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Dangerous Sex Symbol

Yo! Sakura Misawa here and this is my latest story, it’s titled Naruto™: Return of Uzumaki Yukio. This is not my first story, although I know some of you will agree with me when I say my writing skills need work sweatdrop . Anyway I’ll post it here let me know if you like it, if not then give me a solid reason why (I like constructive criticism stare ), and what I should fix.

Here is a brief description of the main character so you know what to expect in the story:

Uzumaki Yukio is Yondaime’s only daughter and Naruto’s stepsister, she reached jounin level at age 13. By that time she was considered a genius and one of the most talented kunoichi of her generation. She was in the highlight of her life until she was sent on an investigation mission to the sound where she would find knowledge about Orochimaru’s whereabouts. Everything was running smoothly, until the mission was ambushed and she was certified dead when no body was found. However, the truth is that she survived with a head concussion leaving her amnesic to fend for herself in the sound village. Because of this she became a battle-hardened kunoichi under Orochimaru’s tutelage. Now 15 years later Yukio returns to Konoha after recovering her memories and escaping sound to find that her parents have been murdered, and that her stepbrother has become the vessel of the Kyuubi no youkai.

BTW: I just wanted to let you all know that the personality previewed in the first chapters of the story is not her original one, the reason because she acts so stoic at first is because she has no recollection of her life, before being brought to Orochimaru, thus she doesn’t know who to trust. Her original personality can be considered a mix between Naruto and Kakashi’s personality (I have not yet decided the chapter in which she will recover her memory, I don’t want it to be neither too soon nor too late in the story).

P.S. This character’s full profile, along with a picture is available in my journal, you are welcome to check it out if you so desire.

Dangerous Sex Symbol

This is the first chapter, it is four pages long. If you like it and would like me to continue posting, PM me.

Chapter 01: Missions

Thunder rumbles, lightning flashes, a lone hooded figure wearing a wooden mask hides in the shadows...waiting. Quick crunching noises are heard as the figure hesitates before reaching a hand towards a sword protruding off of its back.

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The target’s keen senses tell him something is out of place but his suspicions are quickly cast off as nerves as he leans his back completely against a nearby tree in an attempt to catch lost breath.

A bolt of lightning that momentarily illuminates the plains reveals a figure wearing a feline shaped mask, with red stripes, looming nearby; before darkness shrouds all once more.

Another sequence of quick crunching noises are heard, followed closely by the sound of a blade cutting flesh; a lightning flash reveals as a head rolls away from its corpse, and the figure wearing the mask sheathes its sword once more.

~o~

A few hours have passed since the incident and the same person now leans against a wall right leg propped up and arms crossed over its chest. Not long after a man enters the room.

"Orochimaru-sama will see you now." He informed, eyes hidden by the light reflecting off of glasses he wore as a knowing smirk played upon his face. A slight grunt of acknowledgement is the only reply received by the man to make room in the doorway as the stranger pushed itself off the wall and followed him; down a corridor illuminated by torches leading to a set of double doors with strange carvings. The man opened the door and stepped aside allowing the stranger passage into a room where a marble throne was set proudly in the center of, it now occupied by a man with deathly pale skin and amber eyes that resembled those of a snake, with purple markings surrounding them. As the man with glasses closes the door, the silence was broken.

"You wished to speak with me?" A small nod. "Then remove your mask, you know how I despise when you address me whilst wearing it." A slight grunt of agreement was all the answer he received as a neatly manicured hand with black nail polish was raised to remove the mask and hood revealing a head of mid-back length raven hair framing a feminine face with downcast, expressionless golden eyes. "Better...now you may speak."

"I have come to give my mission report."

"Ah, yes, my men informed me you would be doing so...proceed."

"The mission unfolded with no inconveniences, the target was eliminated, and there were no witnesses."

A fanged smirk. "Good...I could not expect any less of you."

“Hn.”

