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Post: 5613675_1 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:15:41 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:15:41 +0000

Warning: Post at your own risk. We wont hesitate to tell you your art sucks but we will give constructive criticism.

If you give us stickmen to comment, we'll skip and ignore it, thinking you're wasting our time.

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Post: 5613675_2 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:16:41 +0000
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Tutorials to help you!

This is stuff that people seem to have the most difficulty!... I'm finally putting it on the first page! All tutorials should be found here!

The S and C line technique!!!!
Basically the human body can be drawn with only S and C line!... they may not be very pronouced but they are still there. This technique may not aply to certain styles but goes for realisme...

How you start a project!
first you start with many many and many sketches!! As much as it takes! Don't be affraid to try stuff.
Sketches are used to find the perfect angle, pose and proportion. Although the sketches may look alike they all have differences.
Here's two quick sketch I've done.
After you're happy with the result of one sketch you draw the line thicker and trace over it on another paper and you make a cleaner version! Got it!
YOU MAY NEVER EVER PUT ANY DETAILS IN A SKETCH!!! And details are almost forbidden!!

Hope this helps! whee

Um... More profound S and C line technique plus some anatomy trics I came up with!
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Post: 5613675_3 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:17:07 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:17:07 +0000

MIAK! PRESENT

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Post: 5613675_4 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:19:24 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:19:24 +0000

http://www.deviantart.com/view/13989525/

mine

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Post: 5613675_5 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:20:38 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:20:38 +0000

http://rpdofficer.sheezyart.com/gallery

Have a ball.

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Post: 5613675_6 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:23:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:23:28 +0000

Rokun

http://www.deviantart.com/view/13989525/

mine

The earings are of the wrong proportion... their bigger ...

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Post: 5613675_7 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:28:05 +0000
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RPDOfficer

http://rpdofficer.sheezyart.com/gallery

Have a ball.

Interesting style... I like that part but you need to practice on your proportions... and ideas. It is always easy to draw a character, to make it interesting is what you lack!!
Not to be totally mean... keep practicing blaugh

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Post: 5613675_8 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:28:07 +0000
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Rokun...

well personally I hate fan art!! but you seem to have good knowlegde of line art!...MIAK! maybe concentrate on being more creative then just reproducing the same image....('cause i've seen this image around, full bodies though)

ear, neck, face...kinda off! For all around comment...well It's not that interesting to look at..there's nothing very special about it!

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Post: 5613675_9 created on Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:29:29 +0000
Posted: Wed, 19 Jan 2005 23:29:29 +0000

Thanks. I knew about my proportions. Basically those were some of my practice. If you that I needed to practice that bad now, you should see me two years ago ^^ What I REALLY need practice on is drawing fullbodies characters in different postions ((Skeletal Placement))