Hoodimann
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- Posted: Wed, 03 Nov 2004 00:08:15 +0000
Use this first post if you don't want to search blindly. These are the poem titles and the pages they're located on. For those new to this site, the page numbers (+links to those pages), are located below the "Unsubscribe from this topic" heading on the left of the page, OR at the bottom right below the signature. Have fun!
I consider many of these finished, but that still leaves plenty of room for improving what's left, and when I get some damned TIME, I will do so. So relax. And peace.
Learn, laugh, love, live. Like I said. Lol.
heart
Pages 1 through 4: NO POETRY.
Page 5:
Bentley's Corruptible Wheel ***
Don't Bear False Fitness ***
Calliope and the Amazing Technicolor Ceiling ***
Warholy Whirls (Collab: Almea/Hoodimann.) ***
Allow Me To Retort (Decoy Vesic prompt.) ***
Dragon in the Mind ***
Dead Politicians Still Trip Living People (Deleted until rewritten.)
Ogma's Lost Niece ///
Thirty Inches Over Tokyo ///
Stuck in the Paths ***
Delilah's Other Dance (Samson Sings) ***
Sugarloaf ***
Suckflow Simmerings ***
How Fine for the Finesse of it All ***
Page 6:
Flounder's Founder Found Her
(Exercisingly Exerting My Me Dull Medulla Obligatory Oblongata)
Copula
Waiting for Meds
Page 7:
J.J. Cubed
Oddity's Perk
Beloved Calm
Dippers Big and Small
Page 8:
Title On Hold (Chinese Poem)
Page 9:
(One Day, as quoted by Penden.) Repost if not elsewhere.
(recheck links on this, page 8, and page 10)
NO POETRY BETWEEN PAGES: 10 AND 19. Any poems which are here have been reposted elsewhere/updated/edited.) Also, page 19 is broken; if YOU can access ANYTHING other than an empty Gaia page on page 19, PLEASE let me know. Thankees.
Page 20:
Worm race. (Not a poem, but possibly poetic!) stare xd
What Mothered Tarot Saw
Compaction Infraction
The Shame of the Butterflies
Did I Mention the Sun and Her Children?
Page 21:
Getting a Leg Up
Going Postal Aitchtoowoe
Knowledge Farm, Empty Silos
(Tabula Rasa, or Cold Winter?)
Silk Smile, Love
Aurora Wheels
De-Coy Confab (Title of Teh Laziness)
Bus Seats
What Together Means
Waiting For Meds
Antiprimipara
Let Pro, Let Pro
Myopic Living
Mellowing Does This (Part One)
Love-Stained Wardrobe: Smelling Salts Adieu
The Gaian Symphony (Finalrain's form.)
Page 22:
Write By Numbers (Unfortunately, It Doesn't Work Like Napping)
The Gantry Hasn't Been Made to Span My Love (work on prose issues with poem)
VesHoo (Collab Vespertine/Hoodimann)(Fix intro, so colors are clearer.)
Colgate Doesn't Run This Track (Oval, Upend, Oh My!)
Untitled Zero reply + My Reply to His Reply.
Snow White in the Seventh Ward
Onion and the Seventh Ward
Compulsions
Ministry Prompt One
The Pitter Patter of Little Ladders
Arms Are Leaden
Sweet Molasses Riverboat
Gloverness Bloverness Dip Dadda Do
(Here be absence of, nary a shade of, where's a glint of...)
You Can't Lubricate Stuck Distaste
I'm Bad Like Jesus Please Us
Page 23:
Steptitled in Afterthoughts
First Light By the Fireside (Collab Discourse/Hoodimann)
Manifested Dreams Fold (Manifold Dreamfest)
What Did Ever Know? (Flavo of the Day)
What Shall Never Lose? (Spirits Don't Keep Time)
Nothing Cross a Tee Like a Good Old Slash (How Many Sub-Basements Are There?)
Arcing Over Crow Paths
Telluride's Flashlight (The Cotton Bowl)
Coin Flips Can Be Deadly
Title Is In The Mail (Retitle)
Talking Over Microphones On MSN (By Bishounen Bunny Generator.) surprised
Page 24:
Vidalia, Red, White, Yellow
Left Side Larry
GeeGee (Prompted by Penden's poem: Juanito)
22nd Century Schizoid Woman
Feather, Quill, Shelter (A Linear Circle. Keep Walking...Keep Walking...)