“Kabuto, take Neko-san to her living quarters.”

“Hai Orochimaru-sama.” A respectful bow before turning to look at her. “Neko-san, follow me.”

~o~

She splashes water in her face leans on the sink and looks at her reflection in the small mirror. Dead hazel eyes that have seen more gore than humanly sustainable have lost their usual happy shine, dark circles beneath them tell of sleepless nights and long stakeouts, all this complemented by the now stoic expression which she always seems to wear speak volumes of the mysterious woman’s seemingly rough upbringing.

Pale hands reach for the towel hanging beside the sink to wipe her now wet face, she turns the knob of the tub so steaming water fills it, once it did she discarded her ANBU uniform got in and sat on the tub floor bringing her knees to her chest and hugging them tightly to herself. Her eyes come to rest on a small blade resting innocently on the tub side, tentative hands reach for it, and unsheathe it holding it up to the moonlight looking at her reflection staring back at her. She holds up the wrist of her opposite arm where upon closer inspection one can see many thin scars running upon the length of it, scars which are seemingly invisible at first glance. Hazel eyes close and a deep breath is taken before the blade is brought down upon said wrist setting the blood aflow, and letting it drop to the water below.

~o~

The chirping of birds wake the sleeping figure from its sleep, it tosses and turns before sitting up on his bed revealing a mop of blonde hair covered by a black and white walrus sleeping cap. The boy now man rubbed at azure eyes tiredly letting out a big yawn.

Tired eyes watch the pot with boiling water as it slowly evaporates irritating his eyes. Later we find him sitting at the table with a carton of milk, saying a tired “Itadakimasu” whilst separating the chopsticks followed by a yawn and later the downing of the ramen cup.

He runs excitedly through the streets of Konoha receiving in his haste both hateful, and acknowledging glances. This being because although some people know all that he has been through they can’t seem to get over the fact that there is a demon nestled inside him, a demon that threatened to destroy them not so many years ago…

“Where are you going Naruto?” Asked a strong female voice stopping the boy in his tracks making him tracks making him jump slightly and almost fall over.

“Oh, good morning Sakura-chan I was on my way to the training grounds.” He fox grinned while rubbing the back of his neck with one hand.

“You’re going to go train again…Naruto…I know you want to bring Sasuke-kun back…but you’ve got to take it easy you’re pushing yourself too hard.”

“I know Sakura-chan don’t worry.”

“Well be on your way I won’t keep you any longer.”

“Yosh!...goodbye Sakura-chan.” He turns tail running off once more. ‘Sasuke…no matter how long it takes…I’ll keep training until I’m sure I can beat you and return you to this village…not only for me, but for Sakura-chan as well, because I made her a promise and I’m going to keep it, teme!’ Thoughts of Sasuke and the Cursed Seal Heaven fill his mind as a determined smile graces his face, and he puts more speed behind his run across Konoha.

~o~

“Neko-san! Neko-san! Are you in there?” Came the banging outside the door, causing the figure on the bed to stir slightly

“Unh, what the hell!?”

“Neko-san! Are you alright?”

With a sigh the woman on the bed sat up slowly, the sheets slipping down to her waist. Reaching blindly to the bedside table she felt for her lighter. Grabbing it, she lit the candle wincing at the sudden influx light. She pulled the covers from her body and got out of bed heading towards the door, grabbing a deep crimson silk robe on the way.

“Neko-san!” Came the incessant banging again, the door opened and heavy lidded eyes blinked to adjust the slightly bright light coming from the hallway.

“Yes?”

“Neko-san...Orochimaru-sama wants to see you.”

“…I’ll be right there.”

TBC


A/N: -Le gasp- What could Orochimaru want with our heroine?…hmm…that’s for me to know and for you to find out, until next chapter, now off to comment people, Ja ne!

