Kairi Nightingale
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- Posted: Fri, 19 Jul 2013 17:40:01 +0000
Hey, guys!
So, in this thread we're going to be writing scenes and discussing different styles of writing character descriptions or impressions. This way, everyone can get a little practice in and maybe learn something new about writing strong character impressions in a relatively short amount of time.
Here's how it'll work:
The challenge will be to write a scene, in around 1000 words or less, about two or more characters, either meeting for the first time or who already know each other, and build a strong impression of at least one of them using description, POV, dialogue, interaction, or anything else you can think of. Remember: the focus of the scene should be on the characters. Don't get caught up in writing plot or an action sequence unless it contributes to developing a character.
When done (and preferably edited), go ahead and post it up on here and we'll discuss what each of us think about the way the characters were described, what our impressions are of the characters, and what worked or didn't work in our opinions. Criticisms should be constructive and focus completely on the characters and how they were written.
Some Simple Rules/Guidelines:
- Scenes must meet Gaia's ToS. (Keep it PG13, guys)
- Do not post work here if you aren't prepared to take the good AND the bad. For all intents and purposes, this is a critique thread; not for the feint of heart. I don't want to see any hotheaded responses from people too sensitive to criticism.
- If you post a scene, please be sure to join in the discussions and respond to other people's works. It's only polite.
- The point of this is to discuss the characters and making a strong impression with them. This is NOT meant to be a full critique of the works. If grammar, dialogue, etc. is bad enough that it affects the character impressions, simply mention that (i.e. "The grammar errors made the work too hard to understand. Please consider editing it more." ) or ignore the work and move on. Do not go into details on what the other errors were and how to fix them. That detracts from the thread. If both parties are interested in carrying on a conversation like that, please take it to the PM's or the Original Stories/Prose Forum. With that said, please edit scenes at least once or twice before posting.
- I don't want to see a string of different scenes written by one person. Be considerate to the other posters sharing this thread, and try doing one at a time to see if and how other people respond first. After a while, you may post another.
I'm looking forward to everyone's different scenes and characters. Good luck and have fun!
So, in this thread we're going to be writing scenes and discussing different styles of writing character descriptions or impressions. This way, everyone can get a little practice in and maybe learn something new about writing strong character impressions in a relatively short amount of time.
Here's how it'll work:
The challenge will be to write a scene, in around 1000 words or less, about two or more characters, either meeting for the first time or who already know each other, and build a strong impression of at least one of them using description, POV, dialogue, interaction, or anything else you can think of. Remember: the focus of the scene should be on the characters. Don't get caught up in writing plot or an action sequence unless it contributes to developing a character.
When done (and preferably edited), go ahead and post it up on here and we'll discuss what each of us think about the way the characters were described, what our impressions are of the characters, and what worked or didn't work in our opinions. Criticisms should be constructive and focus completely on the characters and how they were written.
Some Simple Rules/Guidelines:
- Scenes must meet Gaia's ToS. (Keep it PG13, guys)
- Do not post work here if you aren't prepared to take the good AND the bad. For all intents and purposes, this is a critique thread; not for the feint of heart. I don't want to see any hotheaded responses from people too sensitive to criticism.
- If you post a scene, please be sure to join in the discussions and respond to other people's works. It's only polite.
- The point of this is to discuss the characters and making a strong impression with them. This is NOT meant to be a full critique of the works. If grammar, dialogue, etc. is bad enough that it affects the character impressions, simply mention that (i.e. "The grammar errors made the work too hard to understand. Please consider editing it more." ) or ignore the work and move on. Do not go into details on what the other errors were and how to fix them. That detracts from the thread. If both parties are interested in carrying on a conversation like that, please take it to the PM's or the Original Stories/Prose Forum. With that said, please edit scenes at least once or twice before posting.
- I don't want to see a string of different scenes written by one person. Be considerate to the other posters sharing this thread, and try doing one at a time to see if and how other people respond first. After a while, you may post another.
I'm looking forward to everyone's different scenes and characters. Good luck and have fun!