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So, about them prices?

Dang gurl, you so cheap. ;D	25.7%	[ 9 ]
Perfect my dear! <3	37.1%	[ 13 ]
********, you're a greedy b***h. . _.	2.9%	[ 1 ]
Uhm, gold? :D	34.3%	[ 12 ]
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Sno Magicka

Uh.

LOL. But the thing is I didn't roleplay though, or did I? I'm pretty sure not. And also, I switch from acc to acc when roleplaying. The one I was talking about was in a guild too, and it's on my other account. I switch in between to focus better = w = (imagine the stress of having all 10 or something and people watching your every move gonk )

I really shouldn't be starting roleplays right now.... But here I am emotion_awesome

&& yeah. I fix and fix constantly. What can I say. Picky perfectionist urges? lol Nothing ever seems to be perfect lol. I try to tell myself that people don't even read as damn carefully, or would just ignore some bad phrasing and whatnot. But I still feel the need to make it work perfectly stressed

[Sno Magicka]

Hidden in the Eyes

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Gah, I am a pseudo-english-nazi. . _.

Like, there's only so much bad sentence structure,
improper use of commas, and wrong word forms
I can stand before I nicely ask my RP partner to
step their game up. >_<

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[Hidden in the Eyes]

Sno Magicka

I've never done that before because I feel I would come off mean ;A;
But it it's something I can't stand I'll just end it on the spot. Usually I check a person's post history before deciding to roleplay, since that can give a good insight as well.

It bothers me a lot too, like.... "Omrgg that's a run-on youuu!! emotion_donotwant " But heck, if they don't know, how do you teach? gonk

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ACTUALLY; DUN DUN DUN! emotion_awesome
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-ooc/learn-to-roleplay-like-a-boss/t.64071965_1/

If someone actually wishes to improve, he or she can read that = w = It's good stuff. I learned a few tid bits on what people hate haha. //peeves though I don't do them, it's nice to be aware o3o

[Sno Magicka]

Hidden in the Eyes

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Thankfully I know I'm a b***h and I'm not ashamed
of it, so I use it when needed. xD

My biggest pet peeve is this:
Johanne got out of bed and looked around.
Johanne stood up and stretched, then walked
over to her dresser. Johanne pulled out a
bright purple vest and-[ WRITER SHOT ]

For the love of all that is holy, get some
damn variety in there. D<

And yeah, I've seen that thread a few times
now, skimmed over it a bit. c:

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That bothers me to no end as well scream
But I never met it, so no worries emotion_awesome Though sometimes the He/She may be used a bit often. But I can handle that-- just ignore, heh. > >

For me (as in when I am doing the writing), I even get bothered by myself if it's like... Maybe near the end of a sentence I used "she". And then in the next sentence, I start out with a "She....."
("To be honest, that was her problem. Her habits allowed Sara to become a pig, eating whatever......"
I then change it, because even that sounds too repetitive xD Though I'm not sure if that's just meee orrrr.....? ninja

[Sno Magicka]

Hidden in the Eyes

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Oh god, repetition is just a more broad category
of that horrible sentence structure repeating itself.

I will spend 10 minutes trying to think up different
ways of referring to my characters sometimes.

Like, right now, my OC Sno is Sailor Mercury's
daughter from Sailor Moon. I refer to her as
Sno, Mercury Scout, Blue Haired Woman,
the Brains, Mercury Princess, etc.

Whether it's a physically defining feature,
status in society, actual name, or defining
ability, I will never use the same reference
twice in the in the span of 4 sentences. . _.

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[Hidden in the Eyes]

Sno Magicka

I'll usually try to start the sentence differently. But yes, I go by hair color, name, she/her, sometimes using lady or something. D

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