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Just thought you'd like to know, your journal isn't viewable to the public. You have it so that only your friends can read it so if you want people to see Yukio's profile you need to change that. 3nodding

But so far it sounds pretty good to me. Great job!

Dangerous Sex Symbol

Dangerous Sex Symbol

NARUTO ROCKS!!
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NARUTO ROCKS!!

Naruto is the best, specially Kakashi
Bump! *does the bump dance* blaugh

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Looks pretty good so far, i'd sure would like to see more 3nodding

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WOAH SO MUCH READING meh im likeing this!
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Dangerous Sex Symbol

Yo! Long time no see, this is Sakura_Misawa bringing you the second chapter to this story. It's 6 pages long...I hope you like it.

Chapter 02: Training

A young man sits on a bed facing the window when suddenly Kabuto enters the room

“Sasuke-kun.” The boy turns his face slightly to acknowledge him. “Are you ready for your morning training?”

“Aa.”

~o~

The woman walks into the throne room and kneels before it

“You wished to speak with me, my lord?”

“Hai…Neko-san…I have another mission for you. In this one there is no need for you to use your special abilities, although…your speed will be necessary.”

“Is it another stakeout mission?”

Slight amusement, and a smirk, as deep raven hair falls slightly into a pale face. “Why no it’s more of an…information retrieval mission.”

Confused hazel eyes peer from under raven bangs. “Oh?”

A fanged smirk. “Don’t look so surprised I know this mission is beneath you but you are one of my most trusted subordinates and the most skilled to carry out this mission…you see they already know Kabuto-kun.”

“I see…” A deep bow. “When do I leave?”

~o~

Sasuke stands next to Kabuto overlooking a large arena where a small group of tough looking a large arena where a small group of laugh looking shinobi are filled in a line as if awaiting inspection.

Kabuto glances at the group before turning to Sasuke. “Pick your opponent.”

Few seconds pass before…

“You there.” He points toward the group where two well muscled shinobi stand, they step aside to make way for a very slim male with a dark appearance, and a confident stride. “I want to fight you.” The man smirked and nodded.

Worry covered Kabuto’s features at his young master’s choice as his young master’s choice as he leaned closer to him. “You want to Fight Fushigi-san?” A firm nod was his only response. “Sasuke-kun wishes to fight Fushigi-san, everyone else please leave the arena.”

As the shinobi filed out of the room Kabuto and Sasuke made their way down to the arena. “Sasuke-kun, are you sure you want to fight Fushigi-san I mean he’s - ”

“Enough!? Kabuto, I do not need you to tell me what to do, I can take care of myself.”

“Hn.” They entered the arena and made their way towards the center. Sasuke and Fushigi stood facing each other, Kabuto facing both of them. “Fighters ready…” He looks st both of them hands at the ready. “Begin.” He drops his hand.

“Sharingan.” Black eyes turn crimson

~o~

Tsunade sits behind her desk signing papers before she asks apparently to no one. “Any news on Akatsuki?”

“Nothing but the same…that they’re after Naruto…” Answers Jiraiya from his usual spot near her window, his legs propped up, his eyes closed. “Nobody has seen them, they’ve made no attacks, they have no bills, no lodging no anything…it’s as if they’ve disappeared without a trace.”

“It appears so…but you know better than that, don’t you?” She stands and walks over to stand leaning against the window frame, arms crossed.

A small smile. “Yes I do.”

A smirk. “Good.”

“Where is he?”

“Training grounds.” She moves from the window to sit at her desk once more as Jiraiya disappeared outside.

~o~

“Sharingan.” Black eyes turn crimson as Fushigi disappears in front of him. ‘What?’ Red eyes scan the room. ‘Where the hell did he go?’ He takes a kunai out of his weapons holster, twirling it by the handle, and standing at the ready arms crossed in front of his face in the defense position, the arm that holds the kunai on top, eyes still scanning the room. An attack to his gut makes him loose his breath, spit out blood and double over; this attack is followed by 5 more: face, stomach, back of neck, side, back, and Sasuke goes sliding and rolling across the arena, gathering dust and dirt along the way. Until finally stopping a few feet away.