The Birth of Rage Unexpressed (The Futility of Shyness)
The Withering Lane
The Decaffeinated Yarmulke
Liquid Litany
Falling Pebbles Be Where?
Threads
Sauntering Subjugator
Whetter
Electuary
Advice to a Whore (compare with previous!)
Page 25:
Broken Toes Don't Mean Stop Smiling (Written as Chanikinds.) (Note Kjralon's comments for editing! Check my response to her comments; make sure I'm not justifying shitty poetry on my part. If I am, fix and apologize.)
Beckoning Without Target
Page 26:
(Note about Suckflow Simmerings critique: repeat advice from page 25)
Motion Prayer (As quoted by Mara-ani. rine!)
(Also has much discussion about Broken Toes, so reread, reasses, reetc.)
Page 27:
Back of the Spectrum
Unspeakable
Hankering After Grass Grown High (as quoted by Disco--rine)
When I Left the Bank, It Was Open
Page 28:
A Link in the Food Chain
Still Runs Water Deeply (Awry Trinket: Part 1)
Indo-Gardens of Nesia, Baby! (Awry Trinket: Part 2)
Format: Doormats, Gladly (as quoted by Gambol) rine!
Gravitation Stems From More Than Mass (as qbygmbl) rine
On the Importance of Libraries (aqbG) rine
Page 29:
Every Day Has Its Dog (Bog-2)
The World's Gardener (Root. Fruit.)
Page 30:
Poetautical
(Note: penden's comment on other poem)
Page 31:
Rose Grains, Sand Petals
There Once Was A...
How Do I Mean Thee?
Nick Of
Page 32:
Default Before Gray Fades (as quoted by Ideation is Futile) rine
Snail Mail, Maybe (Note Conor's comments for editing.)
Format: Doormats, Gladly (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
One Evening (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 33:
Collab Rion X/Hoodimann (still need to structure/quote it correctly, with colors)
Thoroughfare
Glowing Only Beggars Dim
Row C, Aisle 107
Preliminary Strike
Sleep, Know Thy Beckoning Ways!
By Lies or By Truth, A Better Blinding?
Ballet
I Swear, the Keys Were in the Pocket!
(Note: Advice about writing, quoted by Sydney Cox's book: Indirections.)
Page 34:
Liar's Just Another Word for Coward
Passing the Washing Brook (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
On the Importance of Libraries (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Open Season (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 35:
Hankering After Grass Grown High
What Can I Say of My Loved Ones?
Default Before Gray Fades (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Running Crowds the Nervous System (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 36:
NO POETRY.
Page 37:
Coin Flips Can Be Deadly (Check against previous version.)
Double Digits
Living the Bees Done Loan Ma
Martial Trilogy
Nature Backslaps
Spark of Sundress Do Banish Shadows at Noon
To An Unknown Victim
What to Do When Nuts Go Missing
QUADRAFILLED
WARD
MY LOVE IS A BRICK
Plea
Hangering Around Before the Sanding (written as Leftovers Rule Tuesdays)
THIRTY Japanese form poems, MOSTLY haiku (3 lines), a few others (5 lines)
Page 38:
FOURTEEN 5-line form poems in first post. Not one poem. 14.
Ceremonial Cant
(Note from Conor regarding ellipses.)
Page 39:
(Critique by Al_batross for 22nd Century...use for editing!)
A Daily Dose
Adverse Animosity
An Access of Excess
Page 40:
Catalyst
As Real As This Truth
Claxon
Copula
DNA in a Tissue of Breeze
Ably Ab-Solution
NO POETRY: 41, 42, 43,
Page 44:
Downstairs. Clocked Out. (Maybe move so the page can merely be skipped.) (Require minimum of 3 poems per page, or move the poems to more populated pages.)
Page 45:
(Note comments by blb for Formats.)
two haiku, which should be moved with the others on page 37.
(Collab Honestly Critical/Hoodimann
(Notes about Passing the W.B.) (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 46:
(Critique of Nick Of by Trysse. Use for editing.)
Page 47:
(Critique of A Link in the Food Chain by Trysse. Used for editing.)
A Link in the Food Chain
Fish Takes World Title
Meat and Greet
Page 48:
Arlington Frost
Needed: Word From the Hospital
A Robe Softer Than God on a Good Day
Speak of the Moon, His Spoiled Gentry (Lunacy Licks Left.)
"Quota, Meet Deadline. Prosper."
PAGE49:
"Justif-" <---Possibly shortest non-form poem ever done by me. Don't miss it! Lol.
