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Voters! Thank you for coming, and welcome to the Third Round of the Gaian Press Writing Contest, where you get to choose who will win! The following 13 finalists have their pieces put on display here. Read through each one, pick the one you like best, and post! Voting ends August 28, 2005. Winners are announced in the 7.0/August '05 issue, released August 30. This dealine may be extended if we have a bad turn out.

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THE FINALISTS:
Asphyxiate
by Juliet Inga

Dream Away
by Symphonie

Fallen
by Ellyrianna

The Lightbearer
by S. K. Hamilton

Morning
by Astaire

My Angel
by Saori

Pocketbook of Loose Change
by Koukris

Point At the Poser
by Fawkes Flames

The Realm Gems
by Eruden Ki

Squirrels are Evil
by Cauli

Summer
by Doe

With Me
by Atreas

The World is An Ugly Place
by R. Cade Norton

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"Asphyxiate"
by Juliet Inga
Rated G

Plop! The slick goldfish is plucked
from her comfort zone. Held under air,
a floundering fish will, within seconds-
(no less than three)
-forget the death of its ego.
Time is a concept foreign to
a girl trapped inside of her glass-bowl,
fish-eyed view of the world.

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The Lightbearer
by S. K. Hamilton
Rated PG

The sun of the Mortal World had not completed its transit across the skies; its light came up and across thick translucent veils into the Seventh Heaven, giving different colors to air and objects. Belial looked down through a pool of dark waters filled with bluish cold stars into the Planes below. The Heavens were his true home, an immaterial place where time and age did not affect the course of individual's existence. Beneath the Seven Layers of Heaven and far below the skies laid the Mortal World; a place where beings were limited by materiality and rough, physical boundaries. Belial moved his raven-black hair out of his eyes in a slow, absent movement. He turned away from the pool and looked upon the road; he sensed the presence he was waiting for coming closer. Golden beams of light flashed through the thin mist as if the sun had changed its course and were emerging into the Seventh Heaven; the mist parted and a tall angelic silouhette appeared: the source of the golden light. The angel looked at Belial and a small, mischievous smile curled his lip. His eyes were bronze and gold; gold feathers graced his six wings, but his hair was of a deep, bluish black in high contrast with his pale complexion. Even for an angel, his appearance and poise were of astounding beauty; he wore the robes of the Order of Knowledge, but it was clear he was a different version of the scholar type, for in his fluid, graceful movements was the mark of the warrior. Lucifer dimmed his Light and walked up to Belial.

"When Azrael walked into the Hall of the Elders, this was stuck to the hem of her robe", he said, showing Belial a black feather wrought with white. Belial blinked, a faint blush coming to his face; he immediately snatched the feather, which perfectly matched his own. Lucifer's smile went more pronounced at his reaction. He walked down the road and Belial followed him with a frown.

"How did you get it?", he asked. Lucifer shrugged the question off, still smiling.

"Why would it matter?", Lucifer replied. "I suppose that since you are so persistant, the Dark One will like you someday". Belial shifted his six black and white wings on his back uncomfortably. His own robes were different from Lucifer's, for he belonged in the Order of Death and Destruction, led by Azrael. Belial's eyes were silver moons beneath thick black eyelashes in his beautiful face, and his expression turned distant. Lucifer's smile disappeared.

"I didn't mean to bother you", he said, watching his friend in concern. Belial still didn't react to his apology. They were 'almost' brothers; they had been created next to each other, and they were their own first memory - they were close, and they tended to think they were already immune to each other, but as it usually happens with friends, they were somewhat wrong.

"Why did the Elders summon you?", Belial asked. Lucifer bit his lip as his apology seemingly hadn't been accepted.

"It was sort of an examination, I guess. They asked me questions, but most of their questions were for Raziel. One would have thought they'd hold an auction on me", he jokingly said, still trying to make up for annoying Belial on purpose. Belial was infatuated with Azrael - go figure why. As far as it was known, Azrael was devoid of feelings for individuals and she was the embodiment of Fear. "They told me some things... but again, I only watched and listened most of the time. Raziel sent me back and stayed in the Council. I don't know when he'll be back".

Raziel was an Elder and The Angel of Knowledge, Lucifer's Mentor; a stern and analytic being, of formal cold manner and the ultimate perfectionist.