A few minutes pass until he sits up, wincing at the pain coming from his ribs, grabbing at his side instinctively; he wipes the blood from his mouth, and with a palm on the ground he stands with difficulty. Contemplative crimson eyes scan the room for his attacker. ‘What kind of man is he? I can’t see him nor sense his chakra…either this some weird new technique or his speed is so great that even the Sharingan can’t track it…either way…’ He closes his eyes and takes a defensive stance. ‘I’ll find a way to overcome it…concentrate…concentrate…don’t lose your focus, be aware of your surroundings, wait for the right moment to strike…’ The scenery behind him shifts as if contorted, silhouetting the form of a man. ‘NOW!’ Sasuke ducks low, and with both hands on the floor for balance does a strong foot sweep, followed by a flip and a dropkick to Fushigi’s chest, afterwards doing a back flip out of grasping range. ‘I know the techniques fault…now this will be easy.’ He cuts off a piece of his kimono wrapping it around his eyes, putting away the kunai and afterwards dropping into a fighting stance.

Block, block, block, block, side kick. And an invisible figure slides across the arena as Sasuke drops to a fighting stance once more.

“Shizuka Oto no Jutsu.” Said a voice, and afterwards the room fell silent, but was soon filled with a faint screeching noise, and the grunts of pain coming from Sasuke as he covered his ears when the sound filled them; he spits out blood because of the sound waves as the torture continues. An invisible roundhouse kick to the face makes him do an aerial roll before falling to the ground face down. ‘Kuso!’ He curses mentally whilst slowly getting up slowly on hands and knees; he uncovers his eyes and wipes the blood from his mouth with the back of his hand, receives a kick to his stomach that makes him roll a few feet. A pressure in his neck that implies he is being stepped on makes him spit out blood and try to grab the invisible foot that in turn applies more pressure, suddenly he grabs the foot and twists eliciting a cry of pain from the man, and the relief of the pressure which makes him gasp for air whilst rubbing his throat, realizing his advantage he takes out a kunai and stabs it in the foot, does a back flip, lands standing, and performs a sequence of familiar seals.

“…horse, tiger…Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu.” He sucks in air, before letting out a big fireball to the spot where his opponent should be. After the fire clears he finds that the floor is scorched, but there’s no sign of his kunai anywhere in sight, when suddenly he finds it close to his throat, another arm holding him close as Fushigi smirks next to his ear. His own hands grab the arm holding him. “So, you decided to show yourself?” He smirks. “Bad idea.” He mocks as the symbols from the cursed seal spread across his body and Fushigi fins that Sasuke’s grip on his arm has tightened considerably, making his hold falter progressively and where he is elbowed in his gut, which makes him double over, receiving a roundhouse kick in the face, knocking him back. An opportunity Sasuke takes to, after a sequence of seals, charge up Chidori, and start a full run toward Fushigi, which he pins with his attack to the nearby wall. The blue haired man raises a hand to grab the arm that has been thrusted through him only for it to drop dead halfway there as blood seeps from his mouth and lands on the exposed skin of Sasuke’s arm. After Chidori dies down Sasuke removes his hand from Fushigi’s chest; he slides down the wall until his corpse sits on the floor. As the symbols from the seal retreat to their original form, he stares down at the corpse before him, when the sound of clapping breaks him out of his thoughts, a brief glance sideways reveals Orochimaru’s form, leaned against the wall with his arms now crossed.

“Well done Sasuke-kun.” A feral smirk playing on his face revealing fangs, a tone of amusement in his voice.

A scowl. “How long have you been there?”

“Long enough.”

“Hn.” Sasuke turns and walks towards the staircase a hand holding his side, a slight limp in his movement.