PAGE 50:
J.J. Cubed
Futility? Open All Night. (But Then...So Is Love.)
I consider many of these finished, but that still leaves plenty of room for improving what's left, and when I get some damned TIME, I will do so. So relax. And peace.
Learn, laugh, love, live. Like I said. Lol.
heart
Pages 1 through 4: NO POETRY.
Page 5:
Bentley's Corruptible Wheel ***
Don't Bear False Fitness ***
Calliope and the Amazing Technicolor Ceiling ***
Warholy Whirls (Collab: Almea/Hoodimann.) ***
Allow Me To Retort (Decoy Vesic prompt.) ***
Dragon in the Mind ***
Dead Politicians Still Trip Living People (Deleted until rewritten.)
Ogma's Lost Niece ///
Thirty Inches Over Tokyo ///
Stuck in the Paths ***
Delilah's Other Dance (Samson Sings) ***
Sugarloaf ***
Suckflow Simmerings ***
How Fine for the Finesse of it All ***
Page 6:
Flounder's Founder Found Her
(Exercisingly Exerting My Me Dull Medulla Obligatory Oblongata)
Copula
Waiting for Meds
Page 7:
J.J. Cubed
Oddity's Perk
Beloved Calm
Dippers Big and Small
Page 8:
Title On Hold (Chinese Poem)
Page 9:
(One Day, as quoted by Penden.) Repost if not elsewhere.
(recheck links on this, page 8, and page 10)
NO POETRY BETWEEN PAGES: 10 AND 19. Any poems which are here have been reposted elsewhere/updated/edited.) Also, page 19 is broken; if YOU can access ANYTHING other than an empty Gaia page on page 19, PLEASE let me know. Thankees.
Page 20:
Worm race. (Not a poem, but possibly poetic!) stare xd
What Mothered Tarot Saw
Compaction Infraction
The Shame of the Butterflies
Did I Mention the Sun and Her Children?
Page 21:
Getting a Leg Up
Going Postal Aitchtoowoe
Knowledge Farm, Empty Silos
(Tabula Rasa, or Cold Winter?)
Silk Smile, Love
Aurora Wheels
De-Coy Confab (Title of Teh Laziness)
Bus Seats
What Together Means
Waiting For Meds
Antiprimipara
Let Pro, Let Pro
Myopic Living
Mellowing Does This (Part One)
Love-Stained Wardrobe: Smelling Salts Adieu
The Gaian Symphony (Finalrain's form.)
Page 22:
Write By Numbers (Unfortunately, It Doesn't Work Like Napping)
The Gantry Hasn't Been Made to Span My Love (work on prose issues with poem)
VesHoo (Collab Vespertine/Hoodimann)(Fix intro, so colors are clearer.)
Colgate Doesn't Run This Track (Oval, Upend, Oh My!)
Untitled Zero reply + My Reply to His Reply.
Snow White in the Seventh Ward
Onion and the Seventh Ward
Compulsions
Ministry Prompt One
The Pitter Patter of Little Ladders
Arms Are Leaden
Sweet Molasses Riverboat
Gloverness Bloverness Dip Dadda Do
(Here be absence of, nary a shade of, where's a glint of...)
You Can't Lubricate Stuck Distaste
I'm Bad Like Jesus Please Us
Page 23:
Steptitled in Afterthoughts
First Light By the Fireside (Collab Discourse/Hoodimann)
Manifested Dreams Fold (Manifold Dreamfest)
What Did Ever Know? (Flavo of the Day)
What Shall Never Lose? (Spirits Don't Keep Time)
Nothing Cross a Tee Like a Good Old Slash (How Many Sub-Basements Are There?)
Arcing Over Crow Paths
Telluride's Flashlight (The Cotton Bowl)
Coin Flips Can Be Deadly
Title Is In The Mail (Retitle)
Talking Over Microphones On MSN (By Bishounen Bunny Generator.) surprised
Page 24:
Vidalia, Red, White, Yellow
Left Side Larry
GeeGee (Prompted by Penden's poem: Juanito)
22nd Century Schizoid Woman
Feather, Quill, Shelter (A Linear Circle. Keep Walking...Keep Walking...)
The Birth of Rage Unexpressed (The Futility of Shyness)
The Withering Lane
The Decaffeinated Yarmulke
Liquid Litany
Falling Pebbles Be Where?
