The Killer Saws - A story by me

[NikkiLovesCloud]

The Killer Saws
Part 1

There was once this beautiful castle that I came across that I came across. It was on top of a very tall hill. As far as I know of, no one has ever gone near it, or in fact no one owns it. This castle looks lonely as its surroundings look melancholy. The castle’s garden however is full of life. Statues and ornaments all around with lots of plants.

As I finished admiring the garden, I decided to go inside the castle. The weirdest things is that the castle looks modern inside. I looked in a room, which was full of enormous machinery, which I think they look strange but I guess they are magnificent. It is unknown what they are used for, but I’ve got a feeling I shall find out soon enough. However, I do not want to concentrate on the machinery right now. It looks like this castle has a purpose by looking at the machinery. The strangest thing is that no one owns this castle, but I heard something in here is making people too scared to come near this place. However, I may seem brave to check it out, but I’m wasting my time. Maybe it’s best to leave now and come back tomorrow.

So I leave the abandoned castle, and go back to my home. My secret home. I wished people did not know a lot about me. I don’t know who my parents are. The thing is I grew up alone, with no parents or no family. I don’t even know where I came from. People seem to hate me for who I am and the way I act. They stare at me and its probably the reason why I have no friends. It’s like no one understands me. Any way I live in a abandoned building which is falling apart. I play a beautiful, red guitar and I pray every night. I pray and wish that I can find a best friend and travel different places. So as I get to my so called “home” and just sit down and thinking about the mysterious thing, that’s inside the lonely and abandoned castle. Then I also start thinking about finding a friend. I decide to go to bed and sort things out the next day.

As I fall into a deep sleep, I started to have a weird dream. I end up finding a friend but its not what anyone would expect a friend to be like. There was also something else with a saw on its arm, making a loud noise. It looks strange, but my dream cuts off as it was going to reveal itself. Now all I can do is fall asleep and not think about anything at all, and wake up early in the morning. Maybe I will find answers and also a friend. Now I shall carry on sleeping till 6 0’clock in the morning as this will give me the energy that I need for tomorrow.

[NikkiLovesCloud]

The Killer Saws
Part 2

It was 6 am that I woke up at. It’s so light outside. The sun heated up the room. Sweat was pouring down my face. So I decided to skip breakfast, as I felt my stomach was telling me that it wasn’t hungry. I am so eager to leave my house, and just find who or what is hiding in that castle. I left

My house and started walking up the hill towards the castle. It is a long but a gentle walk as it is a beautiful day. I was slightly nervous to go back to the castle as I do not know what could in there. Anything could be hiding somewhere in the place, waiting to jump out at me. Finally, I got to the old castle. Then I went inside the deserted castle, I heard strange noises, coming from upstairs. So I ran up the long stairs. When I finally got to the top, I started to look around. I heard a noise and I wondered where it was coming from.

So I started searching for the “thing” that was inside this castle. I heard something move, it was like footsteps. Maybe this “thing” is actually a person. Anyway I continued searching the dusty room, thinking to myself whether I should just leave, or continue looking for the “thing” or the person. Then I heard another sound, it was like the sound of a saw. It was freaking me out slightly so I started moving towards the door. Suddenly, I saw something moving. I couldn’t see straight away what it was because it was in the dark. The “thing” then started walking towards me and I realised what it was. It was a medium sized, silver, robot one arm with a hand and the other with a rounded saw blade at the end of the other one.

I felt really scared at first because I thought it was going to attack me because of it’s saw, it was spinning. I looked at it and it looked at me back. We were both standing in a large distance away from each other. As if we are scared of each other. I then said to the robot “come closer, because I won’t hurt you”. So the robot came closer and slowly walked towards me. Its saw suddenly stopped spinning, and he put his hand out.

When I looked at the robot, I thought it was going to attack me, but it seems really friendly. It also seems sad; it’s always looking down at his saw. I wonder who created it. Maybe it’s got something to do with all the big machinery I saw earlier. I want to know why it was alone in here, I mean it doesn’t seem like a threat to anyone. It looks really sad, but I think it would make a perfect friend. The robot seems really shy, and its making me feel awkward and very uncomfortable. So I asked the robot, “can you understand me?” The robot replied, “yes, I’m sorry for scaring you, I didn’t mean to”. I said to the robot, “I didn’t mean to scare you, it’s a good thing I can understand you. So does anyone own you?” The robot replies, “no, I’m so lonely, I want someone as a friend. I need a friend I don’t like being lonely but humans are too scared of me. It’s probably to do with my saw, but it’s the only thing that is keeping me comfortable and I mean no harm. Neither does my saw”. So I said, “my name is Adam and I want to be your friend, you will never be alone any more because I’m looking for a friend, and you are the only one that understands me”.

So me and the robot were sitting down, and we felt more comfortable now than when we first met each other not long ago. Already we have both created a bond, and the vest thing is, we both understand each other. So I was really dying to ask the robot about the machines. “Can I ask you something. It’s about the machinery in this place. What are they used for”? Then the robot replied, “oh so you’ve seen them. Let me show you the machines. I was created by the machines”. I looked at the robot he looked like he is really sad. I feel sorry for it, but I’m going to cheer it up. “Don’t worry I’m not going to laugh at you just because you were created by machines. I think you are amazing”. It looked up at me and told me to follow it to the room which was full of machinery.

So we got to the room, which was dark, huge and dusty. I suppose it could have been a lot worse. So any way the robot gave me a tour.