"What did they say?", Belial asked as they walked down the road through the mist. Their other senses compensated the lack of visibility by far. Lucifer casted him a speculative look.
"Many things, but... You know Azrael is the Dark One because she's the only angel entirely devoid of light..."
"And?"
"They said I am the only angel devoid of darkness. Thus they called me The Lightbearer". Lucifer seemed to be a little confused. "I am the Lightbearer".
Belial blinked.
"Well, it's not completely a surprise... but what does this mean?"
"I don't know".
"But it ought to mean something. The Elders gathered and summoned you to tell you this".
Lucifer bit his lip.
"They half-ignored me most of the time anyway".
"What did Raziel tell you?"
"Nothing. I did ask him... but you know how he can get. He said I'd find out in Time, or something. He barely spoke five words more, and he used them to send me away".
Belial arched an eyebrow.
"I see... I guess we'll have to wait and see".
Lucifer nodded.
"I guess..."

The mist parted. Belial and Lucifer took a long stair down to a small valley, where a river flowed across the grassy land to a cascade, which fell to another Plane, forming a Portal in the Element of Water. The landscape was strange and marvelous, for it was immaterial and mystic, and all objects were but the perfect absolute idea of their material embodiment in the Mortal Plane. Up in the Heavens, their substance could only be compared to that of dreams. Glass-like scattered trees and vast flowerbeds adorned the valley along the riverside. Beneath the grass, a soft radiance showed the course of the Sun in the Mortal Plane.

Not far from the river, a small number of angels were sitting in the shade of a tree busying themselves in singing and talking. In the shade of another tree, another group led by an angel of Knowledge talked to a white-haired angel who was seemingly cornered against the tree. Lucifer tilted his head with a frown and exchanged a glance with Belial. Both of them walked up to the group and stood aside. Gabael, the leader of the bullies, was playing wise-crack on the white haired angel while the others snickered; but upon Lucifer's appearance, they looked at him and fell silent, for Lucifer was not smiling at all and Belial echoed his expression. Gabael turned upon the sudden silence and blinked. Lucifer was kind of a celebrity due to his superior intelligence and the fact that Raziel himself was his Mentor, precisely because of his intellect. His censoring look was quite eloquent. Belial on his part had a similar fame, in his own field.

"We were only joking", Gabael muttered. Deciding a quick retreat was best to save his dignity, Gabael left and the others scattered, leaving Belial and Lucifer alone with the white-haired one.

Lucifer looked at the angel, who seemed ready to either lash out or make himself scarce. From his expression, Lucifer guessed it wasn't the first time this happened. Lucifer frowned slightly. Wise-cracks. Did they really think it was an archievement to belittle others because they knew a few things more? They were a shame for the Order.

"I apologize for their behavior", Lucifer said in his natural leadership manner. "Please, don't judge my Order by them. I am..."
"You are the Angel of Light", the white-haired angel interrupted Lucifer with half-closed eyes. Lucifer's pupils widened slightly. Belial smiled slightly with a nod. Lucifer watched the still wary white-haired angel. How did this angel know...?
"Have we met?", he asked. The angel shook his head. Lucifer blinked slowly. "Then you have advantage over us".
The angel smiled, still hesitant but less distrustful than before.
"I am Gabriel".
"Gabriel, then". Lucifer nodded. "I am Lucifer, and this is Belial. Would you like to join us? We're not going anywhere in special... Just taking a walk".
Gabriel'sface darkened again.
"The others think I'm stupid. Maybe they would think ill of you if you're seen with me, and I see they respect you".
Lucifer laughed and flashed one of his mischievous, charming smiles.
"And why would I give any importance to what they think? I have a mind of my own, and I am certainly not one to follow the tide".
Gabriel looked down for an instant.
"I am not one of subtle words", he said. "But I thank you for your kindness..".
"I've not done anything yet!", Lucifer said, still smiling. "Please, join us, Gabriel".
After a little while, Gabriel raised his eyes to look at them.
"Thank you".
They continued on their way down the valley.
"Just don't pay heed to Belial. He talks too much".
Belial glared at Lucifer, for he actually hadn't spoken in a long while, ever since they entered the valley; Gabriel laughed, still shyly but slowly gaining confidence.
"Look who's talking", Belial muttered with a smile. Lucifer grinned. Belial wasn't mad at him anymore and Gabriel was an interesting character; he might seemingly not be a bright mind, but beneath the surface he revealed a glimpse of a higher perception. Despite the mysterious words of the Elders still weighed on Lucifer's mind, there were no clouds in his day; at least, for now.

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Morning
by Astaire
Rated PG-13/R

This life has gone so colorblind
that even when I'm facing sunrise,
I forget to look
(or even sigh.)

