, about Break Ups, Failing in school, marital problems, family problems, etc.

Please People Have FUN, and Follow the Rules.



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Winner domokun
Paid and Posted. 3nodding
Paid. xd
Not Paid and Posted. stare
Sent To Me, and approved cool

The prize is 2500 For all of those people who like to debate, here is the math xp

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here's my poem

I need not soul, I need not heart,
For that is where my troubles start.
I leave behind these empty pages,
Speak not a word of loves cruel stages,
Or of any kind of joy filled dreams
I cannot write them, so it seems...

And as I try to find the cause
I learn so much of mine own flaws.
I can't pretend to be inspired,
The phrase long lost, now old and tired.
So now I'm left to speak my truth
That trusting soul I've lost in youth:

I need not soul, I need not heart;
For that is where my troubles start...
if it's about you and your boyfriend walking down the street, then it's not morbid/depressing.
unless he's breaking up with you and you stab him because he's cheating on you with some undeserving slut and he says that he really loved you, he just had to screw with her because her uncle's in the mafia and would kill his family if he didn't and just as you were about to appologize he died and then you decided to stab yourself because you felt so bad but then you miss and only start bleeding and the men in white coats take you away and you live the rest of your life in a little padded room with no sex or cookies. cry
that's morbid/depressing!!
and me when I'm hyper............... sweatdrop mrgreen ninja 4laugh blaugh
goldcelestial
if it's about you and your boyfriend walking down the street, then it's not morbid/depressing.
unless he's breaking up with you and you stab him because he's cheating on you with some undeserving slut and he says that he really loved you, he just had to screw with her because her uncle's in the mafia and would kill his family if he didn't and just as you were about to appologize he died and then you decided to stab yourself because you felt so bad but then you miss and only start bleeding and the men in white coats take you away and you live the rest of your life in a little padded room with no sex or cookies. cry
that's morbid/depressing!!
and me when I'm hyper............... sweatdrop mrgreen ninja 4laugh blaugh



Omfg lol rofl Well cant wait to hear yours !!!!!!
DavSngSorrow
goldcelestial
if it's about you and your boyfriend walking down the street, then it's not morbid/depressing.
unless he's breaking up with you and you stab him because he's cheating on you with some undeserving slut and he says that he really loved you, he just had to screw with her because her uncle's in the mafia and would kill his family if he didn't and just as you were about to appologize he died and then you decided to stab yourself because you felt so bad but then you miss and only start bleeding and the men in white coats take you away and you live the rest of your life in a little padded room with no sex or cookies. cry
that's morbid/depressing!!
and me when I'm hyper............... sweatdrop mrgreen ninja 4laugh blaugh



Omfg lol rofl Well cant wait to hear yours !!!!!!

thanks.
not much of my poetry is like that....
just my long sentences..... sweatdrop
well. tell me how you like the poem, I'll be back later this evening.
Immortalty

My heart pounds fast
Each breath could be my last
Darkness approaching me
Yet though I try I cannot flee
I cannot move
I feel a pain no one can sooth
And though I try
It seems as though I cannot die
Pain incressing as wait
I'll never see that pearly gate
I'll never see the fires of hell
I'll never hear death tow it's bell
All I feel is pain
Numbness as I go insane
Wishing for it all to end
Praying for a place my soul to send
Death mocks me
Life rejects me
Drowning in this sea of pain
I wish I could just be slain
Alas a scream escapes my lips
As life and death just seem to sit
and laugh at all the pain
As blood falls from the sky as rain
My lungs fill this blood
As I drown away in the flood
Taken to a place to stay
To be forever locked away
Untitled

To have your mind torn to pieces
and scattered to the winds
is agony
it hurts, I know
but that is why you should not leave
you must stay, fight the pain
fight the fear, and laugh in the face of death!

You call me masachist, I'm not
just crazy, like you, and looking for a place to hide
from the unforgiving sun and acid rain
that is the world.

So in my small revenge I spite the earth
by continuing my life and spreading my love
to those around me.

So shall we face the torment?
together is the only way to be
without you there would be less
of my love and of me.
yay, my pretty poem!! domokun heart heart heart mrgreen
Please tell other people. I need to get this going. stare
DavSngSorrow
Please tell other people. I need to get this going. stare

you want to post on the other contest too?
just a suggestion
goldcelestial
DavSngSorrow
Please tell other people. I need to get this going. stare

you want to post on the other contest too?
just a suggestion



Sure.
J0hn_Spart0n
I call this one "Quit writing poetry"

I haven't been out side for seven days,
Like Miss Havisham I'm rotting away,
Why did my friends leave me for,
What did they see in me was I their chore,

I can't breath the wind is so strong,
I've been inside for much to long,
But it's better than leaving with you,
Nothing in the world will hurt you more than what is true,

You can't see with someone elses eyes,
Yet thats the only thing that gets these people bye,
You don't even have eyes to shut,
You say that sex is something special but your still such an ugly slut,

Is it so hard to leave me here,
I feel so tired when your near,
So you drink and thats no a big deal,
But I want someone who know whats real,
It's ironic I wrote poetry...

(I don't get sad I get mad)




Ok listen I am supposed to approve it. Now delete it and send it to me and the 250 gold to enter. Read the rules.

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