It gave me a tour of the machine filled room, I was really interested in the machines.

I was first looking at the huge machine in the middle of the room. “What does this machine do?” I asked. “Oh that was what created me, my whole body, oh don’t worry it wont hurt you because its only been programmed to serve its owner. So these machine have only been used in a good way, and weren’t used to harm”, the robot replied. So I looked at it closely and the machine was just a conveyor belt with robotic arms hanging from the ceiling and there were some at the side. Then I looked at another machine. It reminded me of something but I forgot what it was. Anyway some of the things from it looked familiar, so I asked the robot about it. The robot said: “that machine is for getting cleaned in. I don’t know what it’s called but all I know is those giant things are brushes. You can use it if you want, because it won’t hurt you. It’s perfectly safe. I mean you don’t have to be made out of metal just to be able to use them”. I smiled at the robot, and I went to check out the machine with the giant things called “brushes”.

So I stood in the centre of the machinery, and the robot went to switch it on. I stared at the machine for a few seconds, then all of a sudden foam came out of the machine. There were some kind of small pipes spraying foam at me, and I was covered in it. I was covered in thick white foam. Then not long after the it stopped spraying foam at, it was then spraying water at me. Then not long after that the 3 brushes started spinning. At first it felt really weird, I thought I was going to get hurt. Then I got used to them because they are so soft. Then I got dried. Having been standing in that wash machine made me feel a lot cleaner.

[NikkiLovesCloud]

This is the last chapter for a while. Because I have to find the next one on my old computer.

The Killer Saws
Part 3

However, I went to the robot and it didn’t look very happy. It was shaking. So I asked: “what’s wrong?” The robot however did not reply.

So I decided to leave the robot by himself, because I felt like I was pressurising it, into telling me what is wrong. However, as I walked towards the door, the robot said: “wait, don’t leave me by myself. I don’t like being alone. I want you to stay here with me, because we are friends, who need each other”. I looked back at the robot and I smiled at it. So I said to it: “yeah it is true, we are friends who need each other. I want to help you, if there is something that’s bothering you then just tell me. I will try to help you the best I can”. I tried to cheer the robot up. It just seems so sad about something. Then the robot started to talking to me again, “There is something bothering me. The thing is I’ve not been honest with you. I should of told you this at first because it is important. You know how I said I was created, well I wasn’t the only one that was created. There is another robot some where and I’m worried he will come back to kill. He wants to destroy me, but he also wants to kill people. He is a black robot, with two saws for hands. He is very, very dangerous”. I was shocked that there was a killer on the loose, but it could be anywhere.
The robot continued explaining. “However, I did stop it years ago, but I only chained it up, I did not actually destroy it, I’m starting to think it could be in this place hiding, because I’ve been hearing some loud noises recently”. The robot seemed so scared when it was explaining, that his saw was spinning, and that he didn’t seem to have any control over it.

About minutes later, the robot’s saw stopped spinning. When it’s saw stopped, it looked up at me slowly. I really needed to say something to it because it seems so sad. So I said to it: “why are you so sad? It’s not your fault a killer robot is on the loose. You never created the thing, with two dangerous saws”. So the robot replied to me: “I’m sad because I’m a failure. I thought I chained that killer robot good and tight, but I don’t know how it could escape”. So I was thinking how could that killer robot set itself free from being chained up. “How strong is the killer robot’s saws?” I asked. The robot replied: “Really strong and powerful, but you don’t think it could of used it’s saws to break through the chains do you?” So I looked at the robot. “I don’t know exactly how it could of broken free from it’s chains, but it could be a possibility that it sawed through the chains”. The robot started walking towards one of the machines and I just caught it whispering, “why?” I did not know why it said that to the large machine, but maybe it has something to do with that killer robot.

So I decided to just leave the subject for now and just leave it for tomorrow because I am too tired to go looking for this killer robot. “Listen, let’s not worry about the killer robot now, because I think we should both have a rest now and worry about it tomorrow ok”. The robot looked at me and nodded it’s head. The robot walked with me to a room, which was where I was going to sleep. The room was really big, it had one big bed. The robot said to me: “I think it’s best we just rest, it’s a really good idea. Now if there is anything you need, just press that red button by the bed, and I will come to you”. Me and the robot said goodnight to each other. So the robot walked out of the room, and I just sat on my bed for a minute. Then I got into the bed and I went to sleep. So when I was asleep I was having a dream. The dream is weird, I think it’s a nightmare. Everything is all red then I see a shadow of something. I don’t know what it is but it’s trying to get close to me. I can only see it’s shadow, but it has got two saws on it’s arms. That sounds familiar, it’s like what the robot described to me about the killer robot. Hang on I’ve got a feeling it’s the killer robot, why would it be in my nightmare? Anyway, in my nightmare, I was like running away from it, but it was there every move I made. It got so close to me with it’s two saws, spinning like crazy, and making a loud noise. I woke up and screamed. I just hope I do not end up crossing the killer robot’s path because if I do, then he will just kill me.

[NikkiLovesCloud]

Ok

[NikkiLovesCloud]

What do you think of Adam?
What do you think of the robot?
What do you think of car washes?

[NikkiLovesCloud]

Please answer I need to know if I can publish this or not crying

[NikkiLovesCloud]

Please reply or I will be forced to do self harm crying I'm waiting.

[NikkiLovesCloud]

Please reply I want to get this story published

[Neurotripsy]

talk2hand Spelling mistakes.
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Among a zillion other problems.