My uterus is a highway
caught in a traffic jam; the birth control
and ibprofen crashes against the alcohol
and thousands, THOUSANDS
of tiny-tailed and twitching
unborn children, leaving roadkill
rotting in my stomach. It's not just
on the wrong side,
but the wrong bed to begin with.
His eyes are turning into pills with
every morning sickness;
when he smiles, he medicates.
His beauty is infected with
a chemical aftertaste.

You'd screw me into a six-foot hole
Like the nail you're driving through my head.
The bedsheets smother like 6-feet-under;
I'd rather be dead.

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Point At The Poser
by Fawkes Flames
Rated R for swearing

A bad seed from a nice, god fearing family, that?s what they called me. "Max was such a good boy until he started hanging around with that hooligan," they'd say. That "hooligan" was my friend, my comrade, and even my love.

Mom, the well to do house wife with a large budget, just pretended that I was going through a phase. She'd go on about how her little Maxwell would work it all out on his own and straighten up. Dad didn't agree of course, his friends and coworkers thought I was a raving maniac and he couldn't afford to look bad in front of them. No, a high ranking defense attorney couldn't let the world know that his son was a bit off. He'd lecture me on responsibility and tell me all about rebellion and how it just wasn't accepted in his home. He hadn't a clue what rebellion was, or the fact that I wasn't rebelling at all.

What did I have to rebel against? I was a rich kid, silver spoon in my mouth since the day I was born. I never wanted for a thing in my life; no matter what it was I got it. Mom was there to watch over me and I was never lonely. I was the epitome of cool throughout my younger school years, loads of girlfriends and heaps of buddies. Still, that was then, before I had met Rachelle and before I had grown my hair and before I'd ever stuck a safety pin through my earlobe.

Everyone said I was so cute before all of this, they raved on about how I was ruining everything. They'd ask me what the hell I thought I was doing, what the hell had I become? I would smile; stick up my middle finger and say, "I'm a punk!" before stalking off to meet her.

"******** 'em," Rachelle would say when I would drive out to meet her and clue her in on the story. We'd meet near the lake by our high school, my new BMW parked next to her beat up Escort. We'd sit on the hood of our respective vehicles and stare up into the night sky, on special nights, usually after our allowance had been paid, we'd drop a few hits of acid and watch as the stars mingled down and fell into our laps. She was my best friend, my kindred spirit, everything I had always wanted in a woman. But our stolen moments in the night were only a small chapter in my personal novel.

I'd stare into her green eyes and get lost in their gaze. She'd talk with a care free air about her while chipping at the black nail polish on her fingers. I listened intently, hanging on every word that spilled from her lips. Those lips, painted black, I'd longed to press my own painted lips against them for so long. Yet, I couldn't, that line had been drawn long ago and I'd tiptoed over it a few times but never took the full leap. She wouldn't have allowed it anyway; our friendship was far too precious for that. Or at least that's what she?d told me when I first suggested it.

It was just me and Rachelle; she was all I cared about and all I needed. Dad was on his last leg with me. I had come home rather wasted after having dropped three hits with Rachelle and Dad had some important figures he wanted me to meet. He of course wouldn't allow me to meet them in my current state so I was told to go wash off all the make up I had on and wash out my hair. He hated my Mohawk. I did as I was told though it was laborious and I didn't feel like fighting at the moment, I just wanted to lie down and watch television. So I came back down, shook some hands and of course Mom had to stroll in and start going on about how I was a remarkable student so I was expected to stay for dinner with the family. Turned out I couldn't hold down any food in such a state of mind, the turkey on my plate was moving around and talking to me so I couldn't hardly eat it. The night ended when I threw up what I little bit I had to eat all over the nicely shined shoes of the Swedish Ambassador. Dad was less than pleased and had to tell some story about me coming down with the flu. He'd given me a long lecture about how he was the laughing stock at work and how it had all been my fault. He thought I was drunk, which was a good thing, if he'd known the truth I would have been sent off to some rehab clinic, far away from Rachelle. Mom would have gone mental, her little Maxwell, a drug addict.

The next night I went to meet Rachelle again. I relived the entire story and then did a lovely impression of the Ambassadors face just after I'd hurled all over his Prada's. She laughed hysterically and then told me a bit about her night that changed everything.

"I met up with Jason Lowman last night, do you remember him?" she had asked. Her head was hung and she was more interested in chipping off her nail polish than ever before. There was something different in her voice; her usual confident air was gone.

