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----EDITED-----
Time to put up the updated pics. biggrin Yeah. For reference, I'll also put up the ones before.
-------Rie--------
This is an original drawing. Part of a story. Yes, the veil/hat thing is very weird.

Version 1....Version 2....Version 3....Version 4 (most current)

-------Captain----------
Another Original drawing. Yet another one from a story. biggrin
Version 1....Version 2....Version 3 (most current)

-------Kiryu------
This is a little tiny image that I sketched for an art contest. Even though it's tiny, I think it's very adorable. I'm thinking of colouring this one.
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-----Kannade------
This is NOT an original drawing. It is from the manga Kannade, and one of the colouring pages between the chapters. Please C&C only on the colouring, not the art. I put the original image up here too.
Original....Coloured
---Harry Potter---
Yes, I am a HP fan. Not ones that dress up for the movies tho. The movies are lame. My picture of Harry. The actual drawing has Hermione and Ron in it, but I took them out because I wanna work on them a bit more. I just like this Harry too much. Kyaaa~
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the bottom drawing: the girl's eye is messed up. just imagine a front view drawing of her where her eye is now, she would look like a bloody owl!
for the way her head is turned, her eye should look more like this "(>" .

nice hair, though. heart
Hmm, ok. I've been trying to get my side view sketchies right, but meh. At least it doesn't look akward. Hmm, ok I'll try the > thingy.
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Hmm, ok. I've been trying to get my side view sketchies right, but meh. At least it doesn't look akward. Hmm, ok I'll try the > thingy.


actually it does look akward, that's why I said she looked like an owl.
-_-|| My head hurts now. I've been trying to fiz it, but it was too long, or it looked like she was about to die, ....
Yay, I drew it correctly on a scrap sheet. Now to transfer it...
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here this might help

btw, I'm trying to help you. Not insult you.
Yeah, I know. I'm seriously not offended or anything. Really. What's confusing me is that she's lookin' back. Yeah. I actually take critisism really well, cuz I have a couple friends who are those insane perfect artists whose sketches are as good as what some people take days to do. OK, once I finish washing the dishes, continuing my attempt to fix the eye.
OK, redrew it and it came out a little different. It's still a little big, but it's cuz it looks weird when it's smaller.
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Very nice

theres just one thing! in the first one, her neck is a bit long! but other then that i like it'!! heart domokun
the eye still looks weird. It's looking too far back, then an eye can look.
Ok, I'll re-work it again. But I can't now, cuz i'm leaving for a band concert soon, so... yeah. Thanks Ashira. I'll try to fix the neck later too.
Ok, here's the pics that I redid a bit.
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and...
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any comments on the updates?
Here's a comment: It's past 12:30 A.M. and it's WAY to LATE for this s**t.
... It's wasn't 12:30 here. And I was thinking y'know, more -constructive- critisism.

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