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- Posted: Wed, 01 Apr 2009 11:00:46 +0000
Tell me if this is a good story biggrin
CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms are appreciated.
THE SEVEN SWORDS
First Mini-Book of an Original Series by
Viarce Perihelion D. Lacreausse
It was a normal morning in school. I went to the back and sat on the chair right next to the window, waiting for the only subject that took my interest - Algebra and Trigonometry. It was 7:28 AM, time for first period, World History.
Ms. Armida entered the room with her pink shawl around her shoulders and a small pile of books and papers in her arms. She dropped the papers on the left part of the table and placed the book on the center. She pulled up her shawl with one hand and opened the attendance folder with the other.
She started to call out surnames.
"Addison"
"Here"
"Arthur"
"Here"
"Bailey"
"Present"
"Evans"
"Here"
"Green"
"Present"
Her voice trailed off and I stared out the window, entranced by the falling leaves. It looked like a beautiful inferno of yellow and red outside. I was hypnotized...
"Mitchell"
"Present!" chorused the twins Jason and Jasper. Everyone burst out a sarcastic "haha." It pulled me out of my trance and just in time.
"Nicholson"
"Here" I replied with as much enthusiasm as I had in my body. It wasn't very much to be truthful.
It took Ms. Armida another minute to finish the attendance and start the lecture. I payed no attention to what was written on the board nor did I pay any attention to anything (or anyone) in front. I just stared out the window.
Although I wasn't listening, Ms. Armida's lecture kept flooding into my head. And it was a good thing because she often called me on for recitations.
The day continued and I did the exact same thing in Physics, World Literature, Health, Music and Arts, and Technology - stare out the window. I did it even while walking through the corridor from class to class.
I wasn't the type of scholar that would listen to lectures all day long. I was the type that would just slack off and let time pass by. And besides, none of those subjects took my interest.
I was part of an advanced class what I was learning now would be repeated to me on my third year of college. I was just a Junior in high school. A not so nerdy scholar that wore his semi-framed eye-glasses only when he would answer a test. And the only scholar in school who gets a perfect 100 mark in my report card.
To be truthful, I didn't need the glasses to be able to read. I wear a pair of contact lenses everyday. Their main purpose was to hide my eyes' true color - green - but my parents decided to buy a pair with grades. I bought ungraded glasses to hide from the popular crowd.
My name echoed all throughout the campus. I was a low profile guy so my parents asked my teachers to call me Aaron Nicholson rather than my real name, Bertrand Jade Castor Nickels. That way, I won't attract attention when I'm called.
I walked slowly towards room 316, my book and notebook in one hand and my pen and pencil in my pocket. Room 316 was where Mrs. Dungao held Algebra and Trigonometry classes.
I walked in and sat on one of the chairs in the middle of the room. The chairs were arranged in a circular pattern in the middle of the room. Directly parallel the chairs were glass boards with different equations and figures written on each.
I loved this subject. I could solve the problems in less than five seconds. I just faked the "it's a bit too difficult" part. Mrs. Dungao knew this and always played along, saying words of encouragement whenever I'd put on my "it's a bit too difficult" act.
This was my last class of the day, and the only class that I look forward to everyday.
After classes, I would stay for a few minutes as Mrs. Dungao discusses advanced Calculus, and other advanced topics to me.
This is what goes on everyday... Until today...
I spent the whole day drawing some sort of geometric pattern. All that I could remember were the thousands of equations that flooded my head. All of them led to an answer of 1.
For every equation, I would draw a regular polygon inscribed in a circle and then use a different equation to come up with the same figure and draw it tilted by a few degrees but still inscribed in the same circle. I repeated this until the equation repeated. Then, I drew a larger circle that contained the previous figure and then repeated the process in a larger scale, only this time, the polygon had more sides than the previous ones. I finished it by the end of Mrs. Dungao's class and showed it to her.
The pattern looked more like an intricate circular design than a set of geometric figures. She looked at it and was stunned. I told her what it was and she asked if she could borrow it.
I agreed. She said that we wanted to show it to her nephew.
<That night in Mrs. Dungao's home>
"Windsor, I'm home!" Mrs. Dungao said as she opened the door.