"Yeah," I said shaking my head. I sure as hell remembered Jason ******** Lowman! He had been my best friend before I met Rachelle; he'd been my best friend since grade school. When I decided to start listening to Rancid, spike up my hair, and wear leather he decided he couldn't be seen with me anymore. He'd even gone as far as to talk s**t to me in the halls and write "f**" on my locker. Yeah, I remembered Jason Lowman.

"Well, I was pretty wasted last night when I met up with him," she continued. I could see her face going red, something very odd for Rachelle. I knew where this was going. "I always sort of thought he was cute and all, you know in a weird conformist sort of way?"

I jumped up without even realizing it. My feet were planted firmly on the ground and my hands were grasping at the rusty hood of her car. "You didn't!" My eyes were bulging out of my head and my heart was sinking into the depths of sadness. "What were you thinking?" I found myself screaming at her, yelling in anger. "What the hell are you doing Rachelle? What have you become?"

She looked up at me, her face wasn?t sad or depressed at all, it was angry. I was taken aback for a moment, I stumbled backward a bit. She should be sad, doesn't she realize how badly she'd hurt me? She wouldn't love me, her dearest friend, yet she'd sleep with someone who hated us and everything we stood for. A guy who'd spent the entire year defaming me was enough for her to have her legs in the air but I wasn't? It was a scandal, it was ******** insane.

She stared at me for what seemed like hours and then those black lips parted. "I've never done things the way most people do," she fumed. "That's what makes me who I am; I'm not a ******** poser like you. You're doing all this because you want me to like you, you aren't this person." I didn't know what to say other than to stand there and look stupid. She lifted her hand, I thought she might smack me, but she just lifted her middle finger to me and said, "I'm a punk!"

That was it; she got in her car and drove off. We never talked again. The next day I wore my old clothes to school, no make up and no safety pins. Dad smiled as I walked out the door and Mom went on about how she was right. Turns out, I was nothing more than a poser, just like Rachelle said. Maybe I just wanted to get closer to Rachelle, or maybe I wanted to be something other than the rich boy. I couldn't run, I couldn't hide, not from myself. The funny thing is that it took the girl of my dreams to sleep to with my rival for me to see it. I suppose it's just another chapter in my book of life, the Tales of a Seventeen Year Old Wannabe Punk.

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THE REALM GEMS
by Eruden Ki
Rated G

Deep in a place where time stands still, yet day still melts into night, there lived a being. This being was not human, nor was it immortal. She was just there. Her skin was as white as ivory, and as flawless as the sky. Bright with hundreds of years of intelligence, her amythest eyes betrayed how young she seemed. Her name was Neita, and she was the protector of realms.

In her possession were three gems. One was shaped like a star, and it gleamed as if it was taken from the heavens itself. It glittered with the innocence of a child, and swam in golden light. This was the realm of angels; pure, heavenly beings. The next was shaped like a diamond that had been forged from the depths of the Earth. A midnight black aura consumed this crimson red diamond. The realm of demons rested inside this red gem. The last gem was shaped like a pyramid. It was brightly radiating with white light, as a mottled
rainbow danced across the smooth surface of this gem. In this gem lived the realm of mortals.

Neita kept the three gems close to her heart, which was said to be more pure and fifty times more valuable than gold itself. As Neita slept, for all things must sleep, she would gently place her gems in a little black box for safe keeping.

This box was made of a dark wood from a tree that grew in a
dimension all it's own. Etched into the lid of its glossy exterior was a scene of centaurs galloping about in a field of black roses, that glimmered in the light of a large, orange colored moon. Above the centaurs a white dragon circled, its scales made of little pieces of opal to give its shimmering scales a realistic appearence. On the sides of the box, carved into neat, sleek grooves, little faeries and pixies danced. Their wings were made of priceless gems that had an inner fire to give off a soft, mellow light which brightened the lavender faces of the small pixies.

Inside, the gems would rest on a cushion as soft as light and as dark as the ocean on a stormy, dire night. All three gems would glow innocently as they were nestled together on that cushion, as if they were baby birds cuddling together for warmth on a bitterly cold, winter night.

All things in Neita's world were not heavenly though. Seref, a weasel with a heart as pure as lead and a temper of a volcano, was one such being. He would watch the beautiful protector with malice-filled, dark, beady eyes, as he hungrilly waited for a time which Neita would leave the gems, just for a second, so he may snatch them. This greedy little creature was jealous of Neita's privilege; jealous that she got to protect those valuable gems. Hatred for the beautiful Neita ate as his heart, as jealousy
prickled through his veins everytime he watched the protector.

