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Post: 28400633_1 created on Sun, 17 Jun 2007 01:55:56 +0000
Posted: Sun, 17 Jun 2007 01:55:56 +0000

just like what the title says, i need comments about my pics. Thx all

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h244/thundersage/writers-2.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h244/thundersage/eraserswallpaper.jpg

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Post: 28400633_2 created on Sun, 17 Jun 2007 01:58:10 +0000
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Those look really good but they seem to be a little wide. Other than that they're great!. rofl

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Post: 28400633_3 created on Sun, 17 Jun 2007 02:00:20 +0000
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They're good but their faces look a bit awkward. I think they're to wide so it makes they're faces look flat.

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Post: 28400633_4 created on Sun, 17 Jun 2007 02:36:55 +0000
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oh, yeha nice!!

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Post: 28400633_5 created on Sun, 17 Jun 2007 02:38:48 +0000
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They're kinda flat.....

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Post: 28400633_6 created on Tue, 19 Jun 2007 09:31:09 +0000
Posted: Tue, 19 Jun 2007 09:31:09 +0000

hmm, flat huh?? any more???

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Post: 28400633_7 created on Wed, 20 Jun 2007 01:23:12 +0000
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good enough........

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Post: 28400633_8 created on Wed, 20 Jun 2007 01:31:42 +0000
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I like it but there faces are flat.

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Post: 28400633_9 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 08:45:16 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 08:45:16 +0000

okay, well this is the next pic, hope i've improved

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Post: 28400633_10 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:09:14 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:09:14 +0000

You need a little more work on the shoulders. With female shoulders they're less broad, but that'll go away soon, the more you draw them.

Awesome work, keep it up.

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Post: 28400633_11 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:17:02 +0000
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Omg! They're all very good! Good job!! cool

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Post: 28400633_12 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:42:27 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:42:27 +0000

I notice that you don't really try to branch out yet in your view of the head either. its always 3/4 view either playing to the right or the left side. Maybe throw a profile/sideshot in there somewhere? it'll break up the image a bit and make it not seem so flat in terms of content. Play with the poses a bit more-- not all of them have to face forward like its a police line up hun. XD

Keep up the practice

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Post: 28400633_13 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:53:36 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:53:36 +0000

Jitsu ha...

thx 4 the advice, i'll try different poses

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Post: 28400633_14 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:55:06 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 09:55:06 +0000

<moonlight> thx a lot mrgreen

<aldornia> i'll keep that in mind for the next pictures smile

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Post: 28400633_15 created on Fri, 22 Jun 2007 10:07:49 +0000
Posted: Fri, 22 Jun 2007 10:07:49 +0000

Wow, great job, Lyan.

Those are awesome.

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