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I'm an aspiring writer, but I love the idea of sharing the story so I'll start it off and anyone enter your own little comment or extension of the story, but please at least read what came before. There is nothe more frustrating then someone blathering on about nothing related to whats writen.
Oh spelling is not a factor, hell grammer can join spelling out the window only as long as what you've writen can be understood. oh by the way Have fun

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The sun slowly rose over the green fields, a single butterfly followed the air current as the sun light begain to show the devistation of the lands.
Blood and gore splatters mixed with the green and browns of the fields creating a nightmarish enviroment.
A single figure walked through the battle field, with absentminded care he was seen reading a black book as he stopped to talk as if with the spirits.
Wearing gear like that of a jack-of-all-trades the man would pull objects from out of hidden pouches, or pick up things that disapeared as soon as his hands touched his dark jacket.
With a smile he seems to notice our attention, then his eyes flare in blinding green fire, and as we blink he's gone, only the battle field remains with its haunted spirits moaning into the morning sky.
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A playful breeze made the tents flaps move in a hypnotic pattren, the old scared warrior groaned as he stood up from the cot.
A dry hacking couph from another cot gained his attention, saddily me turned to find many cots silent, many of the ocupents would never again make noices.
Walking out into the morning air the old sgt shuttered to see the remains of the battle field.
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There was movment among the dead, a small boy wearing too big armor struggled to pull himself from under his dead mount.
He faught to hold back his tears, he could see many of his childhood friends laying around him, he no longer felt the grand joy of battle.
As a survivor he now understood that the stories of fame and glory he had heard over the years of growing up in the castle, were lies vetrens used to hide the truth.
Yet he only felt an overwhelming saddness, his tears were flowing now, with his shattered leg he used a broken lance as a cruch, and made his way home, within his mind he waas already forming stories to hide the horror of his friends deaths.
A pair of eyes watched the soon to be king, a powerfully sad smile was the only mark on this scared warrior, who turned to his dark companion.
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"what makes you smile so? is this to be our end? what way may this hell that now fills the harts of the livingbe wipet cleen?"
the warrior drops his head into his hand as he takes a seat. soon the sounds of foot steps cand be heard a clear as the rain now aproching to wipe the scar left on the earth.
a man dressed in black clothes stands a near foot by the warrior.
"this time it will change and the faces that you see being clened bythe rain will be born again giving you abetter start."

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We give them fire to warm their homes, and they use it to burn down other peoples homes. The weaping warrior says as he slowly stands
The Dark shadow follows keeping the same distance between each other.
We show then the secrets of metal to defend their homes, and they create weapons to destroy peoples lives. The sad warrior comments as his finder traces lines into the fading image.
The Dark Shadow silently notes the arivial of the queen, her anger evident only by the quickness of her steps.
Every gift we give them...... The sad warrior begins as he turns to find the icy glare of his wife.
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--> Holy Crapola <--

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Enough of these mortals you insist on playing with, its your own you should be more worried about. The mighty queen angrily says as she easily pulls the warrior from the eternally black sphere.

A merth filled voice happily singing ballads of both romance and war heralds the approach of a man most men hate.
The lizard man was a wild contrast of conflicting colors as the heralds costum clashed with his own bland scales. Yet the herald seemed unaward of this.
Finialy seeing the marching monsters the lizard man smiled a toothy pretdator smile, and one could see a evil light growing within his eyes as two riders charged from the victorious army.
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A single booming crack was heard as a bolt of lightning leaped from the lizard mans outstreached finger claw, the energy bolt forked and impaled the two charging warriors.
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I'm gone for a mear hour and already some fools have forgotten what I do for your army General Thraxis. The lizard herald remarks to the struggling orc.
Not many in this army know of your true intentions Turner. A stronge and mellow voice runs a chill down the Lizard mans spin.
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((Wow. That's pretty good so far.. ^^))
im new here, i need some hep and yeah
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im new here, i need some hep and yeah

Sshhh! You're ruining the story! Pm me and I'll try to help you okay?
What happens next?!? I must know!!! crying

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From the tents only entrence a figure cloaked in shadows flowed towards the two, eight glowing eyes spewed forth a glowing red mist.
The lizard man reliesed his spell, and the orc general fell heavily to the ground, where the clearly terrorfied creature cowered before the armies true master.
Now with the humans hold on this region crushed with their army, the little elven queen sees to confront you. The dark figure commented as it floated within the ever growing red mist.
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From a tree a large shadowy figure whatched the marching monsters. With great patience he counted the number of diffrent creatures.
From the thousands of small goblins who were clearly the lesser, and more then likely served as food if the food stores ran out.
There were the hard fighting orcs well deciplined in the arts of war, their larger cousins the ogres who marched single file on the outskirts of the army, it was amazing they show such decipline considering the long blood feud between the two, this in it self was a warning of the leadership.
The figure marked the ugly shambling figures of wet moss, tree trolls there creatures could regenerated from the worst wounds, only fire could trully kill them, and again there was a clear message of the leadership of this marching army of monsters for there were at least two hundred of these foul creatures.
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