Threads
Sauntering Subjugator
Whetter
Electuary
Advice to a Whore (compare with previous!)
Page 25:
Broken Toes Don't Mean Stop Smiling (Written as Chanikinds.) (Note Kjralon's comments for editing! Check my response to her comments; make sure I'm not justifying shitty poetry on my part. If I am, fix and apologize.)
Beckoning Without Target
Page 26:
(Note about Suckflow Simmerings critique: repeat advice from page 25)
Motion Prayer (As quoted by Mara-ani. rine!)
(Also has much discussion about Broken Toes, so reread, reasses, reetc.)
Page 27:
Back of the Spectrum
Unspeakable
Hankering After Grass Grown High (as quoted by Disco--rine)
When I Left the Bank, It Was Open
Page 28:
A Link in the Food Chain
Still Runs Water Deeply (Awry Trinket: Part 1)
Indo-Gardens of Nesia, Baby! (Awry Trinket: Part 2)
Format: Doormats, Gladly (as quoted by Gambol) rine!
Gravitation Stems From More Than Mass (as qbygmbl) rine
On the Importance of Libraries (aqbG) rine
Page 29:
Every Day Has Its Dog (Bog-2)
The World's Gardener (Root. Fruit.)
Page 30:
Poetautical
(Note: penden's comment on other poem)
Page 31:
Rose Grains, Sand Petals
There Once Was A...
How Do I Mean Thee?
Nick Of
Page 32:
Default Before Gray Fades (as quoted by Ideation is Futile) rine
Snail Mail, Maybe (Note Conor's comments for editing.)
Format: Doormats, Gladly (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
One Evening (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 33:
Collab Rion X/Hoodimann (still need to structure/quote it correctly, with colors)
Thoroughfare
Glowing Only Beggars Dim
Row C, Aisle 107
Preliminary Strike
Sleep, Know Thy Beckoning Ways!
By Lies or By Truth, A Better Blinding?
Ballet
I Swear, the Keys Were in the Pocket!
(Note: Advice about writing, quoted by Sydney Cox's book: Indirections.)
Page 34:
Liar's Just Another Word for Coward
Passing the Washing Brook (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
On the Importance of Libraries (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Open Season (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 35:
Hankering After Grass Grown High
What Can I Say of My Loved Ones?
Default Before Gray Fades (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Running Crowds the Nervous System (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 36:
NO POETRY.
Page 37:
Coin Flips Can Be Deadly (Check against previous version.)
Double Digits
Living the Bees Done Loan Ma
Martial Trilogy
Nature Backslaps
Spark of Sundress Do Banish Shadows at Noon
To An Unknown Victim
What to Do When Nuts Go Missing
QUADRAFILLED
WARD
MY LOVE IS A BRICK
Plea
Hangering Around Before the Sanding (written as Leftovers Rule Tuesdays)
THIRTY Japanese form poems, MOSTLY haiku (3 lines), a few others (5 lines)
Page 38:
FOURTEEN 5-line form poems in first post. Not one poem. 14.
Ceremonial Cant
(Note from Conor regarding ellipses.)
Page 39:
(Critique by Al_batross for 22nd Century...use for editing!)
A Daily Dose
Adverse Animosity
An Access of Excess
Page 40:
Catalyst
As Real As This Truth
Claxon
Copula
DNA in a Tissue of Breeze
Ably Ab-Solution
NO POETRY: 41, 42, 43,
Page 44:
Downstairs. Clocked Out. (Maybe move so the page can merely be skipped.) (Require minimum of 3 poems per page, or move the poems to more populated pages.)
Page 45:
(Note comments by blb for Formats.)
two haiku, which should be moved with the others on page 37.
(Collab Honestly Critical/Hoodimann
(Notes about Passing the W.B.) (as qby blb: notes for editing) rine
Page 46:
(Critique of Nick Of by Trysse. Use for editing.)
Page 47:
(Critique of A Link in the Food Chain by Trysse. Used for editing.)
A Link in the Food Chain
Fish Takes World Title
Meat and Greet
Page 48:
Arlington Frost
Needed: Word From the Hospital
A Robe Softer Than God on a Good Day
Speak of the Moon, His Spoiled Gentry (Lunacy Licks Left.)
"Quota, Meet Deadline. Prosper."
PAGE49:
"Justif-" <---Possibly shortest non-form poem ever done by me. Don't miss it! Lol.
PAGE 50:
J.J. Cubed
Futility? Open All Night. (But Then...So Is Love.)