As Mrs. Dungao closed the door, a shady figure approached her from behind. "I believe you have something of my interest, Auntie"
CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms are appreciated.
THE SEVEN SWORDS
First Mini-Book of an Original Series by
Viarce Perihelion D. Lacreausse
An Introduction
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It was a normal morning in school. I went to the back and sat on the chair right next to the window, waiting for the only subject that took my interest - Algebra and Trigonometry. It was 7:28 AM, time for first period, World History.
Ms. Armida entered the room with her pink shawl around her shoulders and a small pile of books and papers in her arms. She dropped the papers on the left part of the table and placed the book on the center. She pulled up her shawl with one hand and opened the attendance folder with the other.
She started to call out surnames.
"Addison"
"Here"
"Arthur"
"Here"
"Bailey"
"Present"
"Evans"
"Here"
"Green"
"Present"
Her voice trailed off and I stared out the window, entranced by the falling leaves. It looked like a beautiful inferno of yellow and red outside. I was hypnotized...
"Mitchell"
"Present!" chorused the twins Jason and Jasper. Everyone burst out a sarcastic "haha." It pulled me out of my trance and just in time.
"Nicholson"
"Here" I replied with as much enthusiasm as I had in my body. It wasn't very much to be truthful.
It took Ms. Armida another minute to finish the attendance and start the lecture. I payed no attention to what was written on the board nor did I pay any attention to anything (or anyone) in front. I just stared out the window.
Although I wasn't listening, Ms. Armida's lecture kept flooding into my head. And it was a good thing because she often called me on for recitations.
The day continued and I did the exact same thing in Physics, World Literature, Health, Music and Arts, and Technology - stare out the window. I did it even while walking through the corridor from class to class.
I wasn't the type of scholar that would listen to lectures all day long. I was the type that would just slack off and let time pass by. And besides, none of those subjects took my interest.
I was part of an advanced class what I was learning now would be repeated to me on my third year of college. I was just a Junior in high school. A not so nerdy scholar that wore his semi-framed eye-glasses only when he would answer a test. And the only scholar in school who gets a perfect 100 mark in my report card.
To be truthful, I didn't need the glasses to be able to read. I wear a pair of contact lenses everyday. Their main purpose was to hide my eyes' true color - green - but my parents decided to buy a pair with grades. I bought ungraded glasses to hide from the popular crowd.
My name echoed all throughout the campus. I was a low profile guy so my parents asked my teachers to call me Aaron Nicholson rather than my real name, Bertrand Jade Castor Nickels. That way, I won't attract attention when I'm called.
I walked slowly towards room 316, my book and notebook in one hand and my pen and pencil in my pocket. Room 316 was where Mrs. Dungao held Algebra and Trigonometry classes.
I walked in and sat on one of the chairs in the middle of the room. The chairs were arranged in a circular pattern in the middle of the room. Directly parallel the chairs were glass boards with different equations and figures written on each.
I loved this subject. I could solve the problems in less than five seconds. I just faked the "it's a bit too difficult" part. Mrs. Dungao knew this and always played along, saying words of encouragement whenever I'd put on my "it's a bit too difficult" act.
This was my last class of the day, and the only class that I look forward to everyday.
After classes, I would stay for a few minutes as Mrs. Dungao discusses advanced Calculus, and other advanced topics to me.
This is what goes on everyday... Until today...
I spent the whole day drawing some sort of geometric pattern. All that I could remember were the thousands of equations that flooded my head. All of them led to an answer of 1.
For every equation, I would draw a regular polygon inscribed in a circle and then use a different equation to come up with the same figure and draw it tilted by a few degrees but still inscribed in the same circle. I repeated this until the equation repeated. Then, I drew a larger circle that contained the previous figure and then repeated the process in a larger scale, only this time, the polygon had more sides than the previous ones. I finished it by the end of Mrs. Dungao's class and showed it to her.
The pattern looked more like an intricate circular design than a set of geometric figures. She looked at it and was stunned. I told her what it was and she asked if she could borrow it.
I agreed. She said that we wanted to show it to her nephew.
<That night in Mrs. Dungao's home>
"Windsor, I'm home!" Mrs. Dungao said as she opened the door.
As Mrs. Dungao closed the door, a shady figure approached her from behind. "I believe you have something of my interest, Auntie"