“Sasuke-kun allow me to treat your wounds.” Says Kabuto putting a hand on his shoulder.

“No!” He shakes the hand off. “It’s nothing…barely a scratch.”

As he took four steps away from them, he fell to his knees with a grimace of pain, Kabuto rushed to his side.

“Sasuke-kun…please…you took a hard hit to your side, you must’ve broken a few ribs or worse gotten a punctured lung, in which case we must hurry so we can stop any further damage.” He explains putting Sasuke’s arm around his neck.

~o~

Naruto is bent over hands on his knees as he gasps for breath a few feet in front of him a target hangs from a tree with a few kunai protruding from a bulls eye in its chest. Suddenly he straightens only to drop backwards into the grass as the sun shining above blinds him, he closes his eyes.

“Resting, Naruto?”

Naruto opens his eyes to reveal the shadowed figure of a robust male, he takes his right arm and puts it over his eyes to cover the sunlight and as his vision focus he finds Jiraiya standing before him with a smirk on his face. He sits up puzzled. “Eh, Ero-sennin? What are you doing here?”

“I’m here to check how my pupil’s training is coming along.”

A sigh. “Well…not as great as I thought it would be, but still fine.” Jiraiya noticed some of the bruises on his arms and frowned slightly.

“No matter Naruto, that’s another reason why I’m here, to supervise your training.” ‘In a way.’ He added mentally

Confusion laces Naruto’s voice as his face turns contemplative. “Supervise…my training? Are you sure you’re feeling well Ero-sennin?” Sligh worry laces his voice as he leans forward and touches the back of his hand to the sennin’s forehead feeling for a non-existent fever; Jiraiya’s eye twitches and Naruto opens his eyes. “Eh?”

“Baka!” Screams Jiraiya bonking Naruto in the head.

“Itai, itai.” Naruto begins nursing a growing bump on his head, Jiraiya now stands straight, back facing him, closed eye still twitching.

“I’m not sick baka, I’m being serious here.” Naruto stops nursing his head and pays attention. “I know I promised I would train you Naruto…but I’ve been busy with missions…but that is no problem now…now I will teach you everything I know…it’s just a matter of you being up to the challenge…” He turns to face him. “Are you up to the challenge Naruto?”

“Yosh!” He stands up. “ I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, I’m always up to the challenge, and I won’t back down on my word that’s my ninja way.” He finishes with a grin, Jiraiya smirks softly.

~o~

Sasuke lay sleeping in bed his torso and right shoulder bandaged. Kabuto and Orochimaru watch him in another room from behind the large two-way mirror covering the opposite wall of the medical wing.

“Gomen nasai Orochimaru-sama…I tried to warn him…Fushigi was not only a genjutsu master, but his physical strength was overwhelming…sure he wasn’t as strong as Tsunade-hime but still…it was a wonder he didn’t get his lungs punctured with that many broken ribs.”

“Hn, stubbornness runs in the Uchiha bloodline.”

“…Anou…Orochimaru-sama…?”

“Hai, Kabuto.”

“Do you believe Sasuke-kun will cooperate when the time comes?”

A smirk. “Hn, I believe he will, he needs me to defeat Itachi-san. As long as I keep feeding him lies…” He began with a quick glance towards Sasuke, and fixing his gaze on Kabuto once more, raven hair swishing slightly. “Everything will go as planned…we have nothing to worry about.” He finished smirking showing fangs, turning and making his way down the hall. “Besides, there’s always plan B.” He called before chuckling darkly.

A gasp of recognition. “Naruto-kun.” Says Kabuto shifting his gaze to Sasuke once more, his lord’s laughter still ringing in his ears.


TBC

A/N: I try to make the plot as original as possible, but still maintaining the characters personality. Anyway, what could Jiraiya want to teach Naruto? And what part does Naruto play in Orochimaru’s plans?...Until next time! Now go comment, Ja ne!

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*El bumpo danzo*

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it was ok...

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