Tired of waiting, the weasel decided to steal the gems, while the protector slumbered. One such time, while Neita slept, he snuck into her home and attempted to steal the gems. But alas, he was too weak to hoist the massive box in which the gems sat. So, with his swift thieving skills, he stole the gems from the box and scuttled out of Neita's home, clutching the gems with his grubby, grimy paws.

Soon, Neita awoke, startled and depaired to see the gems missing, and the box lid ajar. Being the protector of the realm gems, and having failed, she knew she would soon perish. Neita knew it was far too late to track down the thief, since she could feel the cold hands of death start to grip at her soul. As the agony of her death started to seep into her body, it didn't compare to her feelings of guilt from failing. Failing her duty, failing her responsibility, failing the beings inside the gems she protected. She left a curse and a vow upon her soft pink lips out of this agonizing guilt.

Her vow was to return, reincarnated, to someday find the realms and keep them at peace again. The curse was that as long as the realms were away from her loving heart, havoc and anguish would take over the realms and the beings in the realms. She left this curse so when she returned to silence the raging havoc in the realms, they would realize how beautiful and fragile peace actually was was.

As soon as Neita uttered her last breath, the curse flew from her lips on the wings of her vow to the realm gems being cradled in the weasel's arms. All three gems began to melt together. Angels meeting demons, demons meetng mortals, mortals meeting angels; all the realms met for the first time. A bright light enveloped the three gems as they combined into one. Red sparks flew, catching Seref's fur on fire. The white light blinded the bitter beast's eyes. And the black aura poisoned the weasel's ears, causing him to go deaf.

Screaming in anguish and terror, Seref dropped the melting gems and sped away in fear. As the powerful gems melded together, radiating waves of power surged from them. Black, blue, and white light exploded out of the gems all at once, dancing and spiralling through the air. Small white dust hung around the gem, sparkling like snow frozen against the black aura that the spherical gem emitted.

Swirling and dipping, colors spiraled all across the sphere gem. Gold, silver and bronze dodged each other, swirled around each other, and melted together to create an ethereal color unknown to mortals, demons or angels. The enigmatic gem floated, as if it was a leaf frozen in time on an invisible wind. Millenias flew by this gem in a nanosecond, like a bird passing by an insignifcant blade of grass.

Centuries swarmed past this gem, the realm gem, the Realm of All. Blood was spilled, supposed peace was made just to be tattered apart again by havoc and destruction. In this place, where time stands still, but day melts into night, our realm floats alone. A lonely little gem, without it's protector, as vunerable as a shell-less turtle. But, one day, their protector will return and restore the fragile peace that had once draped around the beings before they were merged.

Maybe it will be in the next decade, or the next month, or even the next day when the protector will find them. Then everyone will be at peace once again, forgetting the catastrophe that had come before them. Until then, we can only let our dreams of peace fly on the wings of Neita's vow, and hope that that vow will never be shot down.

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Squirrels are evil
by Cauli
Rated PG13

A furry rat, cat
with a bushy tail
and a bite to kill
(your nuts that is)

Well he, [she, it]
-minus the e 'cause
that's what comes next-
did a run, skip, hop
in front of my monster SUV.

Suicide is common among skitzo's
who can't even remember that yesterdays stash
is hidden under the trees
for a winter obesity.

I took a sharp left,
more so than a pencil point
freshly shaved,
On two; on-coming traffic
for that fuzzy mammals own damn sake.

One of those
energy saving itsy bitsy things
decided to
drive when the light glows green
even with
life saving maneuvers in place

And that was why they crashed with me.

Oh judge,
dear judge,
it was only for the squirly's sake.
that I made that fateful swerve
and killed itsy bitsy's little boy.

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With Me
by Atreas
Rated G

Dreams and dreams,
A journey far,
Through the mind,
Across the stars;
Aloft, alight,
And fading fast,
The midnight true
Is overcast.

Hear me now,
A fading gong,
Through darkness thick
And midnight strong,
And follow me
To every end,
Through the storm
Where time begins.

Where we go
In darkness light,
Flies perilous
The blackbird Night.
With wingspan wide
Soars she true,
The chaos tide
To yet ensue.

Stay now with me
Until the dawn,
When shadows fall
And starlight drawn
Strikes the dark
With great desire
And midnight dies
To sun-borne fire.

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